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III brand. 5. Present an ad showing how unique and original the brand is right after viewers have watched a scary film. Answer in a short essay between 120 and 150 words in English. The full score for this essay is 20 points. Newspapers and news programs frequently report negative events. There are some people who think that it would be better if more good news was reported. What is your opinion? Explain your opinion and give at least two reasons to support it.

まーかーでひいたところについて質問です。 muchは形容詞、副詞の比較級を修飾するのだとしたら、much good(形容詞の原級)の語順が納得いかないので、解説お願いしたいです

Line Much good design evolves: the design is tested, problem area discovered and modified, and then it is continually retested remodified until time, energy, and resources run out. This n design process is characteristic of products built by craftspe 5 especially folk objects. With handmade products such as pottery, hand tools, or furniture, each new product can be m slightly from the previous one, eliminating small problems, r small improvements or testing new ideas. Over time, this p results in functional, aesthetically pleasing products. 10 Rutouch J

We〜guests.の文章でand out of consideration for the other guestsのandと並列しているところはどのなのですか？（A and BだとしてB= out of consideration for the other guest... 続きを読む

extinguished with water. In addition, please respect any signage and do not fish in the park's rivers. We also ask that you keep noise levels to a minimum to preserve the tranquility of Kiskadee and out of consideration for the other guests.

不適切なものを選ぶ問題です！ 解答の根拠を教えていただきたいです🙇‍♀️ 答えは上から、 2.3.3.2.4.1.3.3.3.4.です。

(1) Earthquake drills are important and should do on a regular basis in preparation for emergencies. 11 2 3 (2) It is known to everyone that Nancy is the most talented than any other student in the village. 12 2 3 2 3 (3) In contrast to its low price, this hotel has the best service of any I was experienced and I am very satisfied with it. 13 (4) Marie Curie was famous for being a first woman to win a Nobel Prize in Physics, and later I another one in Chemistry. 14 3 4 2 3 (5) While eating and sleeping are indeed essential for humans to lead active lives, we recognize 1 that there could have emerged many other important factors. 15 (6) Preserving traditional customs and to take in new cultures have been discussed by many researchers in various academic journals. 16 2 3 (7) The island I live on is only 50 kilometers from a neighboring country, which is so close that the land is visibly to the naked eye. 17 3 1 2 (8) In determining the class president, three students applied for the position, but in them only 1 2 Thomas succeeded in making a good impression. 18 3 (9) Thanks to Barbara's contribution, we were able to finish the event successfully. If she had not 1 2 constant directed the staff, it would have been an absolute failure. 19 3 (10) A number of protests by dissatisfied employees of the company occurred mainly in Boston ī there in the 1980s. 20 2 3

out of consideration for ~ : 〜を配慮して という熟語がありますが、これは副詞になるのでしょうか？ 文章の中で何詞として扱われているのかわかりません。

In addition, please respect any signage and do not fish in the park's rivers. We also ask 月 that you keep noise levels to a minimum to preserve the tranquility of Kiskadee and out of consideration for the other guests.

Your〜success.の正しい訳は「皆様の尽力と貢献が、当社の成功の原動力です。」なのですが、 「皆様の尽力と貢献（Your~contritution)は、当社の企業の成功につなげること（what〜success）」を意訳すると正しい訳になるのですか？ （is以降の訳が... 続きを読む

As president, I would like to express my deep appreciation for your hard work and dedication this year. Your commitment and contributions are what drives our company's success.

この問題の答えはCで、消去法でCだとわかるのですが、もしbecomeの選択肢にあったらそっちも正解になるのでしょうか？

2. Adam Clayton Powell, a New York Democrat elected to the House of Representatives in 1944, was one of the first African Americans chairman of a major Congressional committee. (A) became (B) by becoming (C) to become (D) whose becoming

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y II Day 12 15 5 Negro Leagues Baseball was a collection of major and minor-league baseball leagues that were the first to showcase black team sports on intertwined with the African American and American experience not only a national scale. Launched in 1895, the leagues, as with jazz, became as a cultural element, but as a lucrative business endeavor. team The leagues were not under central management, and schedules and composition League, were changeable from season to season. Appearance and disappearance of leagues was common: the National Colored Baseball for instance, collapsed after only two weeks of operations. Latins, especially Cubans, were also a significant presence on teams. In these ways, the Negro Leagues were quite similar to their white counterparts which would eventually consolidate into Major League Baseball. Blacks near the beginning of the 20th century had only a fraction of whites' purchasing power, so the emergence of the Negro Leagues might have seemed unlikely. However, the Negro Leagues had two main draws that accounted for its business success. The first was a deep reserve of athletic talent. After blacks were formally excluded from white leagues in the 1880s, the Negro Leagues were the sole organization through which black players could work professionally. The quality of Negro Leagues 20 players was high, and substantiated through exhibition matches between Negro Leagues and Major League teams: over the years, both had their fair share of wins and losses in these matches. Another reason for the success of the Negro Leagues was an increasingly affluent black fan base. Driven by American industrialization, blacks were concentrating in major cities such as New York City, Chicago, and Atlanta. Usually barred by custom-and in the South by law-from attending many white entertainment outlets, blacks turned to Negro Leagues games. As a result of these factors, by the 20th century the Negro Leagues were earning a combined millions of dollars. This profitability ended with the desegregation of Major League Baseball. Black fans began attending Major League games, starving the Negro Leagues of its core revenue source. By 1951, the Negro Leagues had ended, although a succession of black star athletes in the Major League had begun.

（2）なぜ解答のような解き方ができるのか分からないので教えて欲しいです 僕は （a,b)=（30,10),,,①の時のZ（（a,b)における1次近似式をZと置いてます)と（a,b)=（30.05,10.02),,,②の時のZを求めて, ②－①という戦法で解こうとしましたが... 続きを読む

2. 基礎解析学 (1)] (1) f(x,y) = f(a,b)+2ab(x-a)+3a2b2(y-b)+(-a)2 + (y-b)2C (x,y), ただし C'(x,y) は (a, b) のまわりで定義され, (a,b) で連続でC(a,b) = 0 となる函数 . (2) 約 8400 増加. [f(a,b)+2ab'(x-a)+3a2b2 (y-b) において (a,b)=(30,10), x-a=0.05, y-b=0.02 とすると 2･30･103・0.05 + 3・302.102.0.02 = 3000 + 5400 = 8400 これがf の 変化量の近似値となる.なお, 実際の変化量は8431.3... 程度 . ] (3) 約 2000 減少 [f(a,b)+2ab(x-a)+3a2b2(y-b) において (a,b)=(20,10), x-a=0.01, y-b= -0.02 とすると, 2･20･103・0.01 + 3.202.102(-0.02) =400-2400=-2000. 実際の 変化量は1997.5... 程度. ] [注.「全微分」というものをdz = fr(a,b)dx+fy(a,b) dy あるいはこれと同等な形で定義して いる教科書も多い. これの詳しい意味は教科書である難波誠 『微分積分学』 (裳華房) p.146 を参 1 照してほしい.この定義を用いると次のような解答が可能: (2) dz=2abdx+3a2b2dy におい て (a,b) = (30, 10), dx = 0.05, dy = 0.02 とすると, dz = 2.30.10°.0.05 + 3・302・102.0.02 = 3000 + 5400 = 8400. これがの変化量の近似値となる. (3) dz = 2abdx+3a2b2dy において (a,b) = (20,10), dx = 0.01, dy = -0.02 とすると, dz = 2.20・103・0.01 + 3.202.102(-0.02) = 400 - 2400 = -2000. ]

your〜success.の正しい訳は「皆様の尽力と貢献が、当社の成功の原動力です。」なのですが、 「皆様の尽力と貢献（Your~contritution)は、当社の企業の成功につなげること（what〜success）」を意訳すると正しい訳になるのですか？ （is以降の訳が... 続きを読む

As president, I would like to express my deep appreciation for your hard work and dedication this year. Your commitment and contributions are what drives our company's success. 7450