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2 次の中学生の敏夫 (Toshio)と雅子 (Masako)と留学生のボビー(Bobby) の夏休み中の会話文を読ん で、あとの問いに答えなさい。 Bobby: Hi, Toshio. Our city has the Himawari Festival for three days every August, right? Masako told me about it. That's right. I go to the festival every year. Toshio: Bobby: Toshio: Bobby: Toshio: That's nice. So, you went to the festival on August 21, right? (B) Right. Bobby: So, the festival won't start on Toshio's birthday this year. Masako: Right. I will go with my brother on the second day this year. The music club in our city will have a concert. They will play music from 10:40 to 11:00 in the morning. Their performances are wonderful. My brother and I enjoy their concert at the festival every year. We love music. I play the flute, and he plays the guitar. Bobby: Sounds nice! I love music, too! Toshio: Bobby, you play the piano very well. Last Thursday, I listened to your piano performance at your house. I really enjoyed it. And your brother plays the violin, right? Yes. My father plays the violin, too. And my mother plays the piano. Everyone in my family loves music. Then, let's go to the Himawari Festival together and enjoy the concert! Can your family come? Bobby: (C) How about you, Toshio? Toshio: Well, the second day is Saturday this year. You know, I'm on the school baseball team. We have practice every Saturday, so I can't go with you. I'm sorry. I will go to the festival with my parents and my sister on the first day. Bobby: Masako: Who do you usually go to the festival with? (A) With my parents and my sister. Every year, we join the festival on the first day. Last year, it was on my birthday, so my sister bought a nice bag for me at the festival. Masako: OK. Bobby: Well, can we enjoy any food at the festival? Toshio: Sure. You can eat your favorite food there.. Bobby: My favorite food? Do you mean my favorite Japanese food? Toshio: Yes. Guess what. Bobby: Toshio: (D) Well, is it sushi or sukiyaki? No. Masako, you said that you had it with your family last Sunday. Masako: Oh, I had yakisoba for lunch and oden for dinner that day, but we can't eat oden at the festival. We can eat () at the festival, right? Right! You can enjoy it at the festival! Bobby: Toshio: 5 10 15 25

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22D1S SAT OF 応用 llow) MOLIET 問1 地図を見て、次の対話文の空欄に入れるのに最も適当なものを、 ア~エのうちから選び,記号で答えなさ い｡ 対話をしている2人は★印のところにいるものとします。 A: Excuse me. Could you (地図) tell me the to the post office? One wa B: A: I see. Thank you very much. 7 Go down this street to the bank and turn right at that corner. You'll find it right across the street from the bank. 1 Go along this street to the end of the street. Then turn left. It'll be on your right. Go down this street and turn left at the second corner. Soon you'll find it on the left. I Go along this street to the bank and turn left at that corner. You'll find it on the right. park book- store post office way bank super market TH (I) station

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I don't think scare people's salaries should be based on their job performance. I have two reasons. In the first place, It should be changed from their performance to age. As they get older, many people will have their family, so they need a lot. of money. If their salavies base on age, they can live in peace. In the Second place, some people don't have the skills. For example, people who have disability may not have enough skills. If their salaries be based on r their age, they can't get enough money. Last of all I think people's salaries had better be based on their age. It has a lot of benefit than being based on their job performance. Mary people can live in peace

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21年度第2回 I 61 -74. agree with the idea that it is beneficial for workers to change jobs often for the following two reasons. The first reason is that it can change working conditions. I often hear that workers want to take a Vacation after their children borned, but it is difficult by company.. Therefore, the idea enables workers to forme working environment. The second reason is that workers are able to get motivation by changing their workplace. I think that The more the time passed, the less workers passion for their tast: I think that everyone should have motivation for new things. It is increasing their quality of life. For these reasons I mentioned above, I think that it is good effect for working people to change jobs often. Tot

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Grade 2 4 ライティング 以下の TOPIC について、 あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。 POINTS は理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。 ただし、 これら以外 の観点から理由を書いてもかまいません。 語数の目安は80語~ 100語です。 解答は、 解答用紙のB面にあるライティング解答欄に書きなさい。 なお、 解答欄の 外に書かれたものは採点されません。 解答が TOPIC に示された問いの答えになっていない場合や, TOPIC からずれて いると判断された場合は, 0点と採点されることがあります。 TOPIC の内容をよく 読んでから答えてください。 TOPIC Today, many buildings collect rainwater and then use it in various ways, such as giving water to plants. Do you think such buildings will become more common in the future? POINTS Cost Emergency Technology

What day of Kawamoto’s diary impressed you most? Why? ここの問題の和訳と解答例を教えてほしいです。

Let's Read [2] EO 29977 Muty base ==I2+0)-ASTELAT. 1945年5月6日, 子 に投下され。 2 多くの中学生も牲になりました。 当時広島県立広島第二中学校(二中)の WAZI だっくんもその一人です。 くんの日記には、 1944年12月1日から2日前の 1945年8月4日までの日々の出来が SKRY 説明に書かれています。 Before You Read Hit 2. 20 ような生活していたと い出すか 42 自分と同 New Words commute komt 1 stoom or in tečin unfortunately jeniti] delcy(ed) worled saril ceremonyan dind Deignied) (d) lief-1 happen t • ga on Goal Neading を読み取り、 Speaking 筆者に伝え合うことができる。 From the Diary of Kawamoto Itsuyoshi 祝日 河んくんの日記。 拓が手に入りにくい時代だったので、 の伝 書かれています。 April 4 (Wednesday), Sunny Today was a happy day for me. From today, I am going to commute to Nicht. I went to Hiroshima on the 6:50 a.m. steam train. Unfortunately, it was delayed. I was worried, "What will happen to me?" When I arrived at Nicht, the ceremony was already going on. After I explained my delay, they let me in. I sighed with relief. $ 5 300 15 - April 15 (Sunday), Sunny Today is the third Sunday. I went to school and at last we started to study. We had English in the first hour, self-study in the second, history in the third, and math 2 (geometry) in the fourth hour I studied very hard. April 30 (Monday), Sunny For the first time, a bomb was dropped on the city of Hiroshima. It was just before I crossed Enko Bridge. "Grr, thump, thump!" What a frightening noise it made! Then, a thick cloud of smok ruse up. I went there right away and saw a fire burning intensely. - July 6 (Friday) Today was a work day. In the morning, we dug holes bury glass. At lunch, I ate a loquat. Uehara gave it to me. I also ate sume peas and a sweet potato. During our rest time at lunch, we played hide-and-seck. It was a lot of fun. In the afternoon, we carried tree branches. ALBEN (5) 1. What made Kawamclo worried on April 4? Q. 2. When was a comb dropped on Hiroshima for the first time? 下直 New Ward studylbichl] geometryman] rose [] bridge Grup, thumpl pl hightning (staigl naise thick (0) smoka (k) and → Z rosa [ro] fira a LT) gamin mensely Extas dig →Zug [da] hole(e) hol cury Dr glass() loquat Dok Denis] [6] patata ateiion] awet po ato [et potcitou hide-and-sek hiidansi k branch(s)[fiel ............. of lact for the firar time night way for Raiding VERSI [画されている内容 2. 分 LING おおか みやすくなる。 fcipliw 43