英検準1級の英作文の添削をお願いします。見にくいところがあれば言ってください。 Points Health Male-female equality Salaries Work-life balance

Date No Topic Topic: Do componies need to improve the way they treat their wates? | think Companies need to impreve the way they treat their workers. - I have twe reasens to support my opinion in termns of health and Salaries. Fist. Companies shauld adeiisate their workers' health. 2 If workers have an illnes and canmot wack esily, a lot. of. (2 Companies wald be Coniesed to manage. Companies need to do 経営こど?) health check for workne health. It is good for (o Companies and I Workers to check halth. I think this is an adrontage each other. 12 Second, Cormpanies have to raise salaries, Some Workers de not lc be paid salaries for extra tasks, They will be very ticed and ? have an illes, It is not good for them fo work hard. 12 For these reasons, Companies have (mprove the wey they treat their workers.

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Composition 左ページの例文を応用して書こう。 On it 1) 私は公園に散歩に出かけた。 そしてそこでこの財布を見つけた。 (8) Ved vimo. uo オ ぶ大谷期貸単 a * wallet 財布 go for a walk 散歩に出かける

英検準一級のライティングで、POINTS を2つ使って、、と書かれているのですか、POINTS の言葉をそのまま英作文に取り入れないといけないのでしょうか？？誰か教えて欲しいです！お願いします🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️

Grade Pre-1 4 English Composition Write an essay on the given TOPIC. Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. n Linm caretly o Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words Write your essay in the space provided on Side Any writing outside the space will not be graded. of your answer sheet. TOPIC Is it a good idea for local governments to build tourist sites, such as theme parks and museums? 1 think it s a go0d idea fonulocal gorerments, te Puild touristらiteni ら0ch as theme Parks andnmuneums. I nave two reabons itosuppOrmfor ri my opinion. Fir気れ10f.all, theme parks ond mnseumo are effected on vocal.ie. peopie. Because POINTS Construction costs Efect on local people Spending by visitors The environment laned, How lontg You cyuld plck diem son The tetal would be S12 h en canceled Tdock train to Ketb ady, he e Did1o

英検準一級のwritingです。誰か、採点して欲しいです！できれば、この文を改善したものも教えて頂きたいです！お願いします！🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️ 文字数が全然足りないのですが、どうしたらいいですか？😢 《 書きたかったこと 》 ・野菜は低価格なので、他の食べ物よりも安く買え... 続きを読む

Grade Pre-1 20125 4 English Composition 40160×2,80~100 20025 2644 Write an essay on the given TOPIC. Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words Write your essay in the space provided on Side B of your answer sheet. Any writing outside the space will not be graded. TOPIC Agree or disagree: More people should become vegetarians in the future I agree that more people bhould beconme ne vegetarions in the future.1 nave two reasons t0 6upport my Opinion TO Degin witn, vegetablen ore cheaper tnan food or fion, meal. flour. And, becaube it is lewa Costi people (con Duいy vegetables. se0ond, eating vegetables is very healtn.I+l's contained many nutriteク 50, chiloren ana clderly vecome very うtronger. TPere f ore , I think trat many peOPle bhould become veget&rians more than now. POINTS Animal rights Cost Environment Health

英検二級のwritingの添削、どなたかお願いします。 17年度1回です。

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今度大学の入試で英語を受けるのですが コミュ英IとIIと英語表現Iって範囲どこですか？何を勉強すればいいですか？ 教えてくださいよろしくお願い致します

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uided ComposiTion: AMake paragroph. 田 の例を参考に次図のような紙から箱を作る instructions を書いてみましょう う。