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銀塩一 • Write an essay on the given TOPIC. • Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. 4 • Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion • Suggested length: 120-150 words • Write your essay in the space provided on Side B of yo answer sheet. Any writing outside the space will not be graded. th69 $ 169 to adjust to her new job. Bolteon & vat 150 the Me TOPIC & feq Is it beneficial for workers to change jobs often? of yliutenso netale 1 Reschedule the the appointmen Come back tomorrOY Speak with his secretary. comprispiel beach that liv, od 2 I obind di awon yiod od S achbodegrabequemadout the noise. The manligaldauod rosszis 9/12 A POINTS ● Bolo ● Career goals Motivation • The economy Working conditions this I

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次の文章を読んで、 問1~4に答えなさい。 The establishment of a colony on Mars has been a dream for decades. Inevitably some people have objected to the idea of colonizing Mars on both ideological and practical grounds. Some object to humans living on Mars because they would harm whatever bacterial life forms might be present on the planet. Others oppose Mars settlements because they disagree with the idea of using the Red Planet as a "backup" in case the Earth is destroyed. Those in favor of colonizing Mars, however, look to spread the human race beyond our single planet. The practical considerations of surviving long term on a world without a breathable atmosphere, no surface water, exposure to radiation, and extremes of heat and cold all have to be addressed first. Mars colonists could survive in domed cities, extracting and recycling resources from the Martian environment. However, a more interesting plan for the settlement of the Red Planet involves a process called terraforming, turning the dangerous environ- ment of Mars into something resembling Earth. Billions of years ago, Mars was more like Earth, with a thick atmosphere as well as oceans and rivers of surface water. The planet may well have had complex life forms. However, sometime in the distant past, Mars lost its (A ). When Mars found itself without the protection of that field, solar wind relentlessly stripped it of its atmosphere, quickly turning the planet into the frozen desert it currently is. While a number of schemes exist to restore Mars' atmosphere, creating a runaway greenhouse process that would raise its temperature, NASA and some academic researchers recently came up with a simple way to achieve the process naturally. The idea involves the creation of an electromagnetic shield between Mars and the Sun to protect the Red Planet from solar wind. Without the solar wind stripping it away, the atmosphere of Mars would gradually become thicker. Soon the temperature on the Martian surface would become high enough to release the trapped ( B ) at the poles, accelerating the (C). Water ice at the poles would melt, giving Mars back some measure of its oceans and rivers. All humans would have to do is introduce

問題：英文の内容に合うように、次の問いに3語以上の英語で答えなさい。 ①What did people bring from Canada to America？ という問題で、 模範解答が「They brought some (gray) wolves.」で、 私の解答が... 続きを読む

Long ago, there were a lot of gray wolves in America, but ずっと昔アメリカにはたくさんのハイイロオオカミがいましたが, 1960年代 in the 1960s, there were only 300. Farmers killed them to には300頭しかいませんでした。 農業主たちは家畜を守るために protect their farm animals. ハイイロオオカミを殺しました｡ Wolves were very important to keep *balance in the オオカミは環境のバランスを保つためにとても重要(な存在)でした。 5 environment. Without wolves, the number of *deer increased. オオカミがいないため, シカの数が増えました。 Deer ate a lot of plants, and forests were destroyed. シカはたくさんの植物を食べ, 森は破壊されました。 animals lost their habitat. Some 生息地 a を失った動物もいました。 People wanted gray wolves to return to America and put wolves on 人々はハイイロオオカミがアメリカに戻ることを望み, 1973年にオオカミを絶滅危惧種リス the endangered species list in 1973. They also brought some wolves トに載せました。 さらに, カナダからアメリカにオオカミを連 れてきました。 10 from Canada to America. Now, there are over 10,000 gray wolves in 現在, アメリカには1万頭以上のハイイロオオカミがいま America. Gray wolves have helped the natural environment come ハイイロオオカミは、自然の環境が戻る助けになっています。 back. [104 words]

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5 A Matter of Taste Reading Passage 042 At the age of just 22, Jamie Oliver became well known across the UK as "The Naked Chef." He called himself this not because he cooked wearing no clothes, but because he wanted to simplify food preparation so that everybody could follow his recipes. He wanted to "strip down" the idea of cooking. Since then he has had numerous TV shows, published 50 many books, and has become a household name in the UK. Today, one of the activities Jamie Oliver is best known for is his great effort to improve the school dinners that children eat every day. One day, he visited the kitchen of a typical London secondary school, and he was shocked to see how much processed junk food the kids were given to eat each day. Fat and sugar levels were extremely high, and nutritional values very 10 low. The "turkey twizzler" became the symbol of these unhealthy meals: processed meat containing 21.2% fat and only 34% actual turkey. Oliver ran the school kitchen for one year and tried to show that it was possible to serve healthy meals on a limited budget—and that kids actually enjoyed eating them. His mission was to radically change the eating habits of children in that school, and across the country. 150 200 15 20 25 CULTIES 250 His project (the "Feed Me Better" campaign) has had some influence on school dinners in the UK. After watching the documentary Jamie's School Dinners, 271,677 people signed a petition calling for healthier school meals. This led the Prime Minister to agree to spend 280 million pounds (about 37 billion yen) on school dinners, to ban some junk food from school menus, and to create a School Food Trust to provide support and advice for people preparing school meals. Research, by the way, shows that children who stop eating sugary, fatty food and instead eat Oliver's school dinners are better behaved in class, and they get higher test 300 scores, too. 350 Of course, the project has had some problems. At first, many students (and even parents) resisted the removal of the junk food they were so used to. In one famous instance, some parents were passing local takeaway food to their children through the school fence. Also, schools that followed the plan for a while were often found to gradually drift back into bad habits. After all, it is easier and cheaper to just give the kids junk food. However, Oliver's efforts represent a positive start, and with obesity becoming such a huge problem (see Unit 4), 400 it's a very necessary start.

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