とても拙い英文で申し訳ないのですが、ピンクの斜め線の部分はどう直したら良くなるでしょうか？ タイトルは　rush hourの交通渋滞をどう減らすか　というものです 2枚目が模範解答です お願いします🙇‍♀️

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[4] Read the instructions and write a well-organized answer in English. (50 points) Virtual reality (VR)* refers to a high-quality simulation of reality created by a computer. Probably the most famous use for VR so far is gaming. But VR has also been used to improve society in various fields such as education, medicine, and engineering. Describe a single specific way that virtual reality can be used to improve society. Explain your idea in detail in about 100 English words. Notes: Virtual reality (VR)*: VR systems use special glasses that completely cover the user's eyes. These glasses show a very realistic picture of a world created by the computer. In addition, the systems can tell when the user moves their head, arms, and sometimes other body parts. So users can control the action by natural movement. Some systems even let users feel like they are touching things. Thus, VR systems can make users feel like they are really in another world. 〔答案〕 I suggest you to simulation with VR. For example, doctors can practice operation. I have the three reasons. First, VR's display is very real. So doctors can do as if real simulation. Second, every one can make simulation software. If you want add patients information to VR and study how to make software, you can make VR software to yourself. Third, medical professors can use VR simulation in lecture. If they do this, Students who want be surgeon in the future will reduce about operation's anxiety. In this way, VR have a lot of possibilities that useful of medical field. For these reasons, I suggest VR simulations.

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ES ⓘ Put the underlined parts into Japanese. (▶5-1) 1) You can invite whoever wants to come. あなたは来たいと思う人誰でも招待できる。 2) Whoever comes, tell them I'm out. 誰が来ようとも、私は留守だと言って下さい。 3) I really trust Kenta. I believe whatever he says. 私はケンタをとても信頼している。私は彼が言うことは 4) Whatever he says, don't worry too much about it. 彼が何を言っても、それについて心配しすぎなくて良い? 何でも信じている。 5) Whichever way you take, you will get to the station. どちらの道を選んでも、あなたは駅につける だろう。 2 Put the underlined parts into Japanese. 1) You can use my bike whenever you want. 2) Whenever you come, you'll be welcome. 3) You can sit wherever you like. どこでもあなたの好きなところに座ることができる。 4) However busy she is, she walks her dog every day. どれだけ彼女が忙しくても、彼女は毎日 5) However fast I run, I won't catch the bus. 私がどれだけ速く走っても、私は バスを捕まえることはできない。 (▶5-2) あなたは欲しいときいつでも私のバイクを使ってよい。 あなたが来るときいつでも、あなたを歓迎する。 3 Put the words in the correct order. 1)ポプはとても率直だ。思ったことは何でも口にする。 (his mind, whatever, is on) Bob is very frank. He says_whatever on his mind is 2) 私のチケットをだれでもほしい人にあげるよ。 (whoever, to, it, wants). I'll give my ticket whoever wants to it 3) 私は運賃がどんなに安くても船旅はしたくない。 (is, cheap, however, the fare) I don't want to travel by ship, however the fare is cheap 4) 何が起きてもあきらめないで。 (matter, no, what, happens) don't give up. No matter what happens. 5) 私の兄は写真が大好きだ｡ 彼はどこにいてもいつも写真を撮る。 (where, is, he, matter, no) My brother loves photography. He always takes pictures, no matter where. he is Put the Japanese sentences into English. 1) 冷蔵庫から何でも好きなものを取って召し上がってください。 Help yourself to whatever you like 2) グリーンさんの息子は彼女が行くところはどこでもついて来る。 Ms. Green's son follows her wherever she goes. 3) だれが開けようとしても、 そのドアは開かなかった。 No matter who tried (fare) Give It a Try (help oneself to ~) from the fridge. 4) このレストランは私が来るときはいつでも混んでいる。 This restaurant is always crowded when I come the door wouldn't open. 5) ケイスケはどんなに暑くてもエアコンを使わない｡ conditioner) episuke doesn't use the air conditionemar canon matter how hot it is. Write about yourself or your friends / family. Use however in 1) and whenever in 2). 1. However first get up, I can't get out of the house 2) Whenever come Study

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EXERCISES 1 Fill in the blanks. Use which/ when /where/ why/how. 1) これは両親が新婚旅行で泊まったホテルだ。 This is the hotel where my parents stayed on their honeymoon. 2) うるう年は2月が29日ある年だ。 A leap year is a year ( when February has 29 days. 3) うるう年は4年に1回しかやってこない年だ。 I A leap year is a year (which only comes around once every four years. 4) グレッグがテニス部をやめた理由は明らかではない。 artasovehari seriellgmoode maile.es The reason Greg quit the tennis team is not clear. why 5) 私はよく英語の歌を聴く。 そうやって、私は英語を勉強している。 Yometerror I often listen to English songs. That's how wo) I study English.. 2 Complete the sentences. Use when/where/why. Add a comma if necessary. 1) Last Saturday was when I moved into a new apartment.(4-2, 3) 2) Jill lied* to me. That's why lie ｢うそをつく」 3) How far is the hotel from where when I'm angry at her. we are now? I left for Paris. 4) I was in Rome until last Sunday. 3 Put the words in the correct order. Use when/ where / why / how. 5) Could you wait until next week, (so busy, won't, I, be)? → when I won't be so busy 1) (we, the beach, played) was very beautiful. The beach where we played 2) Last night I had a bad dream. (I, that's, didn't, sleep) well. Last night I had a bad dream. The reason I don't eat egg 10 ode Flame ym sezoqgo orlw yatam was very beautiful. That's why I didn't sleep 3) I still remember July of 2014, (I, a week, spent) in Okinawa on my school trip. I still remember July of 2014, when I spent a week in Okinawa on my school trip. (became, we, friends, that's). 4) We met at the summer camp three years ago. We met at the summer camp three years ago. That's why we became friends. (3) 私の父が勤めている銀行は私の学校の近くにある。 The bank where my father works (▶4-1) Give It a Try A Put the Japanese sentences into English. 1) 私は教科書を何度も読んだ。 このようにして, その試験に合格した。 I read the textbook many times. That's how I passed the exam 2) 私が卵を食べない理由はアレルギーがあるからだ。 (「~にアレルギーがある」 allergic to ~) is that I'm allergic to them. ●4) 私は、兄が暮らしているロンドンに行きたいと思っている。 of bryant I want to go to London, where my Write about yourself. 1) I remember the day when we first met. why she can't 2) I want to know the reason PS swim well. is near my school. brother lives

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2 ( 内の動詞を適切な形にしなさい。 (1) Jim (play) the piano for twenty years when he (win) the competition last year. had been playing Won (2) Lily (believe ) Bob's explanation about the incident until someone (tell) her the truth yesterday. told had believed (3) Jack (do) well in school all year before he (get) seriously ill last spring. had been doing got (4) My aunt and uncle (be) married for ten years before they (have) their first baby last July. had been had E 3 与えられた状況に合うように ( )内の語を並べかえ, 全文を書きなさい。 ただし、不要な計 1つずつ含まれています。 A (1)状況 ユカは街で幼なじみに出くわし, ついつい長話になって…..。

赤のカギカッコのwhereって関係代名詞ですか？詳しく教えて欲しいです🙇‍♀️

10 mass production: each tree is built to a different design - as we see at first glance. And nowhere are these astonishing objects to be found in greater numbers than close to where millions live, They are the wonders we take for granted, lining the streets, crowding the parks, and dominating the landscape.

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問題 3 以下の英文を読んで、次の問いに答えなさい。 (*のついた語には語注が ある。) If you are able to step outside and hear many types of birds, you might also have a greater feeling of well-being. Two studies show that hearing diverse birdsongs may help increase our happiness. (A) One study was done by researchers at California Polytechnic State University. A research team studied the effects of birdsong ( 1 ) people walking through a park in the U.S. state of Colorado. A biology graduate student, Danielle Ferraro, led the study. "There could be an evolutionary reason why we like birdsong so much. And the idea is that when we hear birdsong it could signal safety to us," Ferraro says. There could be many other reasons, too. Ferraro states that in some areas around the world birdsong can also signal the arrival of spring and nice weather. Bird diversity, she adds, can also mean a healthy environment. She explained her study to Voice of America (VOA). Ferraro and her team played recorded songs from a diverse group of birds native to the area. They did this on hiking trails in a park in Boulder, Colorado. (2) several weeks, the researchers played recorded birdsong at certain times of the day and other times they did not. Then they talked with hikers after they ( 3 ). Hikers who heard the recorded diverse birdsongs reported a greater sense of well-being than the people who heard simply the natural birds. The researchers suggest that both the bird sounds and biodiversity* can increase feelings of well-being. Ferraro explained that she used native birdsong for the study. This way it would sound as natural as possible. They also did the study during the summer. She explains why this is important. "So the study ( 4 ) in the summer and that's kind of important because the spring is most birds' breeding* season. And if we play the birdsong during breeding season, that might have disturbed them. (B) We didn't want to disturb the birds too much." The study was published in an academic journal called the Royal Society B in December 2020. - 10- ◇M2 (310-15)

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実戦問題 以下のTOPICについて, あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。 ●POINTSは理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。 ただし,これら以 外の観点から理由を書いてもかまいません。 語数の目安は80語~ 100語です。 HA TOPIC 2 Today, many people simply throw things away if they are broken. Do you ataubo think this trend will increase in the future? POINTS ●Recycling ●Quality ●Repair 718

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<It Sitv完了カゴ Exercises in English Composition St would (could/night It 3 仮定法を用いて文を作る 日本語の意味に合うように下線部に適当な語句を書きなさ い。(必要に応じて, [和文和訳] の空欄をうめて考えてみよう。) <ITS'+Vカコ ~ St would (could /might) tv TS > (1) 母が助けてくれなかったら、私は勉強と部活動を両立させることはできなかった だろう。 和文和訳〉「隠れた目的語を補う] + [別の表現に言い換える] 私の母が(私 を) 助けてくれなかったら, 私は勉強と部活動においてうまくやることはできなかっただろう If my mother had not helped me, I would not have been able to balance: and club activities. (2) 時空を超えて移動できるとしたら、過去と未来, どちらに行きたいですか。 和文和駅 [隠れた主語を補う] (あなたは) 時空を超えて移動できるとしたら、過去と未来、 どちらに行きたいですか If you can beyonal rime and space~ would go you the past or the future? (3) 宝くじで一等が当たったら, 世界一周旅行に行くだろう。 和文和駅 [隠れた主語を補う] + [名詞を分解する] (私は) 宝くじで一等が当たったら世界中 を) 旅行するだろう If Ⅰ won first prize in the lotterly, I would travel around the world. (4) 先週からテスト勉強を始めていたら、 今夜徹夜する必要はないのに。 和文和訳[隠れた主語を補う] (私は)先週にテスト勉強を始めていたら,今夜徹夜する必要はないのに If Ⅰ hadstarted studying for the test lastweek, I wouldn't have to stay up. all night tonight. (5) 今週末に野球の練習がなければ, 友だちと買い物に行くのに。 和文和駅 [隠れた主語を補う] 今週末に野球の練習がなければ、 (私は) 友だちと買い物に行くのに If I not played baseball practice, I would go shopping with my friends. 3 Hints (1) 24 部活動 □club activities 「AとBをうまくやる」 do well Aand (2) 23 時空を超えて beyond time and space (3) 22, 23 宝くじで一等が当た る win first prize in the lottery (4) 23. 24 徹夜する stay [sit] up all night (5) 22, 23 野球の練習 u baseball practice

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Date people I agree with more should become vegetarians in the future. I have two reasons. Firstly, it is bad for the environment to have live stocks. Having live-stacks have many bad prints For instance, farmer have to use large water. By using whater too much, gloval. warming will be increasing. Also, farmer have to make food for animals, so they will use large gas or electric.. Secondly, metabora they eat a • because th lot of wents or fishs. Meat and fish contain ail, so they attect our health badly. Vegitable have less oil, and enough nutrients. Many people will protect their health, and Can live longer. Therefore, it is good for us to become vegetarians. I think we should eat only vegetable.