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2. We are doing this volunteer work not to make money but to help people in need. 3. He deeply regrets not being[having been] present at the birth of his daughter. 4. What I am worried about is not whether she studies hard (or not), but how she is doing. もいるわ!

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In my opinion, we should be promote equality and recognition of educational background. Now, stady devide continue to spread further. For example. TV problem I have watched showed a poor boy do in South Africa The boy who working housewort not have time enough to go and money enough to do To the school 26 I proved that there are many childrench would like to go to school. I believe that everyone , but they cannot do should understand those situation in which children suffer from having little money. Moreover, put into we. practice such as donating money and volunteer that we help them to study. Through those experiences, educational background may close to equality 11年

どうしてareがneededの前にいくんですか？

ヒント was で夏を始める。 ⑤そこでは何人のボランティアが必要なの? - 約20人だよ。 ( volunteers / many / needed / are / there / how)? How many volunteers needed are there? ヒント how many で文を始める。 ぎもん文 About twenty. YE - -About twenty.

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「クリック コンテンツ CAN-DO エネルギー問題に関する説明文を読んで、 概要を理解し, 自分の考えや意見を述べることができる。 Pre-reading What does "power" in this title mean? New Words ○ electricity [ilèktrísati] 電力 |cut [kåt] ← cut [kôt]...を切る, ･･･の供給をとめる じゅうでん charge [tfa:rdz] ･･･を充電する ✓ smartphone (s) [smártfôun(z)] スマートフォン ○ oil [5il] 石油 ○ coal [kóul] 石炭 ○ natural gas [nætfaral gés] 天然ガス ひかく ○ relatively [rélativli] 比較的 ✓ release [rilí:s] ・・・を放出する ■ dangerous [déindzaras] 危険な ✓ chemical(s) [kémikal(z)] 化学物質 health [hél0] 健康 fossil fuel(s) [fásl fjù:al(z)] 化石燃料 carbon dioxide [ka:rban daiáksaid] 二酸化炭素 ○ run out of ･･･ を使い果たす If the electricity were cut for one week, what would happen to our lives? The lights would be off. Trains コンテンツ would stop. We could not charge our smartphones. We depend on electricity to power most of our daily activities. How can we make the electricity we need for our future? 5 2 Japan uses a lot of oil, coal, and natural gas to make electricity. These resources are called “fossil fuels.” Fossil fuels have some good points. They are relatively cheap, and they can be used for many things. However, scientists say that we may run out of fossil 10 fuels in 100 years. There are other problems, too. Fossil fuels release carbon dioxide and other dangerous chemicals. They increase global warming and damage our health. [123 words] In-reading 1 What do we depend on to power our daily activities? 2 What do fossil fuels release? ●日本の一次エネルギー国内供給の割合 まいぞう ●世界のエネルギー資源の可採年数と確認可採埋蔵量 エネルギーなど 7.8 Other renewable energy, etc その他の再生可能 Natural gas 石油 51年 天然ガス 53年 石炭 153年 Oil 石油 187兆m3 39.7 天然ガス Water power 23.8 水力 3.3 1兆7,067億 バーレル Coal 石炭 25.4 資源エネルギー庁 (2016) 106 one hundred and six TIT 11,393億トン 日本原子力文化財団 (2016)

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I want TO do some volunteer work I think so. I have two reasons. First, they can watch movies abouts education. For example, how to grown flower how to read English and so on. Second, they are able to use many computers 7 I think it helps their future. Therefore I believe students ought to have more time to use computers.

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Hi! many club Guess what! I joined the school band at my high school. My school has activities, so I didn't know which one to choose. My older sister is in the school band, and she said she really enjoys it. She suggested I join, too. I like the school band, but learning a musical instrument is hard. We have band practice three times a week. Do you think every student should take part in club activities? Your friend, Ethan

英検準2級英作文 採点お願いします🥲 ／から読んでいただけると嬉しいです！

is important. [herefore veller 2 you for volunteer work is amazing. Yes, I think it is a good ide I have two reasons. First, they can Time than people who get up can learn many things because they have more Second, they late. are able to prepare for next classes. I think it is the most important in studying. Therefore, I belive -up early to study in the morning is fantastic. getting

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Yes, I think it is a good idea. I have two reasons. First they build nice friendships because they can Can communicate with foreigners. • many things such as Second, they are able to learn ab cultures, histories, and language. Learning about foreign countries is important. Therefore, I believe going to other countries for volunteer work is amazing.

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BO (2)次は,かえで町で開催されるイベントのお知らせです。 Kaede Summer Festival We will have Kaede Summer Festival in Kaede Park in August. There will be more than 60 shops, and you can enjoy many events on stage. In the evening, you will see beautiful fireworks. Come and enjoy the summer! Schedule <Day 1> Saturday, August 10 From 9 a.m. to 9 p.m. 10:00 Yosakoi Dance 1:30 Music Performance by 6:00 Mr. William Teller Bon-Odori 7:00 Fireworks Show Information about Events Mr. William Teller will join our festival. He is a famous singer around the world. When he was younger, he lived in Kaede Town for one year. He decided to come back for Kaede Summer Festival this year. Come and enjoy his great music! <Day 2> Sunday, August 11 From 9 a.m. to 8 p.m. 000.00 00002 11:00 Dance Performance by children 3:00 Yosakoi Dance 6:00 Bon-Odori 7:00 Fireworks Show Kaede Yosakoi dance team will show their performance. They won a Yosakoi contest in Hokkaido last year. Their performance will be exciting. They have made their dance easy for the people of Kaede Town. You can dance with them! On the second day, children of the dance club at Kaede Elementary School will perform their dance. They practiced dancing hard for this festival. Enjoy their cool dance! will sď You can see the fireworks show from anywhere in the park. * Children under 13 years old can't enjoy the festival after 6 p.m. without a parent. (E) schedule anywhere どこでも W in evil won bis vti alueji ni rood asw.exp VT to adband pig box by var Joods moilimbi amox fox ral0Y+ rady (nam you of ved Imobre VIO 2008 in noble nibit won a toy tili da ni vil o bha alging so I -7-

こんばんは英作文の添削をお願いします！ たくさんの人の意見が欲しいです！ 1、2枚目が下書きでこの文章と点数です 最初で満点をとりたいのでchat GPTを交えて文を書き直しました。不自然な文があったら教えてください！ 明日の午後提出です！

I'm going to talk about an experience that changed my life Was when I studied studying abroad in Niseko, Hokkaido. I stayed for a total of 2 months last summer I made a lot of friends. and this summer. Speaking in both Japanese and English deepened our bond. Even after studying abroad we l are still in touch. We are going to have a reunion in Tokyo on Christmas Actually, I hadn't been good at English before I studied abroad. A friend of mine said "Don't be afraid ". Then to me •get rid of my weakness in English. I had a conversation with my I was able to native teacher in English through the activitities. In these activities, had a We did BBQ, cooked, and went sightseeing. It was d again, I would like to go skiing. lot of fun. If I could study abroad in Niseko to Niseko. You can enjoy Niseko's lifestyle Please yo m