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Topic Agree or Disagree: Help from the local community is crucial for raising children POINTS → discipline、safety、working parents、privacy 「肯定意見」 Iagree with the statement that help from the local community is crucial for raising children. There are two reasons to support this contention: the promotion in working for parents and the respect of discipline. These days, almost all the companies in Japan are facing the problem which is how they treat their employees who have children. In fact, these people, especially women, have difficulty in working. What the matters worse, many of them are forced to quit their job because of raising children. To deal with this problem, it is necessary for the local community to help parents raise children. Moreover, help from others will lead to promote the rate of women who continued working after childbirth. In other words, thanks to help from the local society, Japanese companies can improve their working environment. In addition to this, children will be sociable and polite if they are taken care of by another person of family. Also, children will realize the importance of cooperation with others. For these reasons, I strongly believe the local society should do more for parents who raise children.

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For most of the 20th century, magnetic north was located around the northern parts of molten iron in the earth's core which affect how the earth's magnetic field behaves. What is surprising to scientists is the speed at which the pole has been moving in recent years. magnetic poles, on the other hand, are ( ア ) moving. This fact has several implications poles are located at the northernmost and southernmost ends of the earth. The location of the Shifts in the position of the North Magnetic Pole are nothing new. Since 1831, scientists Earth has two sets of poles: the geographic poles and the magnetic poles. The geographic have been tracking its location. The movements are caused by changes in the flow of swirling for navigation and transportation. Canada. It drified around, moving slowiy north at an ( イ ) speed of approximately 10 MIometers per year. In recent decades. that rate has increased significantly to about 3 KIIometers per year. The North Magnetic Pole is nowmoving away from Canada toward eastern Russia. While scientists can't fully explain how changes in the earth's molten core are affecting the pole's movement, they can map the earth's magnetic field. Doing so allows them to (ウ ) the rate of change over time. This, in turn, provides information on how the magnetic field may shift in the future. Information on changes to the earth's magnetic field is used to produce the World Magnetic Model (WMM). This model is used as the basis for all forms of modern navigation, from how ships move at sea to mapping software in smartphones. ( エ ) inthe model, caused by shits in the real location of the North Magnetic Pole, can seriously impact almost all forms of moderntransportation. The model is updated every five years, but in 2018, during routine checks of the 2015- 2020 model cycle, scientists noticed a problem. Because of the rapidly shifting pole, the WMM was close to being outside the acceptable limits for navigational errors. This forced the release of an updated version of the model. was revised ( オ ) in2020, and the current version is expected to last until 2024. As well as keeping track of the WMM's accuracy, scientists continue investigating why the magnetic ficld is changing so dramatically. This essential work will ensure a safe journey for everyone navigating their way through the world.

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例3.次の英文は 「磁極の移動」について述べたものです。(ア) ~ (オ) に入れ る最も適当なものを選択肢から選びなさい。 Earth has two sets of poles: the geographic poles and the magnetic poles. The geographic poles are located at the northernmost and southernmost ends of the earth. The location of the magnetic poles, on the other hand, are ( ア ) moving. This fact has several implications for navigation and transportation. Shifts in the position of the North Magnetic Pole are nothing new. Since 1831, scientists have been tracking its location. The movements are caused by changes in the flow of swirling molten iron in the earth's core which affect how the earth's magnetic field behaves. What is surprising to scientists is the speed at which the pole has been moving in recent years. For most of the 20th century, magnetic north was located around the northern parts of Canada. It drifted around, moving slowly north at an ( イ) speed of approximately 10 kilometers per year. In recent decades, that rate has increased significantly to about 55 kilometers per year, The North Maggnetic Pole is now moving away from Canada toward eastern Russia. While scientists can't fully explain how changes in the earth's molten core are affecting the pole's movement, they can map the earth's magnetic field. Doing so allows them to ( ウ ) the rate of change over time. This, in turn, provides information on how the magnetic field may shift in the future. Information on changes to the earth's magnetic field is used to produce the World Magnetic Model (WMM). This model is used as the basis for all forms of modern navigation, from how ships move at sea to mapping software in smartphones. ( エ ) inthe model、 caused by shifts in the real location of the North Magnetic Pole, can seriously impact almost all foms of modern transportation. The model is updated every five years, but in 2018, during routine checks of the 2015- 2020 model cycle, scientists noticed a problem, Because of the rapidly shifting pole, the WMIM was close to being outside the acceptable limits for navigational errors. This forced the release of an updated version of the model, It was revised (オ ) in2020, and the current version is expected to last until 2024, As well as kecping track of the WMM's accuracy, scientists continue investigating why the magnetic ficld is changing so dramatically, This essential work will ensure a safe joumey for everyone navigating their way through the world.

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[1 The world's oceans are being overfished and entire populations of fish are in danger of disappearing forever. According tol the United Nations Food and Agriculture Organization, 28% of fish stocks worldwide are nearing extinction, and once extinct, they are lost forever. If current trends continue, many scientists 5 prediet that most of the larger higher-value fish will disappear completely from the North Atlantic region within the next 30 years.

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I have a dream that my four little children will one day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their skin but by the content of their character. I have a dream today .. .. I have a dream that one day . . . little black boys 6 and black girls will be able to join hands with little white boys and white girls as sisters and brothers. I have a dream today. の In 1964, Dr. King won the Nobel Peace Prize. Four years later, he was shot and killed. The fight for justice continues even after his death. His dream lives on.

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Questions 5-7 refer to the following letter. a new member to the club To welcome confirm To | continued membership Mr. Leonardo Harper 571-45 Heiligenstàdter Street Vienna 1190 の) December 15 Dear Mr. Harper, Thank you for your continued support of the North Vienna Concert Hall We are writing to confirm receipt on December 14 of your North Vienna Club membership renewal payment for next year. Alnterviews with musicians To celebrate our 30 year anniversary, we are happy to announce some new special benefits for club members. Starting next year, club members can receive a 10% discount on any concert held during the first three months of the year. Call our ticket office at 1-5123098 and use the promotional code CZ1713 when you order your tickets. Please note that discounts only apply to pre-orders placed during this special period. IC) Commentaries on 0 The concert schedule performances As always, members will receive our monthly magazine, North Vienna Club, which features concert reviews and interviews with various artists and musicians, together with news and schedules of all of the events at the concert hall. Next month's issue will feature a six-page interview with the world famous conductor Franz Minsky. Once again, we thank you for being a North Vienna Club member and for supporting arts and music in our community. Sincerely, Roy Pophins Roy Hopkins Director North Vienna Concert Hall の の)

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3 次の文章を読んで, あとの各問に答えよ。 (*印の付いている単語·語句には, 本文のあとに [注] がある。) When we go to the library, we read books/*search for and/share information and have a *discussion with others. // Libraries are very convenient places. /The library has a long history of collecting and keeping books. /Books have been an important part of culture. Around 1445 Johann Gutenberg *invented the *printing machine./ Libraries began to collect the hooks *printed by the printing machine, and the number of libraries grew./ Now some libraries have begun to *digitalize a lot of books. Some people say most of the books will become digitalized *data/ When 声った all the books are digitalized, what will the future of the library be? / Some even say the library will disappear. Will that really happen? To answer this question, we first have to see how people have digitalized books. We can say the idea of digitalizing books began with Michael Hart in 1971/ He was able to use an expensive computer,/so he thought he could do something good for other people by using it. A computer can keep a lót of data/and it can search for the data in a very short time./When the computer has a lot of digitalized data from the books, these data become an important part of culture. / Michael Hart thought that people would use these data as they like, His idea became a *project. /He couldn't digitalize books which had *copyright, so he digitalized books which were *in the public domain and collected them in a computer./ People were able to read the distalized books without *paying any money. Hart named his project “Project Gutenberg," |He thought his project was as important as Gutenberg's printing machine, because the printing machine also spread knowledge 知識てめる all over the world. / Project Gutenberg continues even after Hart died in 2011. Now you can read - 4

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¥ Samuel Pepys is the earliest diary- keeper that is famous today. for it gives personal insight into London's Great Plague and the Great Fire. Pepys took diary writing from the realm of business to the individual. His diary is being published on the Internet, and it is interesting to note that there has beena new entry every day since Anne Frars 1929-194。 n January of 2003. It will continue over the course of several years to come. Reading his diary is fascinating. and it makes his life all the more real to us. 63 Today's electronic version of the diary, the web READING PASSAGE log, or “blog," has once again stretched the diary to fopic sentences and supporting sentences of each paragraph be much more than a personal account of the dav's events. There are blogs to document recipes, traveling. ロ movies, independent news, product announcements, allowance." It refers to a book for fragmentary writings by date and is photos, and anything else that needs to be recorded over time. Search engines like Technorati.com have 会 the six volumes of Samuel Pepys diary manuscript 35 been created to keep track of the more than 112 million blogs that are $ diary is a good form of self-study. 日(In America, from the 1940s through the 1980s! a diary was thought of currently public. In its newest incarnation, the diary has become more popular mostly as a way to privately express one's deepest thoughts while keeping notations about the day, In those times, pnd even continuing on today, writin。 in a diary was like writing to a special friend. Many times, movies would show than ever. COMPREHENSION QUESTIONS 9 teenage girl beginning to write in her diary while she said aloud, "Dear diary Decide if each statement is true [T] or false [F]. If it is false, write the sentence correctly. What followed was a synopsis of the day, usually filled with emotion. Those private reflections may have historical significance long after the 1.[]The word “diary" means a collection of stories written every ロ day. author's death. A diary kept by a young German Jewish girl by the name of Anne 2.[] Diary writing in movies illustrates how similar it is to writing to a special friend. Frank provides us with invaluable lessons about history, for she documented Anne kept a record of her private events and thoughts in her diary after she moved to Germany. 15 her experiences while she hid from the Nazis during their occupation of the Netherlands in World War II. Her diary became one of the world's most widely 4.[]Pepys was one of the first diary writers to include his own personal observations of historical events. read books and is the basis for many films. Samuel Pepys, who lived during the 17th century, is the earliest diary-keeper that is famous today. His diary is also an important documentation of history, ロ 5.[、]Today's diaries on the web are changing their characteristic of being secretive. 12

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Before World War II, Japanese Consul-General Chiune Sugihara was sent to Kaunas to open a consulate service. Kaunas was the temporary capital of Lithuania at the time Reading Refugees in Recent Years J次の英文は第2次世界大戦当時、ナチスに迫害されていた多くのユタヤ人を救った杉原干動。 ついて書かれたものです。英文を読んで、問いに答えなさい。 For Chiune Sugihara u入 boobi 30 signi follim . Ba wrot be o chos. and was strategically situated between Germany and the Soviet Union. After Hitler.。 invasion of Poland on September 1, 1939, a wave of Jewish refugees living in Poland streamed into Lithuania. They escaped from Poland without possessions or money. By 1940, most of Western Europe had been conquered by the Nazis. Most free countries barred the immigration of Jewish refugees from Poland or anywhere in Nazi- occupied Europe. Germany and Soviets were approaching Lithuania rapidly. In July 1940, the Soviet authorities instructed all foreign embassies day to g 35 Lith the Ko all left immediately, but Sugihara managed to obtain permission to extend his Kaunas. Almost a 40 the STTOS stay. in 0quion as taqe On a summer morning in late July 1940, Consul Sugihara and his family awakened to a crowd of Polish-Jewish refugees gathered outside the consulate. Desperate to flee the q ynem CH approaching Nazis and Soviets, the refugees knew that their only path lay to the east. If Consul Sugihara them Japanese transit visas, they could race to possible re freedom. Sugihara was moved by their plight, but he did not have the authority to issue hundreds of visas without permission from the Foreign Ministry in Tokyo. Sugihara wired his government three times for permission to issue visas to the Jewish refugees. Three times he was denied. 45 u d 1 MOLIG- KOinE After repeatedly receiving negative responses from Tokyo, the Consul had a dificult decision to make. He was a man who was brought up in the strict and traditional : discipline of the Japanese. He was a career diplomat, who suddenly had to make a very difficult choice. On the one hand, he was bound by the traditional obedience he c all his life. On the other hand, he thought that he had to help those who were in need. He knew that if he defied the orders of his superiors, he might be fired and disgraced, and would probably never work for the Japanese government again. This # would result in extreme financial hardship for his family in the future. Sugihara even feared for the lives of himself, his wife and children, but in the end he just followed his conscience. The visas would be signed. 72