英検準1級のライティングです。 どなたでも構いません。添削をお願いしたいです！何を書いているか分からなければ、聞いてもらって全然大丈夫です。ていうか、読んだだけでは、全く理解できないと思います。 近日中に受けるので、明日の夕方頃までにお願いします🙏

Write an essay on the given TOPIC. Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words TOPIC Do you think that gas-powered cars will be replaced by electric cars in the near future? 電時の排出 POINTS 走行エネルギーの asse). Environment Convenience #1124-Kat #veg Cost Industry 高速産 ・充電せった コストが高い 産業限られた 短いきが しが ・使用者が買いかえようとは 思わない 2:33. 1 充電スペースの 2015 3. cars will be replaced by electric cars I do not think that gas-powered opinion. in the near future, I have two reasons to support this One reason is that it may be not convenient for people to drive electric cars in these days society. For example, electric cars take more time to charge than gas-powered cars. Moreover, electric cars can run few distance. Onother reason is that electric cars cost a lot of money in the many situation. For example, people who use electric, cars usually sex charging places at the each houses, but they have to pay so much cash to do it, Also, they need to prepare too much money every month to charge electric Propte cash, For these reasons above, I believe that gas-powered cars will be replaced by electric cars in the near future. total: 179 words

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Model Read the article on the connection between technology and life. While many parents think that smartphones are not good for students, smartphones can actually help them work more efficiently. 2 For instance, students can use smartphones to easily keep in touch with one another. 3 This is especially important when they are working together on school projects. 4 In such situations, students often need to arrange meetings, and smartphones can help them do that. 5 Another example of how smartphones can help students is through the use of schedule "applications. These applications help students organize their work, so they remember when different "assignments are due. These are just a few examples of how smartphones can help students. 6 "application 771) / assignment. Check It Out QO What is the writer's opinion on smartphones? Is it positive or negative? Q2 How many examples does the writer give? Q3 What does the writer say are the benefits of smartphones?

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Model Read the article on the connection between technology and life. While many parents think that smartphones are not good for students, smartphones can actually help them work more efficiently. 2 For instance, students can use smartphones to easily keep in touch with one another. ³ This is especially important when they are working together on school projects. 4 In such situations, students often need to arrange meetings, and smartphones can help them do that. 5 Another example of how smartphones can help students is through the use of schedule "applications. These applications help students organize their work, so they remember when different "assignments are due. These are just a few examples of how smartphones can help students. 6 7 "application 771) / assignment . Check It Out QO What is the writer's opinion on smartphones? Is it positive or negative? Q2 How many examples does the writer give? What does the writer say are the benefits of smartphones?

英検２級のライティングです。 添削をお願いしたいです😿 字汚くてすみません 文法、単語あってますかね、

●以下のTOPICについて, あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。 ●POINTSは理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。 ただし、これら以 外の観点から理由を書いてもかまいません。 語数の目安は80語~ 100語です。ordi 限 POINTS ●Recycling ●Quality ●Repair かんたんにものを捨てる これから TOPIC Today, many people simply throw things away if they are broken. Do you think this trend will increase in the future? へる?

この問題の(4)なのですが、 I will try anything faster than any other student in my class. どんなことも他の人(クラスメート)よりも早く挑戦する と解答したのですが、あっていますか？ 添削お願いします。

19 ハルナ(Haruna) がヒューズ先生 (Mr. Hughes) と話をしています。この対話文を読んで、 [1]~[(3) に入る最も適当なものをそれぞれあとのア~エのうちから一つずつ選び、その 符号を書きなさい。 また、対話文の内容に合うように、 (4) に入る言葉を英語で書きなさい。 ただし、語の数 は10語程度(.?! などの符号は語数に含まない。) とすること｡ Haruna Mr. Hughes, do you have time ? Mr. Hughes Of course. Do you have any questions? Haruna:Yes, at the end of the class, you said, "Be the first penguin." (1) Mr. Hughes: All right. You know penguins, right? Penguins are birds that cannot fly but car swim in the sea. Haruna Yes, of course. I have seen them in an aquarium. Mr. Hughes : Some people say that there is no leader in the world of penguins but that is not true. When they catch food or run away to a safe place, one penguin moves first, and then the rest of them (2) Haruna Mr. Hughes: Wow, that's very interesting. For example, (3) | to jump into the sea to catch food because there is sometimes danger in the sea. But when one brave penguin jumps into the sea, all 0000/r

2段落4行目の enjoyed はここではどういう意味ですか？ 訳の分からして、鑑賞する でいいのでしょうか？

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中学生英語です。 この問題で「日本やアジア諸国では死者数が多くない」的な事を言いたい事は分かるのですが、アのmanyとウのhighでどっちでもいいのでは…と思いました。答えはウなのですが、どなたか解説お願いします。

IX. 次の 〔1〕 〔2〕 の英文を読んで、それぞれ設問に答えなさい。 [1] By May 2021, more than 3,000,000 people around the world died from the new *coronavirus. The number of deaths was about 600,000 people in the U.S. and 1,000,000 in Europe. On the other hand, the number of deaths was not as ( A ) in Japan and other East Asian countries. We do not understand the reason for the low death *rate in East Asia. Some researchers think that it is because of (B) Asian cultures. Many people in Japan and China wear masks, but masks are not common in North America and Europe. Masks are helpful because the virus enters the body ( C ) the nose and mouth. Another reason may be that Asian people do not shake People touch their face many times every day, and that carries the virus to their nose and hands. mouth. On the other hand, the coronavirus can be more dangerous for people in North America and Europe. All people in the world do not have the same risk of illness. For example, *skin cancer is a very dangerous illness for people in Europe, but it is not as dangerous for people in Africa. *Experts from all over the world are studying (D) this mystery. But the reason is very difficult to find. However, we can be sure that washing hands and wearing a mask in crowds is very helpful. Notes: coronavirus コロナウィルス rate 率 skin cancer 皮膚がん expert 専門家 問 1 空所(A)に入る語として適切なものを次のア~エから1つ選び記号で答えなさい。 7. many 1. long high I. small

英検二級の英作文の練習をしているのですが、写真の中でなにか添削するところはありますか？ ご指摘していただけるならおねがいしたいです。

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んけんと確率 本例題 39 2人でじゃんけんを1回するとき,勝負が決まる確率を求めよ。 e) 3人でじゃんけんを1回するとき,ただ1人の勝者が決まる確率を求めよ。 34人でじゃんけんを1回するとき,あいこになる確率を求めよ。 (3) あいこ になる じゃんけんの確率の問題では,「誰が」と「どの手」に注目する。 (2) 誰がただ1人の勝者か 3人から1人を選ぶから 3通り どの手で勝つか 「グー」, 「チョキ」 「パー」 の3通り 「全員の手が同じ」 か 「3種類の手がすべて出ている」場合があ る。 よって、 手の出し方の総数は,これらの場合の数の和になる。 | 2人の手の出し方の総数は 329(通り) 1回で勝負が決まる場合, 勝者の決まり方は 2通り そのおのおのに対して, 勝ち方がグー, チョキ,パーの3通 りある。 よって 求める確率は 3×3 1 27 3 2×3 2 9 3 勝負が決まらない場合は、 2人が同じ手を出したときの後で学ぶ余事象の確率 (p.335) による考え方。 3 2 3通りあるから, 求める確率は 1- 9 3 (2) 3人の手の出し方の総数は 3°=27(通り) 3通り 1回で勝負が決まる場合, 勝者の決まり方は そのおのおのに対して、勝ち方がグーチョキ,パーの3通 りある。 よって、求める確率は 本八 34=81(通り) (3) 4人の手の出し方の総数は あいこになる場合は,次の [1], [2] のどちらかである。 [1] 手の出し方が1種類のとき 3通り [②2] 手の出し方が3種類のとき グーグーチョキ, パー}, {グー, チョキチョキ, パー},| グーチョキパー, パー}の3つの場合がある。 よって、求める確率は 出す人を区別すると,どの場合も 4! 2! 基本38 4! 通りずつあるから, 21 ×3=36 (通り) (1) 3+36 13 81 27 1人の手の出し方が3通り, 2人でじゃんけんをするか 3×3通り 1人の手の出し方が3通り, 3人でじゃんけんをするか ら 3×3×3 通り 3×3×3×3 通り 4人全員が 「グー」または 「チョキ」または「パー」 例えば {グー, グーチョキ, パー} で「グー」 を出す2人を 4人の中から選ぶと考えて =14/01(通り) 4C2×2!= p.338 EX30 329 2章 6 事象と確率

とても拙い英文で申し訳ないのですが、ピンクの斜め線の部分はどう直したら良くなるでしょうか？ タイトルは　rush hourの交通渋滞をどう減らすか　というものです 2枚目が模範解答です お願いします🙇‍♀️

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