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Grade 2 4 ライティング 以下の TOPIC について、 あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。 POINTS は理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。 ただし、 これら以外 の観点から理由を書いてもかまいません。 語数の目安は80語~ 100語です。 解答は、 解答用紙のB面にあるライティング解答欄に書きなさい。 なお、 解答欄の 外に書かれたものは採点されません。 解答が TOPIC に示された問いの答えになっていない場合や, TOPIC からずれて いると判断された場合は, 0点と採点されることがあります。 TOPIC の内容をよく 読んでから答えてください。 TOPIC Today, many buildings collect rainwater and then use it in various ways, such as giving water to plants. Do you think such buildings will become more common in the future? POINTS Cost Emergency Technology

What day of Kawamoto’s diary impressed you most? Why? ここの問題の和訳と解答例を教えてほしいです。

Let's Read [2] EO 29977 Muty base ==I2+0)-ASTELAT. 1945年5月6日, 子 に投下され。 2 多くの中学生も牲になりました。 当時広島県立広島第二中学校(二中)の WAZI だっくんもその一人です。 くんの日記には、 1944年12月1日から2日前の 1945年8月4日までの日々の出来が SKRY 説明に書かれています。 Before You Read Hit 2. 20 ような生活していたと い出すか 42 自分と同 New Words commute komt 1 stoom or in tečin unfortunately jeniti] delcy(ed) worled saril ceremonyan dind Deignied) (d) lief-1 happen t • ga on Goal Neading を読み取り、 Speaking 筆者に伝え合うことができる。 From the Diary of Kawamoto Itsuyoshi 祝日 河んくんの日記。 拓が手に入りにくい時代だったので、 の伝 書かれています。 April 4 (Wednesday), Sunny Today was a happy day for me. From today, I am going to commute to Nicht. I went to Hiroshima on the 6:50 a.m. steam train. Unfortunately, it was delayed. I was worried, "What will happen to me?" When I arrived at Nicht, the ceremony was already going on. After I explained my delay, they let me in. I sighed with relief. $ 5 300 15 - April 15 (Sunday), Sunny Today is the third Sunday. I went to school and at last we started to study. We had English in the first hour, self-study in the second, history in the third, and math 2 (geometry) in the fourth hour I studied very hard. April 30 (Monday), Sunny For the first time, a bomb was dropped on the city of Hiroshima. It was just before I crossed Enko Bridge. "Grr, thump, thump!" What a frightening noise it made! Then, a thick cloud of smok ruse up. I went there right away and saw a fire burning intensely. - July 6 (Friday) Today was a work day. In the morning, we dug holes bury glass. At lunch, I ate a loquat. Uehara gave it to me. I also ate sume peas and a sweet potato. During our rest time at lunch, we played hide-and-seck. It was a lot of fun. In the afternoon, we carried tree branches. ALBEN (5) 1. What made Kawamclo worried on April 4? Q. 2. When was a comb dropped on Hiroshima for the first time? 下直 New Ward studylbichl] geometryman] rose [] bridge Grup, thumpl pl hightning (staigl naise thick (0) smoka (k) and → Z rosa [ro] fira a LT) gamin mensely Extas dig →Zug [da] hole(e) hol cury Dr glass() loquat Dok Denis] [6] patata ateiion] awet po ato [et potcitou hide-and-sek hiidansi k branch(s)[fiel ............. of lact for the firar time night way for Raiding VERSI [画されている内容 2. 分 LING おおか みやすくなる。 fcipliw 43

英検の準1級の英作文の添削をお願いします。 字数数えるために段落は作っていないので、／を入れておきました。 準一級の英作文初めてなので本当に拙い文章ですが、それでも採点してくださる方がいたらお願いします😵‍💫🌀´-

In my opinion, people should not trist information on the Internet. I have two reasons to support this based on news and socil media, In the first place, Internet news may contain fake news. I don't know whether information is true because it don't have evidence. However, many people don't know it and believe it. It is very dangerous In the second place, many people post take information on social media, and people who belive it twe pout it, too. It's bad a cycle / Therefore, I think people should be careful about I Internet Intamation.

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英語 6 次のグラフ及び英文を読み、1から3の質問の答えとして最も適当なものを,それぞれ①~④ 23 のうちから一つずつ選びなさい｡ 解答番号は Not very familiar 18% Somewhat familiar 25% Not familiar 7% 21 Survey on Esports - 7 - Very familiar 50% Kazuhiro's dream is to be a professional esports player in the future. Esports stands for electronic sports. It is a form of video game competition. Sometimes tournaments for money are held and many people watch them online. Kazuhiro's friends introduced him to esports a few years ago, and he quickly became one of the best players among his friends. He has also participated in many local esports tournaments with them, and their team always won first or second place. Because of this experience, he started thinking of becoming a professional esports player. In one of his classes, Kazuhiro had to make a newsletter for his assignment. He decided to do a survey on esports. He found that some of his classmates were not familiar with esports. So, he thought he would try promoting it in his high school. He held an esports event for his classmates at school. He was not sure whether anyone would come to this event, but to his surprise, many students attended and enjoyed his workshop. He showed them some of the most famous video games in esports. He also gave them some advice on how to win. Finally, he did a live esports demonstration and played against a friend in another country. After this, a lot of his classmates asked Kazuhiro about esports. He felt pleased and satisfied with what he did. Now, he not only wants to be a professional esports player, but also be a person who can promote it. Through esports, he has been able to make friends all over the world, and he wants to spread the joy to other people. 2023KN1A-14-008 1 According to the pie chart, which of the following is true? 0 Less than 50% of the students are familiar with esports. 2 More than 90% of the students are not familiar with esports. 3 Twenty-five percent of the students are not familiar at all with esports. 4 Seventy-five percent of the students are familiar with esports. 2 According to the passage, which of the following is true about Kazuhiro? He wants to be a professional esports player. He wants to create a new video game in esports. He has a negative image of esports. 4 He has already won a lot of money from playing esports. 2 3 3 According to the passage, which of the following is true about Kazuhiro? He got confused when his friends asked him questions about esports. 2 He held an event to teach his classmates about esports at his school. 3 He was disappointed because not many people came to his workshop. 4 He learned about a professional esports player from his classmates. - 8 21 英語 22 23 2023KN1A-14-00

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100 Wri 5 every 16 words on a page. Take any book, or magazine, and list all the words appears about 3.2 in order of frequency. You will find an interesting pattern. Of-the second most common word percent of the time. That's one-half (1/2) of the frequency 10 of the. And, the third most common word, makes up around 2.2 percent of words. That's around one-third (1/3) of the frequency of the. Do you see the pattern? The number of times each word appears is linked to its position in the list. For example, the eighteenth most frequent word, as, appears 15 one-eighteenth (1/18) as often as the word the. That's around 0.4 percent of the words in any book. - C on frequenc the be ~と

英単語教えて欲しいです。 間違えてるところあったら教えて欲しいのと、分からないところが沢山あるのでこの文章の中に書かれている単語で右の空欄教えて欲しいです。お願いします。

20 25 20 35 15 STEP 3 DEAR (1年7月改) 回 目標 IGG 登場人物の心情を想像しながら読み進めよう。 次の英文を読んで,あとの問いに答えよ。 取り組み日 A 日 得点 /18 目標時間 17分 tell Sara was annoyed/when her mom told her the news. from Japan/to live with her family//Their two-bedroom apartment/was(already crowded/ with her mom, dad and her.// While her mom was from Japan/Sara (7)/She knew only a few Japanese words. 5 Her mom told her about Sara's Grandpa)//He studied English (in college, but Sara and Grandpa had never spoken (in English.) When she went to Japan every summer, the most. they said to each other was "Ohayo" in Japanese. Grandpa didn't talk much. A month had passed since Grandpa moved in/With the new family member in her home, Sara spent more time alone in her room working on her favorite hobby drawing 10 comic strips./She hardly showed these drawings to anyone.) Her parents thought it was a waste of time. They hoped she would spend more time on her schoolwork.)// Sara had been working for months on a 16-page comic book about a teenage girl with magic powers. She hoped to enter it in a comic book contest the next month but was struggling with how to draw the hero with invisible magic powers// One afternoon, she got so frustrated that she crushed almost all the pages she had drawn and threw them in the wastebasket) She didn't know why but her eyes were full of tears. //Her Her grandfather was moving She grabbed her jacket and went into the living room. Grandpa was reading a book (on the sofa. She said, "Please tell my mom that I went for a walk. Grandpa said. “Itterasshai" to her but she walked out of the room. When she came home, Sara was still upset, but more disappointed. a comic book that she could hand in for the contest. del pr Then she saw her desk. Her drawings were put back on the desk//They were laid flat and attached with small sticky notes all over the pages.// Sara(1-0)Who had gone through her wastebasket? //This was her room.//No one came in without telling her.)// The handwriting on the sticky notes) was really easy to read//She (quickly) realized they were from Grandpa. 'here wouldn't be "Sara, you have a gift for art," the first note said. The second note was longer/"When 30 I was your age. I also wanted to be a comic artist."// The other notes gave to her face."Finally, someone understands my passion I Sara advice on improving her comic strips. Sara felt a smile coming to never imagined Grandpa would ()do that!" She started writing a card to Grandpa "Dear Grandpa /Thank you so much for your kind comments! I want to finish my comic book so I can enter it in the contest next month//Please be my advisor!/Love, Sara"// Grandpa was watching TV with her parents in the living room but looked at Sara/as she walked up to him.// Sara (1-2), so she handed him the card without a word. She wondered if Grandpa 40 would accept it. When he read the card, he smiled but did not say anything, either. Sara quickly went into her room. Her parents were wondering what had just happened. (1) She went straight back to the desk/and started working on her comic book //She only had a month. She couldn't wait to show Grandpa her next draft for more advice. (567W) 内 () ORIGINAL MATERIAL

英検2級の添削をお願いしたいです。 文法やスペルミスなどをみて頂きたいです。 よろしくお願いします。 問題は紙の中にあります。

Q Thanks to improvements in information technobay It is possible to Work outside, the office Do you think the number of people doing so will increase in the future. I think that the number of people doing so will increase in the future. I have two reasons Why I think so. First of all, it allows us to use time fully, and the number of people will increase free time, for example, and worker. Second of all, If we can possible students' to work outside the office, we will not go to the office. As a result, we can spend time with family and friends. This is why I think so more and more people will work outside the office. VISU V d 211'!

英検2級のライティングの添削をお願いしたいです。 よろしくお願いします。 問題は写真に書いてあります。

Q Thanks to improvements in information technobay It is possible to Work outside, the office Do you think the number of people doing so will increase in the future. I think that the number of people doing so will increase in the future. I have two reasons Why I think so. First of all, it allows us to use time fully, and the number of people will increase free time, for example, and worker. Second of all, If we can possible students' to work outside the office, we will not go to the office. As a result, we can spend time with family and friends. This is why I think so more and more people will work outside the office. VISU V d 211'!

英検2級の添削をお願いしたいです。 文法、スペルミスなどを見て頂きたいです。 （昨日の英作の直しを見て頂きたいです。 文法が正しく直せているかなど） よろしくお願いします。

Q Thanks to improvements in information technobay. It is possible to work outside, the office. Do you think the number of people doing so will increase in the future. I think that the number of people doing so will increase in the future. I have two reasons Why I Think so. First of all, it allows us to use time fully, and the number of people will increase free time, for example, and worker. Second of all, If we can possible students' to work outside the office, we will not go to the office. As a result, we can spend time with family and friends This is why I think so more and more people will work outside the office.

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2 下線部を分詞句にして、分詞構文にしなさい。 (1) I fell asleep. I was watching a baseball game on TV. This book is written in easy English. It is good for children. (3) Ted locked the door. He left the office. (4) The boy got a scratch. He slid into second base. * scratch: slide 3 (slide-slid-slid) (5) The top of Mt. Fuji was covered with clouds. It couldn't be seen. (6) I didn't know what to answer. I didn't raise my hand. B