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Topic Agree or Disagree: Help from the local community is crucial for raising children POINTS → discipline、safety、working parents、privacy 「肯定意見」 Iagree with the statement that help from the local community is crucial for raising children. There are two reasons to support this contention: the promotion in working for parents and the respect of discipline. These days, almost all the companies in Japan are facing the problem which is how they treat their employees who have children. In fact, these people, especially women, have difficulty in working. What the matters worse, many of them are forced to quit their job because of raising children. To deal with this problem, it is necessary for the local community to help parents raise children. Moreover, help from others will lead to promote the rate of women who continued working after childbirth. In other words, thanks to help from the local society, Japanese companies can improve their working environment. In addition to this, children will be sociable and polite if they are taken care of by another person of family. Also, children will realize the importance of cooperation with others. For these reasons, I strongly believe the local society should do more for parents who raise children.

TOEICの文法問題です。 解説のところの″述語動詞を修飾するのは副詞なので、″の意味がよく分かりません。 解説お願いしたいです。

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ミドリの蛍光ペンで引いている部分がなぜそうなるのか分からないので教えてほしいです💦

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この問題について教えてもらえるとありがたいです

Reorder the words and phrases to make imperative sentences. Write complete sentences. 59. the children / tell / to hide 60. from one / count / to fifty / then 61. “Here I come!”/ say / very loudly / after counting. 62. find / run / and / the children

ここの問題を教えて頂けるとたすかります。

Reorder the words and phrases to make imperative sentences. Write complete sentences. 59. the children / tell / to hide 60. from one / count / to fifty / then 61. “Here I come!”/ say / very loudly / after counting, 62. find / run / and / the children

至急、文法の間違いがないかチェックをお願いしたいです！！！！英文は高校生レベルです。 ①Q. What do you want to do for African countries? アフリカの国々に何をしてあげたいですか？ A. I want to donate m... 続きを読む

英検準一級の英作文の添削をお願いします。見にくいところがあれば言ってください。

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この設問1の英文のように設問2ではtable2をみて英作文をしなければならないのですが、全くどう始めたら良いか分からないので教えて頂きたいです。

第2問 2019 Percentage Total population (including foreign residents) 2019* change in population 2000-2019 (%) Prefecture (alphabetical order) 2010 2000 +1.76 5,104,000 5,015,699 5,071,968 -10.31 Fukuoka 1,602,000 Kagoshima 1,786,194 1,706,242 -5.99 1,748,000 Kumamoto 1,859,344 1,817,426 -8.29 1,073,000 Miyazaki 1,170,007 28 1,135,233 -12.50 1,327,000 Nagasaki 1,516,523 1,426,779 -7.05 1,135,000 Oita 1,221,140 1,196,529 +10.22 1,453,000 Okinawa 1,318,220 1,392,818 -7.03 815,000 Saga 876,654 849,788 -3.43 14,257,000 All Kyushu 14,763,781 14,596,783 * estimated data Data adapted from: Statistics Dashboard, Statistics Bureau, Ministry of Internal Affairs and Communications. Retrieved on June 25, 2020 from https://dashboard.e-stat.go.jp/en/ TABLE 2: Average number of elementary school students per elementary school in Japan in 2000, 2010 and 2019 Average number of elementary school students per Number of elementary Number of elementary Year school students schools elementary school 2000 7,366,079 24,106 305.6 2010 6,993,376 22,000 317.9 2019 6,368,550 19,738 322.7 Data adapted from:

丸つけたところ答えです。 どれか一つだけとかでもいいので、 問題の解説お願いします！！

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