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Write an essay on the given TOPIC. Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words TOPIC Do you think that gas-powered cars will be replaced by electric cars in the near future? 電時の排出 POINTS 走行エネルギーの asse). Environment Convenience #1124-Kat #veg Cost Industry 高速産 ・充電せった コストが高い 産業限られた 短いきが しが ・使用者が買いかえようとは 思わない 2:33. 1 充電スペースの 2015 3. cars will be replaced by electric cars I do not think that gas-powered opinion. in the near future, I have two reasons to support this One reason is that it may be not convenient for people to drive electric cars in these days society. For example, electric cars take more time to charge than gas-powered cars. Moreover, electric cars can run few distance. Onother reason is that electric cars cost a lot of money in the many situation. For example, people who use electric, cars usually sex charging places at the each houses, but they have to pay so much cash to do it, Also, they need to prepare too much money every month to charge electric Propte cash, For these reasons above, I believe that gas-powered cars will be replaced by electric cars in the near future. total: 179 words

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Topic Agree or Disagree: Help from the local community is crucial for raising children POINTS → discipline、safety、working parents、privacy 「肯定意見」 Iagree with the statement that help from the local community is crucial for raising children. There are two reasons to support this contention: the promotion in working for parents and the respect of discipline. These days, almost all the companies in Japan are facing the problem which is how they treat their employees who have children. In fact, these people, especially women, have difficulty in working. What the matters worse, many of them are forced to quit their job because of raising children. To deal with this problem, it is necessary for the local community to help parents raise children. Moreover, help from others will lead to promote the rate of women who continued working after childbirth. In other words, thanks to help from the local society, Japanese companies can improve their working environment. In addition to this, children will be sociable and polite if they are taken care of by another person of family. Also, children will realize the importance of cooperation with others. For these reasons, I strongly believe the local society should do more for parents who raise children.

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