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I think that it is necessary for people to go to important historical sites in order to understand history better. I have two reasons. First, if I go to important historical sites, Staff of historical sites will talk about history. hearing about history is eaiser understand than reading textbook about history. Second, it is good experience for us to go to important was historical sites. Because I can see tools and wepons was used to catch animals and to collect foods by early people. That's why, I belive that people go to important historical sites to understand history better.

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・20年度第2回 Topic Agree or disagree : More needs to be done to so 98 Point • Accident 116 agree Reason I Crime Food 技術が発達する。 No. •Technology Date 120~150語 be done to improve public safety 2014 125 130 ho 警察官のパトロールや出動によって被害を少なくすることが できる。もしなかったら、たくさんの事件が起こってしょう。 Iona (= 1 7 11 3 11 312/5797 07130 薬の研究は私たちの寿命をのばすことにつながる I agree with more needs to be done To To improve public safety. There are two points to support my opinion. First, there will be less crime, because, police of patrol and they go to the place which happen incidents. I can be less. It it were not for public safety, it would causes crime. Second, technology is improving, Reserchers are able to study a lot by support from our government. For example, medicine's research is Connect to extend our life time and automation's study is easy to our life. So, improving public safely is more convinience than fall into one, I According to the reasons stated above, I think that more needs to be done to improve public safety, And, it become improve public safety is cunvinience

6の③の問題についてです。 私が書いた英作文を採点してほしいです！！ここはこうだからダメ、こう書いた方が良いなどありましたら、教えて頂きたいです🙇🏻‍♀️ よろしくお願い致します😭

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6の②の問題についてです。 need become very careful 👆🏻この英文を採点してほしいです！！ここはこうだからダメ、こう書いた方が良いなどありましたら、教えて頂きたいです🙇🏻‍♀️ 至急お願い致しますm(_ _)m

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(a)について、④は過去分詞のseen、⑥はsmilingになるのですが、なぜそうなるのですか？

(3) 由香が,英語の授業でフランス (France) にある有名な絵画 (painting)について紹介した。 Hello. Today I'll show you my favorite painting This is a famous painting (see) in a museum in France. Some people say the woman in this picture looks sad, but I don't think so. She looks happy because I think she is (smile). Please tell me your ideas. Thank you. (a) 下線部④, ⑥ の ( の語を最も適切な形になおして1語で書きなさい。 (b) 下線部⑤を同じ内容で別の表現に書きかえるとき, 最も適切な英文を次のア~エから1つ 選び,記号を書きなさい。 {} ア I agree with them. ウ Ⅰ don't think it's beautiful. イ I don't agree with them. I I think it looks sad, too.

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NO, DATE I don't think that Japan should accept more people from other countries. I have two reasons. First people from other countries have different culture. If they work in Japan, they have to understand Japanese culture. So, Japanese companys can not accept more people from other countries to work. Second, I belived that Japanese people prefer thing made in Japan to thing made, in other countries. Because, most Japanese people likes made in Japan. That's why, I don't think Japan should hire more foregin people. 84語

この286番の④goodは ｢良い方を見せてあげる｣とはならないのですか？ 理由を教えてください

286 87 00 This photograph of my friend is not very good. Let me show you ( ) one. 1 about ③ simple ② another @good Some board members agreed with the president's prop didn't (神戸学院大学 ) (中京大学) 和訳 僕には2人兄弟がいる。 人は消防士でもう一人は警察官だ。 ｢もう一つ」を表すには? 286 (2) 「(何枚かある写真のうちの) もう1枚を見せてあげる」ということですか ら、 another を選びます。 「たくさんある中の1つ」 は aan を使います。 another = "an + other” でしたね。 この 「もう1つ追加」という感覚の another は入試頻出です。 和訳私の友達のこの写真はあまりよくない。もう1枚のを見せてあげるよ。 Fll another は 「おか わり」 でよく使われ る。

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Ⅰ. 次の太字の英単語に最も近い意味を持つものを,a~d. の中から1つ選びなさい。 解答 は解答用紙1枚目 (マークシート方式) の所定の解答欄にマークしなさい。 (1) opportunity a. charge b. choice chance d. check (3) criterion a standard b. criticism c. agreement d. sequence (5) compensation a. money given or received as payment for a loss b. mathematical statement showing equal parts c. event where people celebrate d. advantage given to only certain people (7) registration a act of recording information b. idea that leads to further discussion c. strong like or appreciation for another d. one part of a larger component (9) distribute a. derive from an original source b. make available to see c. hand out or deliver something d. be different from others (2) reject a. make illegal refuse to accept c. express support d. give an order (4) application formal request a 6. changed behavior official record d. expression of ideas (6) intervention a. event which results in the police arriving b. having the freedom to make decisions c. distance from front to back d. act of coming between groups in a dispute (8) density a. affection for someone or something X. need for food C degree to which an area is filled or covered d. state of ownership (10) circumstance a. outcome of an event b. addition that makes something better c. feeling or action in response to something d. condition or fact that affects a situation

年賀状を送ることに賛成か反対かと理由を書く問題の、理由の部分。 訳:私たちはそれらを作るのに時間がかかるからです。

問題BⅠ agree to make them This is because we take time