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Topic Agree or Disagree: Help from the local community is crucial for raising children POINTS → discipline、safety、working parents、privacy 「肯定意見」 Iagree with the statement that help from the local community is crucial for raising children. There are two reasons to support this contention: the promotion in working for parents and the respect of discipline. These days, almost all the companies in Japan are facing the problem which is how they treat their employees who have children. In fact, these people, especially women, have difficulty in working. What the matters worse, many of them are forced to quit their job because of raising children. To deal with this problem, it is necessary for the local community to help parents raise children. Moreover, help from others will lead to promote the rate of women who continued working after childbirth. In other words, thanks to help from the local society, Japanese companies can improve their working environment. In addition to this, children will be sociable and polite if they are taken care of by another person of family. Also, children will realize the importance of cooperation with others. For these reasons, I strongly believe the local society should do more for parents who raise children.

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Questions 5-7 refer to the following letter. a new member to the club To welcome confirm To | continued membership Mr. Leonardo Harper 571-45 Heiligenstàdter Street Vienna 1190 の) December 15 Dear Mr. Harper, Thank you for your continued support of the North Vienna Concert Hall We are writing to confirm receipt on December 14 of your North Vienna Club membership renewal payment for next year. Alnterviews with musicians To celebrate our 30 year anniversary, we are happy to announce some new special benefits for club members. Starting next year, club members can receive a 10% discount on any concert held during the first three months of the year. Call our ticket office at 1-5123098 and use the promotional code CZ1713 when you order your tickets. Please note that discounts only apply to pre-orders placed during this special period. IC) Commentaries on 0 The concert schedule performances As always, members will receive our monthly magazine, North Vienna Club, which features concert reviews and interviews with various artists and musicians, together with news and schedules of all of the events at the concert hall. Next month's issue will feature a six-page interview with the world famous conductor Franz Minsky. Once again, we thank you for being a North Vienna Club member and for supporting arts and music in our community. Sincerely, Roy Pophins Roy Hopkins Director North Vienna Concert Hall の の)

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¥ Samuel Pepys is the earliest diary- keeper that is famous today. for it gives personal insight into London's Great Plague and the Great Fire. Pepys took diary writing from the realm of business to the individual. His diary is being published on the Internet, and it is interesting to note that there has beena new entry every day since Anne Frars 1929-194。 n January of 2003. It will continue over the course of several years to come. Reading his diary is fascinating. and it makes his life all the more real to us. 63 Today's electronic version of the diary, the web READING PASSAGE log, or “blog," has once again stretched the diary to fopic sentences and supporting sentences of each paragraph be much more than a personal account of the dav's events. There are blogs to document recipes, traveling. ロ movies, independent news, product announcements, allowance." It refers to a book for fragmentary writings by date and is photos, and anything else that needs to be recorded over time. Search engines like Technorati.com have 会 the six volumes of Samuel Pepys diary manuscript 35 been created to keep track of the more than 112 million blogs that are $ diary is a good form of self-study. 日(In America, from the 1940s through the 1980s! a diary was thought of currently public. In its newest incarnation, the diary has become more popular mostly as a way to privately express one's deepest thoughts while keeping notations about the day, In those times, pnd even continuing on today, writin。 in a diary was like writing to a special friend. Many times, movies would show than ever. COMPREHENSION QUESTIONS 9 teenage girl beginning to write in her diary while she said aloud, "Dear diary Decide if each statement is true [T] or false [F]. If it is false, write the sentence correctly. What followed was a synopsis of the day, usually filled with emotion. Those private reflections may have historical significance long after the 1.[]The word “diary" means a collection of stories written every ロ day. author's death. A diary kept by a young German Jewish girl by the name of Anne 2.[] Diary writing in movies illustrates how similar it is to writing to a special friend. Frank provides us with invaluable lessons about history, for she documented Anne kept a record of her private events and thoughts in her diary after she moved to Germany. 15 her experiences while she hid from the Nazis during their occupation of the Netherlands in World War II. Her diary became one of the world's most widely 4.[]Pepys was one of the first diary writers to include his own personal observations of historical events. read books and is the basis for many films. Samuel Pepys, who lived during the 17th century, is the earliest diary-keeper that is famous today. His diary is also an important documentation of history, ロ 5.[、]Today's diaries on the web are changing their characteristic of being secretive. 12

Tactics for TOIEC, listening and reading testの P.26-27のB:Minitestの解答教えてほしいです😖 よろしくお願いします

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多様体の接空間に関する基底定理の証明です。g(q)=∫〜と定義した関数を微積分学の基本定理を用いながら変形してg(q)=g(0)+∑gᵢuⁱと導出するのですが、これがうまくいきません。 自分は、g(q)の式をまず両辺tで微分して、次に両辺uⁱで積分して、最後に両辺tで積分... 続きを読む

12. Theorem.If{ = (x', , x") is a coordinate system in M at p, then its coordinate vectors d, lp, …… 0,l, forma basis for the tangent space T,(M); and D= E(x) 。 i=1 for all ve T(M). Proof. By the preceding remarks we can work solely on the coordinate neighborhood of G. Since u(c) = Othere is no loss of generality in assuming ど(p) = 0eR". Shrinking W if necessary gives E(W) = {qe R":|q| < } for some 8. Ifg is a smooth function on E(W) then for each 1 <isndefine og (tq) dt du g(9) = for all qe {(W). It follows using the fundamental theorem of calculus that g= g(0) + E&,u' on (W). Thus if fe &(M), setting g = f。' yields f= f(P) + Ex on U. Applying d/ax' gives f(p) = (f /0x)(P). Thus applying the tangent vector e to the formula gives (f) = 0+ E(x'(p) + E Ap)u(x) = E(Px). ず ax Since this holds for all f e &(M), the tangent vectors v and Z Ux') d,l, are equal. It remains to show that the coordinate vectors are linearly independent. But if ) a, o.l, = 0, then application to x' yields dxi 0=24 (P) = 2q d」= 4. In particular the (vector space) dimension of T,(M) is the same as the dimension of M.

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レポート課題5-1 1879年にフランスで製作され、1960年まで1 mの基準として用いられ たメートル原器は、全長に一様に作用する自重に対してその両端が水 平を保つように、スパン中央に対して対称な二点で下図のように支持 されていた。このとき突出長さaを求めよ。 W BA a 1 図中央に関して対称な二点支持はり Department of Systems Design for Ocean-Space YNU レポート課題5-2 下図のように左端で単純支持され、左端から距離の位置においてばね 定数kのばねで支持されている桁橋の支持点間に等分布荷重wが作用す る。このとき、ばね支持点から右に長さaだけ突出している部分の先端 が上下に変位しないためには、ばね定数kをいくらにすればよいか。桁 橋の曲げ剛性をEIとする。 a 図右端が不動点となるばね支持はり(分布荷重) Department of Systems Design for Ocean-Space YNU レポート課題5-3 下図に示すように、水平床の端Cより真直棒ABを突き出すとき、自重 によってBC部分は垂れ下がり、CD部分は床より浮き上がる。にのCD 、BC部分の長さをそれぞれ,,2とするとき、比4:½を求めよ。(ヒン ト:CD間を両端単純支持のはりとみなし、CD間の自重を等分布荷重 として受ける場合とCB間の自重をC点の曲げモーメントとして受ける 場合を合成し D点でたわみ角がゼロとなる条件を考えよ へ D C B b 図水平床から突き出したはり Department of Systems Design for Ocean-Space YNU

材料力学です。 わからないので教えて欲しいです。

レポート課題5-1 1879年にフランスで製作され、1960年まで1 mの基準として用いられ たメートル原器は、全長に一様に作用する自重に対してその両端が水 平を保つように、スパン中央に対して対称な二点で下図のように支持 されていた。このとき突出長さaを求めよ。 W BA a 1 図中央に関して対称な二点支持はり Department of Systems Design for Ocean-Space YNU レポート課題5-2 下図のように左端で単純支持され、左端から距離の位置においてばね 定数kのばねで支持されている桁橋の支持点間に等分布荷重wが作用す る。このとき、ばね支持点から右に長さaだけ突出している部分の先端 が上下に変位しないためには、ばね定数kをいくらにすればよいか。桁 橋の曲げ剛性をEIとする。 a 図右端が不動点となるばね支持はり(分布荷重) Department of Systems Design for Ocean-Space YNU レポート課題5-3 下図に示すように、水平床の端Cより真直棒ABを突き出すとき、自重 によってBC部分は垂れ下がり、CD部分は床より浮き上がる。にのCD 、BC部分の長さをそれぞれ,,2とするとき、比4:½を求めよ。(ヒン ト:CD間を両端単純支持のはりとみなし、CD間の自重を等分布荷重 として受ける場合とCB間の自重をC点の曲げモーメントとして受ける 場合を合成し D点でたわみ角がゼロとなる条件を考えよ へ D C B b 図水平床から突き出したはり Department of Systems Design for Ocean-Space YNU

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1 次の文の( )に入れるのにふさわしい語を下の枠内から選びなさい。 1. He seemeda bit cold ( ), but I gradually got used to him. 2. An independent attitude is not always ( ) in Japan. 3. Children do not always ( ) their parents' concerns about them. 4. Do you have ( ) to park your car here? 5. It is natural to feel ( )in a new environment. 6. Japanese students tend to expect more ( ) from their host families. 7. Milk needs to be stored in the ( 8. Omotenashi can roughly be translated as ( 9. The grammar-translation method still ( ) language classes. 10. You should not forget that your main ( )is to study. initially appreciate attention refrigerator valued permission dominates uneasy hospitality purpose 2次の文の( )に入れるのにふさわしい語を下の枠内から選びなさい。 1. A( )from a new pizza restaurant was delivered today. 2. Bell peppers come in three ( ) colors. 3. Everything on these supermarket ( ) looks delicious. 4. Green peppers are picked before they ( 5. Other things being equal, ( ) tend to choose the cheaper items. 6. The different colors represent different ( )of growth. 7. The new restaurant is located ( ) the post office. 8. What are some ( )of eating lots of vegetables? 9. Yellow peppers contain more ( )than green peppers. 10. You can enjoy the different ( )of these vegetables. mature flyer nutrients flavors stages shelves benefits distinct opposite consumers

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33 〈what S be>はT(い つ 次の英文の下線部を訳しなさい 目 September dropped by nearly eighty as compared with the previo September. This is very well so far as it goes, but the improvement will probably not be kept up and meanwhile everyone. knows that you can't solve the problem while our traffic system remains what it is. (駿河台大)