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3 あなたの中学校に,オーストラリアの姉妹校の生徒からメールが届きました。 そのメールを に英語を書いて返 読んで、次の 〔条件〕 に合うよう, くあなたのメール内の 事を完成させなさい。 [条件] ① 書き出しは I recommend を用いることとし, あなたがすすめる授業 (class) を 続けて書きなさい。 なお, 授業は 〔語群〕 から選んで書いてもよい。 ② なぜその授業をすすめるのかという理由も書くこと。 ③ まとまりのある5文程度の英語で書くこと。 なお、書き出しの文は1文と数え る。 <姉妹校の生徒からのメール> Hi! We are going to visit your school next month! We want to join some classes at your school during our stay. Many of us are interested in Japanese culture, so we want to have some experiences in the classes. Will you recommend one of your classes to us? James あなたのメール> Hi James! I'm glad to hear that you will come to our school! I recommend I hope you'll like the class. I am waiting for your email. 〔語群] 国語 = Japanese 英語 English 社会= social studies 音楽 = music 数学 = math 理科= science 美術 = art 体育 = P.E. 技術・家庭 = technology and home economics 道徳= moral education 総合的な学習の時間=the period for integrated studies 学級活動 = homeroom activities es q

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問題B. Read the first paragraph of an essay about on-line distance courses below. Use your own ideas and argue either FOR or AGAINST on-line distance courses. Complete the essay in English by adding about 80 100 words. On-line distance courses have become increasingly popular in the last Some twenty years. Some people think on-line courses offer many advantages compared with traditional courses. However, other people believe that it is only possible to study successfully face-to-face with a teacher in the classroom. 〔注〕 on-line distance course オンライン遠隔講座 face-to-face 対面式で ・解答欄には第2パラグラフ以降を書くこと。 ・解答欄末尾の所定の箇所に, 解答に用いた語の数を 「 80 words)」 のように 記すこと。 ・ただし, ピリオドやコンマなどの句読点は語数に含めません。

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問題A.下線部(a), (b) を英訳しなさい。 A novel by Soseki Natsume begins, "I am a cat. I don't have a name yet." Practically all human beings are given names when they are born. A name is important. 名前があってこそ、その人を,ほかの人から識別できる。 (a) This is not restricted to human beings. Animals and plants also have names. Just as in the case of human beings, once one becomes interested in a bird or a flower, one wants to know its name. 美しい花は,名前を知ろう が知るまいが美しい, という考え方もあるかもしれぬ。 (b) But it seems that if you first learn its name, you come close to the substance for the first time. [出典] 朝日新聞論説委員室 『ベスト・オブ・天声人語』 講談社インターナ ショナル B. Read the e-mail below. Imagine that you are Koki, a friend of Yuki. In reply to Yuki's e-mail, write your advice to her in about 80 words in English. them work with children, some with old people and some work for organisations that help clean the environment. Some of my friends have asked me if I want to do volunteer work with them at a local school at weekends. It sounds interesting, but I'm not sure if I want to work for no pay. Also, I have to study a lot for my course, I don't want to give up any course of my free time. My friends tell me that volunteer work is good for the community, and that I'll learn more about English culture. I understand that, but I'm still not sure. What would you do? Can you give me some advice? Yuki ・解答欄末尾の所定の箇所に、解答に用いた語の数を 「 (80 words)」 のように 記すこと。 ・ただし、解答欄に印刷されている部分およびピリオドやコンマなどの句読点 は語数に含めません。 From: Yuki Ushida To: Koki Ando Subject: Voluntary Work? Hi, Koki. How are you? Let me write in English, because you said you also want to practice English, right? I'm enjoying my classes here at Oxford University I've made a lot of friends since I arrived, and last week I joined a tennis club. Many of the students here at Oxford University do voluntary work. Some of 10

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20 15 Rothblatt believes that within twenty years, "mind clones*" will be humanity's biggest invention. (2) The concept of cloning human brains and placing them inside robotic bodies has been described in numerous science fiction works. However, Google director Ray Kurzweil believes that our bodies may be replaced by machines 第2段落 P P C ロスプラットは「頭脳 クローン」が人類最大 の発明になると信じて いる。 グーグル社の 人々の身体はやがて様 重役カーツワイルも、 械に置き換わり、デジ タル的に不死身となる。 人間が現れると信じて いる。 彼は著書の中 で、超知的な「トラン スヒューマン」が様々 な問題を解決すると同 時に、通常の人間をご within ninety years and that some people will become digitally immortal*. His 1999 book The Age of Spiritual Machines: When Computers Exceed Human Intelligence describes one possible future in which the boundaries between biological human intelligence and digital artificial intelligence blur*. Kurzweil mentions a possible 流の市民だと見なす future that seems both (3) promising and terrifying. If super intelligent transhumans* become hundreds of times smarter, many problems such as hunger, war, and pollution 【前途有望な未来像】 could be solved. However, (4)there is no guarantee that such computer-based 【恐ろしい未来像①】 ↑ intelligence would act “fairly” by ordinary human standards. According to Kurzweil, during the late 21st century humans who become part of super-intelligent AIsystems* 【恐ろしい未来像②】 来像を描いている。 might start to regard ordinary humans as second-class citizens. At some point, 25 ordinary people simply will not be able to keep up with the super-intelligent 【恐ろしい未来像③】 ↑ "transhumans." If you had the choice and could afford it, would you upload your own consciousness onto a computer? Would you like to purchase a robotic version brofis of yourself?

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入学・進学の時期を4月から9月に移行する (changing the start of the school year from April to September) 制度である「9月入 学」に対して、賛成か反対か、 あなたの立場を明らかにし、 その理由と 共に100語程度の英語で書きなさい。

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22. A Who is in ( ) of this class? B Mr. Keating is. A Oh, where is he? Dteach responsible ③lesson ④charge (産業能率

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☐ 1. The number of students in the French class ( ①is 2 are 3 have ) limited to thirty. () 4④has 2. A number of students ( ⑪have 2 are ) come to the event. has (亜細亜大) ④were 3. Both of my brothers ( ) married. Dis Par are was (芝浦工業大) ④be 4. Either my boss or I ( Dis ) supposed to attend the meeting next month. ②2 am ③ are will ( 東京電機大) ☐ 5. Neither Tina nor I ( ) to blame. Dam ②is ③ are ( 東京工芸大) ④can is 6. Not only you but also your wife ( ) invited to the company's event. ⑪were 2 are ③3 be 主語と動詞 (國學院大)

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Theme 97 100 ② that 371 彼女の帽子は青色だが、彼女の愛によく合っている。 Her hat, () is blue, goes well with her hair. ③ what ④ which ① where 成蹊大 ) study hard. ④ them 九州国際大) 372) There are thirty students in the class, most of ( ② which 発展 ① who ③ whom 373 I went to the supermarket near my house, () I happened to meet one of my old friends. ① that ② there ③ where Power Up! 72 非制限用法の関係詞 ④ which (愛知学院大) その意味のとり方 関係代名詞の場合は「接続詞+代名詞」 関係副詞の場合は 「接続詞+副詞」に置き 換えて、原則として前から後ろへ順に意味をとる。 He dismissed the man, who (= because he) was lazy. 彼はその男を解雇した。怠け者だったからだ) She sat up until midnight, when (= and then) she heard a strange noise. (彼女は真夜中まで起きていた, するとその時奇妙な物音が聞こえた) 368 (③) 日本人の謙虚さが誤解を生じさせる場合が多い。 69 Put the book back (to where it was when you're) through with it. マイケルはとても一生懸命働く。 だから私は彼を尊敬している。 1 (0) (3)そのクラスには生徒が30人いて、 彼らのほとんどは一生懸命勉強します。 (③) 私は家の近くのスーパーに出かけ、そこで旧友の1人に偶然出会った。 370 し終わっている」 関係副詞 why の先行詞省略 That is why 節 「そういうわけで~それが~する理由です)」 Theme 371 本間 => I respect Michael. That's because he works very hard. 「理由 + That's why + 結果」 「結果 + That's because + 理由」 97 非制限用法の関係詞 (1) 関係詞の前にコンマを置いて、先行詞について説明を付け加える用法。 (2)制限用法のある関係詞は、 関係代名詞のwho/which と関係詞の where / when だけである。 that/why/howにはこの用法はない。 (3)非制限用法では目的格関係代名詞であっても省略できない。 非制限用法の関係代名詞 which 本間は、 「人以外」 が先行詞で、 節内では主語の働きをしているので、主 代名詞の④ which が正解。 ② that はもともと限定性の強い関係代名詞 で、非制限用法では使わない。 本間のように、文の途中に挿入して先行詞に補足的説明を付け加える 「~だが」 「~で」 とあいまいに訳す。 「接続詞+代名詞」に置き換えるの 然である。 372 「前置詞 + 関係代名詞」 の非制限用法 most of whom ... 「前置詞+ 関係代名詞」にも非制限用法がある。 特に A of whom [which] がセットで関係詞節の先頭に置かれた Aにはall/ most/some/many/both neither などの数量 詞が用いられる。 ..... most of whom study hard...., and most of them st 373 非制限用法の関係副詞 where 非制限用法の where は 「そしてそこで」 (= and there) の意味 ... = where I happened to meet one of my old friends. ••• and there I happened to meet one of my old friend 旬 happen to do 「偶然[たまたま] 〜する」

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2.日本語に合うように()内の語句を並びかえ、英語で答えなさい。 ただし文頭に来る語も小文字にしてある。 (2点×4) (1) 私たちが去年聞いた合唱はとてもわくわくさせました。 The chorus (we / heard / was / last year / thát ) very exciting. (2) 戦争がないといいのになあ。 (3) 丸岡には約450年前に建てられた城があります。 (4) もし私があなたなら、先生の話を聞くのに。 I ( there / no / wish / wars / wére). Maruoka has (castle/d/bullt/ was / thaf) about 450 years ago. (were / if / you/I), I would ask the teacher. 3.次の英文は、 丸岡中学校英語科の先生方から卒業生のみなさんへの手紙の前半部分です。英文を読んで、あとの問いに答えなさい。 Hi, everyone. You are going to leave Maruoka J.H.S soon. You've been ( ① ) English hard for three years. We think that these three years are so precious, but also ( ② ) for all of you. Because of the emergency of COVID-19, you had to follow rules that made your lives tough. We want you all to enjoy your happy lives in the future. Here is some (③) through a person's life that you've ( 4 ) about in English and Japanese classes. His name is Hoshino Michio, a great Japanese photographer. Last year, the exhibition of Michio Hoshino was held in the Fukui City Art Museum. In Fukui, students use a textbook called “New Horizon", and the story of Michio has been told for about 20 years in this book. Besides, it was the 70th anniversary of his death. Many people remembered or learned about him through the exhibition. Michio was attracted by a photograph of the wilderness of Aldiskd. He decided to visit there and learned the skill of living without city conveniences. He loved the Inuit people and animals there. They also loved Michio. He also loved the nature there that was beautiful and severe. He said, “I love this place. It's cold here, so we go negy each other and talk about our lives. It makes our bodies warm. It makes our hearts warm, too. Because the weather is severe, people try to help each other, and become even better friends." His words give some hint to realize what a happy life is. Through the severe weather, he experienced both a tough and argreat life that satisfied him. (大問4に続きます) 注) anniversary 記念日 ~周年 hint ヒント 問(1) 本文中の(1)~(4)に入る最も適切なものを、下から選び、答えなさい。 (知・技点×4) 【 learned studying. hard advice 】 問(2) 次の質問に対し、 2語以上の英語で答えなさい。 (知・技 2点×2) ア How long has Michio's story been told in the textbook “New Horizon" ? イ What was Michio attracted by?