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No. Date Topici Do you think that rich Countries should do more to help poor countries develop? I think that rich countrieshould do more to help poor Countries develop. I have two reasons to suport my opinion in terms of inequality and economic grouth Ficst, rich countries should help por Countries to be equal level. For evample, they teoch science Technalogy, donate and bild public faciliy such as a hospital and school. IH por Countries and t is important to decrease the nunber of gapof living level. 生活水準の差

ミドリの蛍光ペンで引いている部分がなぜそうなるのか分からないので教えてほしいです💦

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緑の蛍光ペンでひいている部分がなぜそうなるのか分からないので教えてほしいです💦

(6) I did not call on him yesterday for ( の anxiety 2 trouble 3 fear ④ care )Imight disturb him. (北海学園大) (6) 3 (7) As ( の soon )as l am a student, I must study hard. (聖学院大) 2 well 3 long ④ far (8) The session is to begin ( ) eleven in the morning. (札幌大) O in 2 at ③ from ④ on (9) I hope to learn French ( O during 2 for ③ while ④ until )my stay in Paris. (早稲田大) (10) ( ) you agree or not, I will not change my mind. (四天王寺国際仏教大) の Though ② While ③ Whether ④ Either (10) (11) 彼女は彼より5つ若い。 (武蔵大) She is younger than he ( O by 2 with ③ for ④ at ) five years. ) the south of Europe. (西南学院大) 3 for の at but (13) 医者は事故の方へ走っていた。(慶鷹義塾大) (12) Italy is ( O in 2 on 大) (12) _メ 1 ) the direction of the accident. The doctor was running ( O to 2 for ③ on ④ in (13) _/ 4 イ吉田+N +\

以下のoneについてone* は何を示しているのでしょうか。 The effect of atomic size on bond energy can be seen in the seriesC-halogen. The smaller the halogen atom... 続きを読む

赤線で引いてる部分がうまく訳せません。どなたか説明お願いいたします。よろしくお願いいたします。

) change) In the middle of the next ( 4 ), an 18.6-year lunar cycle will flip into a れた Aの発 phase that amplifies ( 5 ). It's called the moon's “wobble.” The ( 6 ), along with [ an ] ( 7 )slimate-driven rise in 年 た げnてい、 phenome non epeuéd sea levels by then, will mean that some coastal cities will see (_8 ) seasons lasting a month or longer. worning Treanent flood Climate (4)_decade tilec

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Reorder the words and phrases to make imperative sentences. Write complete sentences. 59. the children / tell / to hide 60. from one / count / to fifty / then 61. “Here I come!”/ say / very loudly / after counting. 62. find / run / and / the children

ここの問題を教えて頂けるとたすかります。

Reorder the words and phrases to make imperative sentences. Write complete sentences. 59. the children / tell / to hide 60. from one / count / to fifty / then 61. “Here I come!”/ say / very loudly / after counting, 62. find / run / and / the children

写真の問題を教えてください 流体工学の問題です

4. A simple accelerometer can be made froma U-tube containing water as in 200mm Figure. 1) When the acceleration of a car with the U-tube is a [m/s?] in the horizontal direction (x-direction), find the relation between a and the level difference h [m]. 2) When H vertical tubes at a = 0 is 250 mm, find the maximum accelaration which h = 400 mm and the water level ho for both H h。 can be measured by this accelarometer. Use g = 9.8 m/s? and pwater = 1000 kg/m?. y water x

位相幾何学 2種トーラス、ホモロジー群、サイクル このxとyがこのように表されるのはなぜでしょうか？教えてください

Z4 Z2 K Express the cycles x and y using Z1,22,23, and z4. /Z1 サイクルx,yを Z1,22,Z3, Z4を用いて表わせ K K X y= Z1 + Z3 x = Z2 - Z4

定積分の計算で∫∂/∂x～～～dxというような形の式があるのですが、この場合 ∂/∂xがあるので先に～～～の部分をxで微分してからxで定積分するということでしょうか。

This assumption may be valid because the air column being considered is deeper than the nocturnal turbulent boundary layer. QE is the latent heat flux which is released into the air column with the phase change of water vapor. When there is no phase change of water vapor, QE=0. QR is the heat flux of the long wave radiation and defined by QR=pC * a 0z where (30 /a1), s the warming rate of air due to convergence of long wave radiation, L t(z) and L(2) are the upward and downward long wave radiation at a height of z respectively. Among several kinds of calculation methods for long wave radiation (Stephens, 1984), formulae