Question

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英検２級 ライティング添削お願いいたします！
Today in Japan, many buildings and public areas have a lot of lights for decoration, such as the lights used during Christmas. Do you think this is a good idea?
POINTS
• Safety
• The environment
• Tourism

Yes,
First,
•
I think
50 I have two reasons.
to see
it is good for tourism
a lot of lights for decoration.
Seeing beautiful lights contributes to relaxing
As a result, tourism will be happy
And tourism will come back the place again to travel.
Second, safety is one of the critical factors.
Many lights make us safety.
For these reasons,
I believe that
Increasing the number of buildings and public.
areas than have many lights for decoration
is good.