英検準一級ライティングです。 添削等お願いしますm(_ _)m points ・construction costs ・effect on local people ・spending by visitors ・the environment

Q, is it a good idea that governments to build tourist sites such as theme parks and museums. A,lagree with the idea that local governments should build tourist sites such as theme parks and museums. This will be an opportunity to save money in order to deal with accidents and keep their population. Firstly, if local governments do not build tourist sites, the government can save a lot of money because construction costs are very expensive. Thus the governments can use the money in order to treat troubles such as epidemics or disasters. Moreover, if the governments construct tourist sites, more and more tourists visit the local regions. Thus, the number of people who want to live there quietly increases. For these reasons, I do not think it necessary that local governments should build tourist sites such as theme parks and museums.

英検2級です。添削お願いします！ 過去問のライティングです！

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英検二級の英作文の問題です。 添削お願いします。

4 一次試験·筆記 問題編 p.32 トピックの訳 若者は自分の将来の職業について考えることにもっと時間を使うべきだ と言う人がいます。あなたはこの意見に同意しますか。 ポイントの訳 教育 収入 技能 解答例) I do not think that young people should spend more time thinking about their future careers. First, schools already offer career education. For example, there are classes where students can learn about jobs and careers, and schools often invite guest speakers to talk about their experiences in society. Second, young people should try different kinds of jobs instead of only thinking about a future career. By experiencing these jobs, they d songuo can find what skills and abilities they have. In conclusion, I do not believe young people should spend a lot of time thinking about their future careers. 解答例の訳 若者は自分の将来の職業について考えることにもっと時間を使うべきだ とは思いません。第1に、学校がすでに職業教育を提供しています。 例 えば,学生が仕事や職業について学ぶことができる授業があって,学校 は社会での経験について話してくれるゲストスピーカーをしばしば招き ます。第2に,将来の職業についてただ考える代わりに, 若者はさまざ まな種類の仕事を試してみるべきです。これらの仕事を経験することに よって,彼らはどんな技能と能力を自分が持っているかを見つけ出すこ とができます。結論として, 若者は自分の将来の職業について考えるこ

英検準一級ライティングです。 添削等お願いしますm(_ _)m points, ・globalization ・Government policies ・price ・quality

Q, Do you think that Japanese consumers will buy more imported products in the future. A,I do not agree with the idea that Japanese consumers will buy more imported products. This will be an opportunity to save money and to keep products working longer. Firstly, the consumers do not buy imported products, the consumers are able to save money because most imported products are expensive. Thus, the consumers can spend their money doing their favorite things. Moreover, if the consumers buy not imported products but products made in Japan, the consumers can use the products for a long time because imported products are fragile such as the smartphones made in china. Thus, the consumers will not need to buy one again. For these reasons, I don't think Japanese consumers will buy imported products in the future.

関係詞 314 as=the case with these affairs=the rumorでしょうか？？

312 彼女は, 次のオリンピック大会では金メダルをとると思われている前途有望な競泳選手で 120 ● Part 1 文法 hom we think will us のとなる地 311 Are you doing what ( you think you are right 3 you think is right ② you think it is right ④ itis think right (日本工大) you Aamt08! ; 岡係代名詞と、 が such A-関係、 312 She is a LU medal at the next Olympic Games. (昭和女子大) よってきwhom lは主持の とも行詞に such があれば roks を先行詞とし、 a 上記以タ外に制限用法で 0先行詞にas があ ) the same がある *the same A の Point 084 313 どうか彼に, 自分のためになるような本だけを読むようにと助言」 □□ てください。 Please advise him to read only such ( him/ will / books / as / benefit). 〈国土舘大) 314 こうした事柄の通例として,そのうわさはたちまち町中に広がった。 ロ(these / case / the / affairs / is / as / with ), the rumor swept through the town. 象の文内容が先行詞一 開係代名詞 as は,非 の次の内容を先行詞と 本間は後の文の内容を the case (with A) A「Aには)いつも ることが多い。本問 トこの2sを関係代名詞 なく、節内で代名詞 る。 〈立命館大) 315 (a) Everyone has weaknesses. (b) There is no one ( ) has weaknesses. ① but ② who ③ that ④ than 〈関西学院大) 316 必要以上にお金を使ってはいけない。(1語不要) ロロ□ Don't (is / money / more / need / needed / spend / than ). gorh ate D yd bolli aw noitizog sdil 自em 〈学習院大) odw のチ 6 ofw 外 さる なこ で0い 文の本 0祭Hgnods one るえ見そ 人 LV+21 :1 外調 2ppontpr pe 2 gpoLonkppa coubercur 35 関係代名詞 but (=t\ 異係代名詞 but は、 確の意味が含ます 固定意 入試では今でも のさ こるを調習 あのdie の 分開 士 文英 6 関係代名詞的りに用し 行詞に比較級の では more moneey 311 あなたは, 正しいと思うことをしていますか。 す。 315 (a) 人は誰にでも, 弱点がある。 (b) 弱点のない人はいない。 312h した地 esedars

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英検２級の筆記問題を添削して頂きたいです。m(_ _)m

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