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Topic Agree or Disagree: Help from the local community is crucial for raising children POINTS → discipline、safety、working parents、privacy 「肯定意見」 Iagree with the statement that help from the local community is crucial for raising children. There are two reasons to support this contention: the promotion in working for parents and the respect of discipline. These days, almost all the companies in Japan are facing the problem which is how they treat their employees who have children. In fact, these people, especially women, have difficulty in working. What the matters worse, many of them are forced to quit their job because of raising children. To deal with this problem, it is necessary for the local community to help parents raise children. Moreover, help from others will lead to promote the rate of women who continued working after childbirth. In other words, thanks to help from the local society, Japanese companies can improve their working environment. In addition to this, children will be sociable and polite if they are taken care of by another person of family. Also, children will realize the importance of cooperation with others. For these reasons, I strongly believe the local society should do more for parents who raise children.

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しまう Relative Clause: Fill in the gaps to complete the sentences. 吉 Select from: That, Which, Where, When, Whose, Who 1. Neil Armstrong is the Astronaut was the first to walk on the moon. 2. A surgeon is a doctor per forms operations. 3. California is a state in Amer ica gover nor is the famous actor Arnold Schwar zenegger. 4. The Volga is a river is the longest river in Europe. 5. J.K. Rowling is an author “Harry Potter” series of books are very popular. 6. A dictionary is a book gives us the meaning of words. I can try Fugu? “Romeo and Juliet" 7. Is there a restaurant around here 8. Shakespeare was an English author wrote 9. A hospital is a place sick people go to become healthy again. 10. New Zealand is a country has more sheep than people. 11. Gr aduat ion is an event you celebrate graduating school or university. 12. Carnivores are animals only eat meat. 13.A dentist is a person checks and helps take care your teeth. 14. Ringo Starr is the drummer in the Beatles name was Richard Starkey when he was born. 15. Stefani Germanotta is a singer stage name is "Lady Gaga” . 16. August is the month many Japanese return to their hometown for Obon. ser ved his favour i te food. 17. To celebrate John' s Birthday they went to a restaurant 18. My car, is very expensive, is a Mercedes Benz. 19. Brazil is the country hosts the next Soccer Wor Id Cup in 2014. 20.1 like movies have happy endings 21.1 dislike people who 22.1 like places where 23.1 don't like it when 24.1 like animals that An interesting story - Rewrite the story using who, which, that where or and. which who I was sitting in a café. 1 often go there for a drink after work. I called the wai ter. I know him quite well. I asked for a cup of coffee. While I was waiting I looked at a newspaper. It was lying on the table. I started reading an article on the front page. It said: "Police are looking for a woman, Cather ine. She has been mi ssing from her home for two weeks.'1 looked at the photo. It showed a Woman with dark cur ly hair, she had a round face. I recognized it at once. She was my new neighbor . She had moved in just 2 weeks before.

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