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* 次の英文を読んで, あなたの考えを,[条件]と [記入上の注意〕に従って40語以上 50語程度の英語 で書きなさい。*印のついている語句には、本文のあとに[注]があります。 (10点) This kind of art IS called "street art" or "graffiti." Those pictures sometimes become problems when thev are painted without *permission. *Banksy. Some *artists *paint on the *walls. bridges, and buildings in a town. But there are also some very popular street artists lilko One street artist says he makes street art for *poor people who can't go to th。 In one Japanese town, children painted a picture on the wall of a *tunnel with their teachers and parents. art museum. The tunnel looks much better now and people in the town like it In another city, after a picture of flowers was painted on a street near the train station the *number of bikes that were *parked there illegally got Smaller. Do you think street art can make your town better? paint…(絵を)描く artist………芸術家,アーティスト walls, bridges, and buildings… 壁や橋, 建物 Banksy……バンクシー (ストリートアートで有名な芸術家の1人) poor……貧しい number……数 [注) permission… 許可 tunnel………トンネル ちゅうりん (be) parked illegally ………違法に駐輪(車)される [条件) 下線部の質問に対するあなたの考えを,その理由が伝わるように書きなさい。 (記入上の注意 ① 【記入例】 にならって, 解答欄の下線 の上に1語ずつ書きなさい。 *符号(,.?!など)は語数に含めません。 * 50 語を超える場合は, 解答欄開の破線。 で示された行におさまるように書きなさい。 2 英文の数は問いません。 ③ 【下書き欄】は, 必要に応じて使ってかまいません。 【記入例) Hello, everyone! I'm Tiffany from Canada. I'm twenty-one old. Hob years August 12, 2020. That was 50 語 a lot of fun.

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TOEIC・英語 大学生・専門学校生・社会人

英検に向けて英作文を書きました 添削や「こうしたらもっと良くなる」という点がありましたら、ぜひコメントよろしくお願いします🙇‍♂️ 客観的な意見を取り入れて、今後さらに良い作文を書きたいと思うので、ご協力お願いします

Topic Agree or Disagree: Help from the local community is crucial for raising children POINTS → discipline、safety、working parents、privacy 「肯定意見」 Iagree with the statement that help from the local community is crucial for raising children. There are two reasons to support this contention: the promotion in working for parents and the respect of discipline. These days, almost all the companies in Japan are facing the problem which is how they treat their employees who have children. In fact, these people, especially women, have difficulty in working. What the matters worse, many of them are forced to quit their job because of raising children. To deal with this problem, it is necessary for the local community to help parents raise children. Moreover, help from others will lead to promote the rate of women who continued working after childbirth. In other words, thanks to help from the local society, Japanese companies can improve their working environment. In addition to this, children will be sociable and polite if they are taken care of by another person of family. Also, children will realize the importance of cooperation with others. For these reasons, I strongly believe the local society should do more for parents who raise children.

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英語 高校生

3段落目の2文目でどこで他の州でと言っているのかわかりません。。stateとthis stateと分けているからstateが他の州という意味になるのでしょうか?

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