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Topic Agree or Disagree: Help from the local community is crucial for raising children POINTS → discipline、safety、working parents、privacy 「肯定意見」 Iagree with the statement that help from the local community is crucial for raising children. There are two reasons to support this contention: the promotion in working for parents and the respect of discipline. These days, almost all the companies in Japan are facing the problem which is how they treat their employees who have children. In fact, these people, especially women, have difficulty in working. What the matters worse, many of them are forced to quit their job because of raising children. To deal with this problem, it is necessary for the local community to help parents raise children. Moreover, help from others will lead to promote the rate of women who continued working after childbirth. In other words, thanks to help from the local society, Japanese companies can improve their working environment. In addition to this, children will be sociable and polite if they are taken care of by another person of family. Also, children will realize the importance of cooperation with others. For these reasons, I strongly believe the local society should do more for parents who raise children.

至急😿😿(3)ってなんで4個のしきりじゃなくて5個なんですか！！

重要 例題35 数字の順列(数の大小関係が条件) 次の条件を満たす整数の組(a1, az, as, a4, as) の個数を求めよ。 (2) 0Sa」Sazhassasass3 基本 33,34 (1) 0<ai<a2<as<as<as<9 (3) a+aztastastas<3, a;20(i=1, 2, 3,4, 5) 8の8個の数字から異なる5個 指針>(1) ai, az, ……, as はすべて異なるから,1, 2, を選び,小さい順に a1, az, → 求める個数は組合せ&Cs に一致する。 (2)(1)とは違って, 条件の式に<を含むから,0, 1, 2, 3の 4個の数字から重複を許」 て5個を選び,小さい順に a, a2, 求める個数は重複組合せ Hs に一致する。 (3) おき換えを利用すると,不等式の条件を等式の条件に変更できる。 3-(a+az+as+astas)=bとおくと ataztastastas+b=3 また,aitaz+as+astas<3から よって,基本例題34(1) と同様にして求められる。 ………, as を対応させればよい。 asを対応させればよい。 一等式 620 解答 8の8個の数字から異なる5個を選び, 小さい …, as とすると, 条件を満たす組が1つ決ま 検討 うにして解くこともできる。 (2) 「.348 検討の方法の利 (2), (3) は次のよ 順に a1, a2, る。 7 用] 6:=a:+i(i=1, 2, 3, 4, 5) とすると, 条件は よって,求める組の個数は (2) 0, 1, 2, 3の4個の数字から重複を許して5個を選び, 小 さい順に a1, a2, 決まる。 よって,求める組の個数は (3) 3-(a+az+as+as+as)=b とおくと ataztas+a4+as+b=3, a;20(i=1, 2, 3, 4, 5), b20 よって, 求める組の個数は, ① を満たす0以上の整数の組の 個数に等しい。これは異なる6個のものから3個取る重複組 合せの総数に等しく 別解 a+az+dstastas=k(k=0, 1, 2, 3) を満たす0以 上の整数の組(a,, az, as, as, as)の数は sHeであるから sHo+sH」+H2+sHs=.Co+sCi+C2+,C3 8Cs=&C=56 (個) 0<bくb2くbsくb4<bょく9 と同値になる。よって, ((1)の結果から 56個 (3) 3個の○と5個の仕切り を並べ, 例えば, TO|I○○|| の場合は (0, 1, 0, 2, 0)を表すと 考える。このとき, AIB|C|D|E|F とすると, A, B, C, D, asとすると,条件を満たす組が1つ Hs=4+5-1Cs=&Cs=56 (個) の Eの部分に入る○の数をそ れぞれ a1, a2, as, A4, Us とすれば組が1っ決まるか sC。=56(個) Hs=6+3-1C3=&C3=56 (個) ら =1+5+15+35=56 (個)

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1「~する(人)」 Audrey Hepburn was an actress who did a lot of charity work. I applaud all the baseball players whose careers have encouraged young children. The scientist who [whom] I admire the most is Stephen Hawking. >目的格の who [whom] は省略されることが多い

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魔女1 BA 女2 ) 彼らは次の映画を作る予定があります。They ( a/ have /make / to/plan) their next movie. 次の文の()内に適するものをア~エから選び, 1記号で答えなさい。 問 B We went to the park yesterday ( 1 1 次の日本文を英文にしなさい。 D 今,何もすることがありません。 (nothing を使って6巻で) )Howers. ア see イ saw ウ to see エ to sawW ロ Mary has something ( ) to her mother. (ユ) ア say イ to say ウ 口2) 私はテレビを見るために早く宅しました。 キキ1 says エ said 口3) Kyoto has many places ( キキ2 ア visits イ visiting ) 早く寝ることはとても大切です。 ウ visit エ to visit (は) 口(4) To read books ( ) very interesting. トンボ 2 あなたが高校に入学後、取り組んでみたいことを1つ取り上げ、 そのことについて内につがりの ある英文3文以上で書きなさい。 ア is イ ウ are am エ be (曲) トンボ 2 次の2つの文をほぼ同じ意味を表す1つの文に書きかえるとき, 空所に適語を書きなさい。 ジグ1 ロ I have no money. I cannot buy a new guitar. 口(1) I have no money ジ2 bue a new guitar. Jane often goes to Tokyo. She takes a lotof pictures there. to (庫) ■3 次の恵子 (Keiko) の日記を読んで、 あとの問いに答えなさい。 キャス 口2) Jane often goes to Tokyo Thursday. January 10 Ta there Toke alot of pictures. Mr, Yoshida said to us, "To write is a good *way to study Engliah." His English class is fun and he speaks English very well. He talka about a lot of things is English 1want to speak English like Mr. Yoshida, He also said, "You learned some English Words, Try to use them. Write about your school life and friends. To write English キャス I heard the news. So I was-glad. 夏(3) I was glad To Mear the news. 5 3 次の文を( )内の指示にしたがって書きかえなさい。 口1) Tom has a lotof work to do, (疑問文に) every day is important." So Iwwill do it from today. Monday, January 21 Does Tonl hawe aot of work to de 口2) Do you want anything fo drink? (cold を補って) Do yar Mant uathing Cold イa dpink? 口3) Igot up early to walk my dog. 不線部が答えの中心となる疑問文に) thy dd you get up early 14) Iwant to be a scientist in the future. (下線部が答えの中心となる疑問文に) In the morning. Kumi said to me in the classroom, "You played the piano very well at the concert yesterday! I was there with my sister." I didn't know that. So I was 10| surprised.Kumi and I talked about music and we had a good time. She also likes music. She said, "I want to listen to your music again," I was happy to hear those Words. Iwant to play the piano well, so I practice for two hours every day. (注)ay 方法 MaT do yau Want To be in the fiuture? ) 吉田先生(Mr. Yoshida) は, 英語を書くうえでのアドバイスを3つしました。 それらを日本語で きなさい。 4 次の日本文に合うように, ( )内の語を並べかえなさい。 L) 母は車を使うのが好きではありません。 Mv mother ( to / does/ like/ not / use ) a ca. My mother doés a car. hat.ke 口2) 私はそのことを聞いて残念です。 (am/to/ sorry/ hear/1) that. 10 Use that. 口2) 恵子が下線部のように感じた理由を, 日本語で具体的に書きなさい。 す。 hear 3)私たちは9時に働き始めました。 fto/ began / we / at/ work) nine. nine. Ne belon to 4OM 口3) 次の質問に英語で答えなさい。 How many hours does Keiko practice the piano every day? (6-7で They_haie their next movie. t make A Dlan have Pan to make

英語分かりません(´・ω・｀) かぎかっこの中の問題です。 21から最後まで

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Music During Surgery? (e) 2-37 Scientists have found that the soothing effect of music benefits patients having eye surgery. Studies show that those who listened to their choice of music during surgery had a significantly lower heart rate and blood pressure than patients who did not listen to music. Heart rate and blood pressure of all patients increased the morning of surgery.. However, these measures of cardiovascular stress dropped significantly in the music group within ten minutes of tuning in, and remained low throughout the surgery. The stress from surgery was lower among the music patients, but their ability to cope was higher. These ratings confirm the benefits of music during surgery. It has also been noted in other studies that surgeons who play music of their choice during surgery feel that it relieves stress and improves their performance. In the words of one researcher, “If music was a drug, everyone would want it. Patients like it. It's cheap and effective, and has no negative side effects." NOTES: soothing 「(神経や感情を)静める」 cardiovascular 「心 (臓)血管の」cardio は heart の意. side effect「(薬物などの)副作 用」

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For most of the 20th century, magnetic north was located around the northern parts of molten iron in the earth's core which affect how the earth's magnetic field behaves. What is surprising to scientists is the speed at which the pole has been moving in recent years. magnetic poles, on the other hand, are ( ア ) moving. This fact has several implications poles are located at the northernmost and southernmost ends of the earth. The location of the Shifts in the position of the North Magnetic Pole are nothing new. Since 1831, scientists Earth has two sets of poles: the geographic poles and the magnetic poles. The geographic have been tracking its location. The movements are caused by changes in the flow of swirling for navigation and transportation. Canada. It drified around, moving slowiy north at an ( イ ) speed of approximately 10 MIometers per year. In recent decades. that rate has increased significantly to about 3 KIIometers per year. The North Magnetic Pole is nowmoving away from Canada toward eastern Russia. While scientists can't fully explain how changes in the earth's molten core are affecting the pole's movement, they can map the earth's magnetic field. Doing so allows them to (ウ ) the rate of change over time. This, in turn, provides information on how the magnetic field may shift in the future. Information on changes to the earth's magnetic field is used to produce the World Magnetic Model (WMM). This model is used as the basis for all forms of modern navigation, from how ships move at sea to mapping software in smartphones. ( エ ) inthe model, caused by shits in the real location of the North Magnetic Pole, can seriously impact almost all forms of moderntransportation. The model is updated every five years, but in 2018, during routine checks of the 2015- 2020 model cycle, scientists noticed a problem. Because of the rapidly shifting pole, the WMM was close to being outside the acceptable limits for navigational errors. This forced the release of an updated version of the model. was revised ( オ ) in2020, and the current version is expected to last until 2024. As well as keeping track of the WMM's accuracy, scientists continue investigating why the magnetic ficld is changing so dramatically. This essential work will ensure a safe journey for everyone navigating their way through the world.

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例3.次の英文は 「磁極の移動」について述べたものです。(ア) ~ (オ) に入れ る最も適当なものを選択肢から選びなさい。 Earth has two sets of poles: the geographic poles and the magnetic poles. The geographic poles are located at the northernmost and southernmost ends of the earth. The location of the magnetic poles, on the other hand, are ( ア ) moving. This fact has several implications for navigation and transportation. Shifts in the position of the North Magnetic Pole are nothing new. Since 1831, scientists have been tracking its location. The movements are caused by changes in the flow of swirling molten iron in the earth's core which affect how the earth's magnetic field behaves. What is surprising to scientists is the speed at which the pole has been moving in recent years. For most of the 20th century, magnetic north was located around the northern parts of Canada. It drifted around, moving slowly north at an ( イ) speed of approximately 10 kilometers per year. In recent decades, that rate has increased significantly to about 55 kilometers per year, The North Maggnetic Pole is now moving away from Canada toward eastern Russia. While scientists can't fully explain how changes in the earth's molten core are affecting the pole's movement, they can map the earth's magnetic field. Doing so allows them to ( ウ ) the rate of change over time. This, in turn, provides information on how the magnetic field may shift in the future. Information on changes to the earth's magnetic field is used to produce the World Magnetic Model (WMM). This model is used as the basis for all forms of modern navigation, from how ships move at sea to mapping software in smartphones. ( エ ) inthe model、 caused by shifts in the real location of the North Magnetic Pole, can seriously impact almost all foms of modern transportation. The model is updated every five years, but in 2018, during routine checks of the 2015- 2020 model cycle, scientists noticed a problem, Because of the rapidly shifting pole, the WMIM was close to being outside the acceptable limits for navigational errors. This forced the release of an updated version of the model, It was revised (オ ) in2020, and the current version is expected to last until 2024, As well as kecping track of the WMM's accuracy, scientists continue investigating why the magnetic ficld is changing so dramatically, This essential work will ensure a safe joumey for everyone navigating their way through the world.