英検の英作文添削をお願いします。 1行5語に合わせたり、削ったりしているので、段落や空間等は気にせずに添削をして頂きたいです。

I don't think scare people's salaries should be based on their job performance. I have two reasons. In the first place, It should be changed from their performance to age. As they get older, many people will have their family, so they need a lot. of money. If their salavies base on age, they can live in peace. In the Second place, some people don't have the skills. For example, people who have disability may not have enough skills. If their salaries be based on r their age, they can't get enough money. Last of all I think people's salaries had better be based on their age. It has a lot of benefit than being based on their job performance. Mary people can live in peace

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あと 次は,中学生のタケシ ( Takeshi) が書いたスピーチの原稿 の1~6の問いに答えなさい。 I am going to talk about my interesting experience. I went to London during this summer vacation with my family. This was my first trip to a foreign country. I wanted to know about London, so I looked for information about it on the Internet. I was able to see many famous things on the Internet before the trip. In London, we went to some popular places, for example, Buckingham Palace and Tower Bridge. I already saw them on the Internet, but they looked bigger and more beautiful to me when I saw them directly. I was ( )! When I walked around, I saw a lot of people from different countries, too. Then, we went to a restaurant to eat local dishes. They were very new to me, but I enjoyed them. When we finished our dinner and left the restaurant at about nine in the evening, I found 2one strange thing. It was not dark outside! I was very surprised. In Fukuoka, it is dark at nine in July, but it is not in London! This was the most interesting thing to me. I enjoyed this trip very much because I was able to discover new things. After the summer vacation, I told my classmates about my trip to London in an English class. Many of them liked my story and I was glad. After school, one of my classmates came to me and said, "I really enjoyed your story. I love Harry Potter, and I'm very interested in London. Can you tell me more about your trip ?" In fact, 3 was surprised when she came to talk to me. Before that, we didn't talk, and I though she was not interested in foreign countries. But that was not right. She knew a lo about London. We talked about my trip and Harry Potter. When we were talking she said to me, "Going abroad is a good way to study, but I have ( ) to Foreign country. I was glad to talk with you." I discovered new things about her o hat day. ) ( 4 You can get information about many things on TV and the Internet, and you ofte hink you know about people around you before talking to them. But you can discove ew things when you experience something directly. I want to remember this idea ar xperience a lot of things in the future. 主) foreign: 外国の Buckingham Palace: バッキンガム宮殿 Tower Bridge: タワーブリッジ directly : 直接に local dishes : その土地の料理 outside: 外で discover : 発見する Harry Potter: ハリー・ポッター

（10）なのですが、足りないっていう意味でshortって使えるんですか？

(4) The street is always very crowded. 見るものすべてが私には新鮮に思える。 Everything I see looks new to me. 【高知学芸】 (II(S) in As it is getting colder and colder, it is hard to get up in to morning. 【高知学芸】 [](6) 12207) sad love story about the beautiful lal for a long sear People have told a 【土佐】 (7) 風の強い日には雲は空を泳いでいる魚のように見えます。 time (5) 祖父が多 On windy days the clouds looks like fish swimming in 【久留米大附】 (9) 英語を学ぶ最も良い方法は英語が話されている国へ行くことです。 The best way to learn English is to go to the countries where it is spoken. (10) 1万円貸してくれませんか｡ お金が少し足りないのです。 (数字は英語でつづること) 【大阪星光学院】 lend me ten thousand yen? I'm a little short of money. I'm busy now. I'll answer the ロ (13) 彼がどんなに熱心に勉強するか知っている人は少ない。 Few people know how hard he studies. 山口 (8) その二つの国の人々は、お互いに理解し助け合うべきだと思います。 【高知学芸】 I think (that) the people in those two countries should understand and help each other. Could you (11) 私は昨日から何も食べていないのでおなかがぺこぺこだ。 【中央大杉並】 I'm very hungry because I have eaten nothing since yesterday. (12) 今は忙しい。 今度君が来た時にその質問に答えてあげよう。 【久留米大附】 【桐朋】 (14) 通りで何が起こったのか、 あの警官にきいてみましょう。 Let's ask that question when policeman the sky. 口 (15) あなたは何回外国へ行ったことがありますか。 ceman what has happened (in) 【高知学芸】 has happened on the street. times [How often] have you been abroad? 【土佐】 houses How many 口 (16) アメリカの家では靴をはいたままで入ってよいそうだ。 you come next time. 【甲陽学院】 They say (it is said) that you can enter Ameri B:いいわ ①IW ⒸI da 口 (4) 私は駅に with p 館を探した I am あさって Since my (6) 二番目 のビルがあ Turn. two (7) あのこ だった。 In him (8) 私はこ 出会った 1 h ner (9) もし明 If

音楽です。わかる方いらっしゃいませんか？3枚目見ずらくてすみませんm(_ _)m

☆完全グループは、 1・4・5・8度 1度と8度は、すぐに完全○度と答える ☆長短グループは、2・3・6・7度 2度と3度は、半音を1つ含むと短〇度 半音がないと長〇度 減 to ♪音程重要暗記事項♪ 6度 ○音に、 #や♭がついたら、 次の表を使いこなそう○ ―完全 O ⑦ ―短ー ―長 狭くなる ・完全グループは、 減、完全、増、の部分しか移動できない。 ● 長短グループは、 減、 短、 長、増、 の部分しか移動できない。 半音の変化で､ひとつ移動する。 (広くなると右に、 狭くなると左に) ♪次の音程を答えなさい。 9度以上の音程は 「1オクターブと〇度」 と答えること。 Q bo 4度と5度は、半音を1つ含むと完全○度 半音がないと増4度 半音を2つ含むと減5度 (8) 6度と7度は、半音を2つ含むと短〇度 半音が1つだと長〇度 O 20 to o 9 16 4 増 9 ABRE ( 広くなる bo to 10 10 bo

過去完了のalwaysは「昔からずっと」という意味だと思っていたのですが、解答では「それまでは」と書いていました。「それまでは」とはつまり「今は違う」ということでしょうか？ また過去の出来事でのnowは「その時点を表す」という意味なので「そのとき」と訳せばいいと思っていたの... 続きを読む

1 演習 1 (問題→本冊: p.3) Sally had lived abroad most of her life, but at last she came back to England to live. She had always loved trees and flowers, and now she aimed to buy a small house in the country with a garden. 【全文訳】 サリーは人生の大方の期間, 外国暮らしをしていたが,ついにイギリスで暮 らそうと戻って来た。(それまでは)いつも木と花を愛していて, これから田舎に庭 付きの小さな家を買おうとした。 【解説】 述語動詞は had lived (過去完了), came (過去時制), had loved (過去完了), aimed (過去時制)。 (for) most of her life 「彼女の人生のほとんどの期間」は had lived を修飾, to live は副詞的用法 (目的) 「暮らすために」 で, came back 「戻った」 を修飾。 第2文の後半の now は物語の中などで 「今や, そこで」 の意味。 with a garden は GER house を修飾して 「庭のある家」。 came, aimed の2つの過去時制が 「基準時」 ( 19 課)。

間違ってるとこあったら教えてください

英語 7 次の英文を読み、1から4の ちから一つずつ選びなさい｡ 解答番号は 内に入れるのに最も適当なものを,それぞれ①~④のう 27 O others. 24 Nagisa was a nurse who was working in Zimbabwe, a country in Africa. One day, she got an email from her old high school homeroom teacher, Mr. Tamai. He wanted to ask was hesitant at first because she always had a fear of public speaking, she felt this would be a Nagisa to give his students a talk about what she was doing in Zimbabwe. Although Nagisa good chance to tell students about the joy of working abroad and helping people in need. The next time Nagisa went back to Japan, she visited Mr. Tamai's high school to speak with his students. She was very nervous, but to her relief, the students seemed to be very interested in her story. She talked about her job, her reasons for working in Zimbabwe, and both some good and bad things about working there. She shared her passion for helping After the talk, one of the students came to talk to Nagisa. He said, "I would like to work abroad and help people in the future like you, but I don't know what kind of job I would be able to do. Do you have any advice for me?" Nagisa said, "I think, doing something you like is the key. Keep doing it, and doors will open for you." (Ten years later) One sunny day, a group of Japanese farmers visited the village where Nagisa was living. They came to teach local people how to grow plants and vegetables. People in the village were eager to learn from them. Then, the youngest member of the farmers' group came to talk to Nagisa and said, "Hi, do you remember me? You gave a talk at my school ten years. ago. At that time, I liked growing plants and vegetables, but I didn't know how to use that to help others. You told me to keep doing what I liked and that has really opened doors for me to do what I'm doing now. Thank you." Hearing his words, Nagisa recognized who the young man was. She was surprised and pleased that her talk from ten years before was able to make a difference in this young man's life. 1 Nagisa was 24 a high school teacher. 2 afraid of public speaking. 3 scared of living abroad. 4 a doctor in Zimbabwe. 4 2 One thing Nagisa told Mr. Tamai's students was why she chose to work in Zimbabwe. how she learned a new language. 3 when she went to a high school in Africa. 4 what she did to impress local people. 3 One of the students said he wanted G (2) (3 to be a kind nurse like Nagisa. to teach Japanese culture in Africa. to open doors for other people. to help people overseas. 26 3 25 4 Ten years after her talk, Nagisa 27 made an appointment to meet one of her old friends in Africa. 2 became a farmer and taught local people how to grow vegetables. met one of Mr. Tamai's students again. 4 4 gave a small talk in her high school again.

この軌跡の問題の代入するという考え方がいまいち分からないです。 st、xyの関係式を作って代入するところまではわかるのですが、、、 どうしてどれでstの方程式をxyの方程式に作り替えられるのか分からないです

00000 /p.174 基本事項 ■ 2 重要 113 114 基本例題 110 三角形 2点A(6,0), B(3,3)と円x2+y^2=9上を動く点Qを3つの頂点とする三角形 の重心Pの軌跡を求めよ。 指針 動点Qが円周上を動くにつれて, 重心Pが動く。 このようなものを連動形 (Q 以外の文字で表す。 動してPが動く)ということにする。 連動形の問題では,次の手順で考えるとよい。 ①1 軌跡上の動点P(x, y) に対し、 他の動点Qの座標は,x, 例えば, s, tを使い, Q(s,t) とする。 [②] Qに関する条件を s, tを用いて表す。 ③3 2点PQの関係から,s,tをx,yで表す。 ④ ② ③ の式からst を消去して,x,yの関係式を導く。 なお, 上で用いたs, tを本書ではつなぎの文字とよぶことにする。 CHART 連動形の軌跡 つなぎの文字を消去して、xの関係式を導く P(x,y), Q(s,t) とする。 解答 点Qは円x2+y2 = 9上を動く から s2+12=9 点Pは△ABQ の重心である から x= 6+3+s 3 y= ...... 0+3+t 3 (2) s=3x-9, t=3y-3 よって, 求める軌跡は (s, t) Q₁ ****** -3 3 ②から ①に代入して したがって ゆえに, 点Pは円 ③上にある。 逆に, 円 ③上の任意の点は,条件を満たす。 練習 放物線 y=x2. 10 線 ① 上を動くとき、次の点Q (3, 1) A 0p(x,y)/3 6 X -3 (3x-9)²+(3y-3)²=9 (x-3)^+(y-1)'=1 中心が点 (3,1), 半径が10円 (*) B(3, 3) 注意 上の例題の直線AB:x+y-6=0と円x²+y²=9は共有点 をもたないから、△ABQ を常に作ることができる。 しかし、直 線AB と円が共有点をもつときは,その共有点をRとすると, 図形 ABR は三角形ではなくなるから, そのときの点Pを軌跡 から除外しなければならない。 (3) 点Qの条件。 R の軌跡を求めよ。 点Pの条件。 P Q の関係から,s,t をx, yで表す。 なお, Aは UP {3(x-3)}^+{3(y-1)}^=9 この両辺を9で割って ③ を導く。 (*) 円(x-3)+(y-1)'=1 でもよい。 直線AB Ay 6 3 13 ・①とA(1,2), B(-1,-2), C (4,-1) がある。 点Pが放物 6 C

Q2の問題を教えてください 下線部と同じ意味になるように適切に語句をいれる問題で、どう考えたら良いですか

(3) Q2 Fill in the blanks with the most appropriate words so that it has the same meaning as the underlined text in the third paragraph. and ( 1 ) ( 2 ) made it obligatory to take the TOEIC test, ( 3 ) D ( (8pts

正直に言って難しいです 教えて下さい🙏

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この2つの問題の解答と解説教えてほしいです🙇🏻‍♀️💦 1.The threatening floods ( ① ) ( ) ( ② ) ( ) ( ) the town. （洪水の恐れから、町では全員の避難が必要になった） 語... 続きを読む