英検準一級ライティングです。 添削等お願いしますm(_ _)m points ・construction costs ・effect on local people ・spending by visitors ・the environment

Q, is it a good idea that governments to build tourist sites such as theme parks and museums. A,lagree with the idea that local governments should build tourist sites such as theme parks and museums. This will be an opportunity to save money in order to deal with accidents and keep their population. Firstly, if local governments do not build tourist sites, the government can save a lot of money because construction costs are very expensive. Thus the governments can use the money in order to treat troubles such as epidemics or disasters. Moreover, if the governments construct tourist sites, more and more tourists visit the local regions. Thus, the number of people who want to live there quietly increases. For these reasons, I do not think it necessary that local governments should build tourist sites such as theme parks and museums.

英検2級のライティングの添削お願いします。

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英検準一級ライティングです。 添削等お願いしますm(_ _)m points, ・globalization ・Government policies ・price ・quality

Q, Do you think that Japanese consumers will buy more imported products in the future. A,I do not agree with the idea that Japanese consumers will buy more imported products. This will be an opportunity to save money and to keep products working longer. Firstly, the consumers do not buy imported products, the consumers are able to save money because most imported products are expensive. Thus, the consumers can spend their money doing their favorite things. Moreover, if the consumers buy not imported products but products made in Japan, the consumers can use the products for a long time because imported products are fragile such as the smartphones made in china. Thus, the consumers will not need to buy one again. For these reasons, I don't think Japanese consumers will buy imported products in the future.

関係詞 314 as=the case with these affairs=the rumorでしょうか？？

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英検準2級writing添削お願いします。 (2020第3回) 一応50語行ってます。

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英検2級、添削お願いします。 Today,some people buy products that are good for the environment.Do you think buying such products will become more commo... 続きを読む

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(24)がなぜ3になるのか わかる方いらっしゃったら解説お願いしますm(_ _)m

Cows Need Friends Milk production is big business. In North America, for example, one person consumes on average over 150 kilograms of milk every year. To supply the huge amount needed, big farms use machines that automatically feed cows and take their milk. Because ( 24 ), the cost of producing milk is lower. On such farms, though, it is easy for diseases to spread from one animal to another. This can lead to many cows dying on one farm. As a result, cows are often kept separately from a young age. Scientists in Canada researched the effects of keeping young cows in this way. They compared such cows with ones that had been kept with another cow. The researchers showed a red plastic container, which the cows had never seen before, several times to each cow. The cows that had been kept in pairs were interested in the container_at first but soon ignored it. ( 25 )。 the cows that had been kept alone continued to react as if it was the first time they had seen the Container. The researchers concluded that cows kept alone are more sensitive to new things. This is important news for farmers. If cows cannot get used to the feeding and milking machines, milk production slows down. The researchers believe farmers would have fewer problems with feeding and milking if cows were kept in very small groups, rather than separately. The researchers also say that diseases are not sucha big problem for small groups. There should be little risk of ( 26 ) if only two or three of them are kept together. (24) 1 each cow is much larger 2 the milk can be kept longer 4 cheaper food is being used proie 3 fewer people are needed (25) 1 Later on 2 At last 3 In other words 4 On the other hand (26) 1 feeding cows too much 3 wild animals attacking 2 losing many animals 4 young cowS staying healthy

英検準一級のライティングの添削をしてほしいです これから何個か書くつもりなのでみてくださったら嬉しいです。 問題 TOPIC Agree or disagree :Help from the local community is crucial for raising ... 続きを読む

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英検の問題で分からないところがあったので教えてください🙇‍♀️ 青線を引いたところの和訳をお願いしたいです。 翻訳アプリを使ってもよくわかりませんでした。 よろしくお願いします。

Masters of the Desert “Bedouin” is a name given to some of the people who live in North Africa and the Middle East. Unlike most people, many Bedouins do not ( 24 Instead, they are nomads, which means that they are always moving about. They walk around the hot deserts of countries like Egypt and Israel, leading their camels and sheep to gras and water. Life in the desert is not easy, but over thousands of years, Bedouins have developed unique skills to help them survive. Some people estimate that there are around 20 million Bedouins in the world today. However, ( 25 ). Because many of them are traveling, it is impossible to count them all. In recent years, however, many Bedouins have given up their traditional way of life. This is because the amount of land controlled by governments has increased, which has made it harder for the Bedouins to travel freely. Some of them now live in urban areas and have regular jobs, such as driving taxis and working in restaurants. Some Bedouins have found work with the Israeli army as trackers. A tracker is a person who follows people by using signs left on the ground, such as the marks left by feet or tires. Trackers must know their environment well and be quick to notice anything unusual. ( 26 ), with their desert survival skills, Bedouins are excellent trackers. About 1,600 of them are now serving in the Israeli army, and their ability to notice dangers along Israel's borders is helping to protect the countily. 1 sleep lying down 2 live in one place 3 eat meat or fish 4 use paper money 1 their exact numbers are unknown 2 there were many more in the past 3 the groups have no government 4 they all meet once every year 1 Naturally 2 Occasionally 3 Secondly 4 Equally

英検2級のライティングなのですが、直した方が良いところを教えて頂けたら嬉しいです😭

Grade 2 4 ライティング 以下の TOPIC について、あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。 POINTS は理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。ただし,これら以外 の観点から理由を書いてもかまいません。 語数の目安は80語~100語です。 解答は、解答用紙のB面にあるライティング解答欄欄に書きなさい。なお、解答欄の 外に書かれたものは採点されません。 解答が TOPIC に示された問いの答えになっていない場合や,TOPIC からずれて いると判断された場合は,0点と採点されることがあります。TOPIC の内容をよく 読んでから答えてください。 TOPIC Some people say that more apartment buildings should allow pets such as dogs and cats. Do you agree with this opinion? POINTS Cleanliness Lifestyles Neighbors