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英作文の添削をお願いしたいです🙇‍♀️ I can save the plastic. For example, when I go to the supermarket, I take my bag. I don't have to get the plastic bag... Read More

things, or try to do something else. Even students can do something asa small "step. Wha Japanese cra people who need them. Moe will 4 次の environmental problems(環境問題)についての英文を読んで, あなたの、 suffering from getting larger. problems. Some 本文のあとに[注)があります。 (10点) desert areas are water pollution. Forest areas are getting smaller, and It is important for each of you to think of these problems as your own can you do now ? ~を引き起こす desert……砂漠 【注」cause ~…… step………一歩 environmentally friendly………環境にやさしい 【条件)下線部の質問に対するあなたの考えを,その理由が伝わるように書きなさい。 [記入上の注意) 0 【記入例】にならって, 解答欄の下線」 *符号(,.?!など)は語数に含めません。 * 50語を超える場合は,解答欄の破線 で示された行におさまるように書きなさい。 ② 英文の数は問いません。 【下書き欄】は,必要に応じて使ってかまいません。 【記入例) hoe の上に1語ずつ書きなさい。 00 ods e 3) Hi! I'm Nancy. I'm from America. Where are you from? is April is Ken's birthday, too. 2, 2004. It 50語 1991 2nd

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TOEIC・English Undergraduate

英検に向けて英作文を書きました 添削や「こうしたらもっと良くなる」という点がありましたら、ぜひコメントよろしくお願いします🙇‍♂️ 客観的な意見を取り入れて、今後さらに良い作文を書きたいと思うので、ご協力お願いします

Topic Agree or Disagree: Help from the local community is crucial for raising children POINTS → discipline、safety、working parents、privacy 「肯定意見」 Iagree with the statement that help from the local community is crucial for raising children. There are two reasons to support this contention: the promotion in working for parents and the respect of discipline. These days, almost all the companies in Japan are facing the problem which is how they treat their employees who have children. In fact, these people, especially women, have difficulty in working. What the matters worse, many of them are forced to quit their job because of raising children. To deal with this problem, it is necessary for the local community to help parents raise children. Moreover, help from others will lead to promote the rate of women who continued working after childbirth. In other words, thanks to help from the local society, Japanese companies can improve their working environment. In addition to this, children will be sociable and polite if they are taken care of by another person of family. Also, children will realize the importance of cooperation with others. For these reasons, I strongly believe the local society should do more for parents who raise children.

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