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22年度第1回筆訂 4 Write an ssay given TOPIC. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. .Suggested length: 120-150 words answer sheet. Write your essay in the space provided on Side B of your Any writing outside the space will not be graded. TOPIC Should people's salaries be based on their job performance? POINTS ⚫Age Spend 2 Go fishin Company profits Motivation C . Skills 3 K 生産性が上がる→会社の利益につながる 多くのお金を得る。 barinqon gni 社員とする→お金をもらうため。 1 Her 2 Her 3. She borilep Show and worker IS E スキルをもつため。 TI by 1990sm or so of togiot H S No. 11 1 Shanti soli jon bib ogni giring. E.M

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1 身のまわりの現象 (1) 図2 観察者 光について,次の実験を行った。 これについて、あとの問いに答えなさい。 実験1 図1のように4色にぬり分けた円板を 用意し,これを図2,3のように,鏡,直角 に合わせた2枚の鏡を用いて観察した。 実験2 水平な発泡ポリスチレンの板の上に, 鏡1, 2, 光を通さないついたて 6本の まち針を垂直に立てた。 図4は、その配置を 真上から見たようすで,A~Fはまち針をさした位置を表している。図4 点Pの位置で,一方の目をまち針の頭の高さに合わせて、まち針の 図3 図 1 観察者 直角に 合わせた 2枚の鏡 〈福井 > 円板 2 -板・ 1 鏡1 鏡2 88 見え方を観察した。ただし,もう一方の目は閉じている。 9(1 IB (1) 次の文のa~dにあてはまる最も適当なものを、あとのア~エか 「ら1つずつ選びなさい。ただし、同じ記号を何度使ってもよい。 (S E 実験1では,観察者から見て、 図2では赤色が AT a に,青色が P D bに見え、図3では赤色がc に,青色がd に見える。 ア上 下 (S) ウ右エ左 IS FA191 a b C d (2)実験2で,鏡1にうつって見えるが, 直接は見ることができないのは,どの点にさしたまち針か。最も適 当なものを, A~Fから1つ選びなさい。 (5) 655~52 (3)実験2で,点Cにさしたまち針はどちらの鏡にもうつっていないが,鏡の位置を変えると,うつって見え るようになった。このとき鏡をどのように移動したか。 最も適当なものを,次のア~エから1つ選びなさい。 (1) FRE TO ア鏡1だけを2マス① の向きへ イ鏡1だけを4マス②の向きへ ウ鏡2だけを2マス③の向きへ の向きへ エ鏡2だけを5マス ③の向きへ (S) F 2 次の実験について, あとの問いに答えなさい。 図1 ガニ 位 め

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To Like "I. Think so. I have two reasons. First, children come reading books. I think reading books is important because They can learn many things. Second, children and their parents are able to have a good time with books. Book events make this time which so important. Therefore, I believe book events for children is amazing.

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火 mon or I think borrowing books from libraries is better. I have two reasons. First, people can read many books for free. They don't have to pay to read the book. Second, they are be able to return books which they had read. By doing this trash will decrease. Therefore, I believe that borrowing books from libraries is amazing.

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Unfortunately, many of the soldiers' letters were never delivered to the mainland. On February 19, the US Forces started to invade the island. After fighting from underground shelters for a month, almost all of Kuribayashi's soldiers were killed. About five months later, World War II ended. After the war, some letters were returned to Japan from the US. They had been taken from Iwoto by the American soldiers. The following is one such letter. Sadly, the family members of the writer have not been found yet. Father, Mother, Torao, Kei, Eizo, Tadashi, Otaka, Sueharu, Tatsumi, Fumiko, and Tatsuko. I would like to wish you all good health and a long life. Father and Mother, please take good care of yourselves as you are getting older.

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I really feel sorry for you, hearing how your hands get cold and cracked because of the cold weather and water in winter. Whenever you use water, make sure you dry your hands and then rub them until they get warm. (December 11, 1944) This letter was written by Kuribayashi Tadamichi to his wife. He was a commander on Iwoto, a battlefield during World War II. He wrote many letters to her from there. Iwoto is a small flat island that lies 1,250 km south of Tokyo. One of the hardest battles between Japan and the US was fought there. The island was a very important place for both the US and Japan. For Japan, it was the last base to protect the mainland.

英検２級 ライティング 添削お願いします。 It is sometimes said that Japanese people do not need to study English anymore. Do you agree with this opinion? 回答... Read More

なさい。 ただし、こ の外に PIC か ます。 ④ライティング解答欄 示事項を守り、文字は、はっきりと分かりやすく書いて下さい。 太枠に囲まれた部分のみが採点の対象です。 No, I don't agree with this opinion. I have two reasons. Firstly, it is useful for Japanese people to learn English. studying English Contributes to reading or speaking English easily and As a idy result we we can get some friends who live in foreign countries. 6 10 Secondly, technology is one of the critical factor Japanese technology is lover than US china. or U.K. therefore we have to study foreign language to learn technology in comesas For these reasons, I believe that Japanese people I need to Study English 15

英検２級 ライティング添削お願いいたします！ Today in Japan, many buildings and public areas have a lot of lights for decoration, such as the lights used durin... Read More

Yes, First, • I think 50 I have two reasons. to see it is good for tourism a lot of lights for decoration. Seeing beautiful lights contributes to relaxing As a result, tourism will be happy And tourism will come back the place again to travel. Second, safety is one of the critical factors. Many lights make us safety. For these reasons, I believe that Increasing the number of buildings and public. areas than have many lights for decoration is good.

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