高校入試の英作文を書いたので添削をお願いしたいです🙏🏻 下に同じ内容を日本語で書いたので、他の表現（言い換え・熟語）などがあれば、教えて欲しいです🙇🏻‍♀️

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問3、問4を教えてください！

問2 く問3.問4 4点× 4, その他 3点×4〉 [対話文読解] 7 ア 作織は, 借りていた CDを返しにピリーの家を訪れています。 これを読んで, 後の各 間に答えなさい。 次は、高校生の香織 (Kaori) と, アメリカ出身のビリー ( Billy) との対話です。 ウ オ Aa0rn : Thank you, Billv. This CD is wonderful. Ilike all the songs on it. Billy : Good! I'm glad to hear that. Which song do you like the best? Kaori : I like the last song. 問 Billy : Me, too. It's one of my favorite songs. Kaori:[ A Billy:I have about fifty. Kaori : Oh, really! You have a lot of CDs. By the way, are you free next Sunday? Billy : In the morning I'm going to visit Ms. Sato to learn Japanese. She's my Japanese teacher. But Ill be home about eleven. Kaori :I have two tickets for the baseball game next Sunday. Would you like to go with me? Billy :Sure! [ B Kaori: At two in the afternoon. before the game? Billy : That'sa good idea. Where shall we meet? Kaori : There is a hamburger shop nearthe stadium. Let's eat lunch there. Billy :OK! [ C ] Kaori : By bus or by subway. Billy:I think going by bus is better. Kaori:OK, let's go by bus. Should I come to your house? Billy:No, I'll go to your house at about eleven thirty. Kaori : See you next Sunday. (注) by the way ところで ticket· チケット hamburger… ハンバーガー subway… 地下鉄 問1 部 that が指している内容を,日本語で答えなさい。

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問2 [ く問3·問4 4点×4, その他 3点×4> ア [対話文読解] 7 作械は,借りていた CD を返しにビリーの家を訪れています。これを読んで, 後の各 問に答えなさい。 伏は、高校生の香織 (Kaori) と, アメリカ出出身のビリー(Billy)との対話です。 ウ オ Billy : Good! T'm glad to hear that. Which song do you like the best? Kaori : I like the last song. Kaori : Thank you, Billy. This CD is wonderful. I like all the songs on it. 問 Billy : Me, too. It's one of my favorite songs. Kaori:[ A Billy:I have about fifty. Kaori:Oh, really! You have a lot of CDs. By the way, are you free next Sunday? Billy : In the morning I'm going to visit Ms. Sato to learn Japanese. She's my Japanese teacher. But Ill be home about eleven. Kaori :I have two tickets for the baseball game next Sunday. Would you like to go with me? Billy:Sure! [ B Kaori : At two in the afternoon. before the game? Billy : That'sa good idea. Where shall we mee Kaori: There is a hamburger shop near the stadium. Let's eat lunch there. Billy :OK! [ C ] Kaori :By bus or by subway. Billy:I think going by bus is better. Kaori:OK, let's go by bus. Should I come to your house? Billy : No, I'll go to your house at about eleven thirty. Kaori:See you next Sunday. (注) by the way ところで ticket…チケット hamburger…ハンバーガー subway … 地下鉄 問1 部 that が指している内容を, 日本語で答えなさい。

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「岡2 伏は、 高校生の香織 (Kaori) と, アメリカ出身のビリー(Billy) との対話です。 作服は, 借りていた CDを返しにビリーの家を訪れています。 これを読んで, 後の各 問に答えなさい。 く問3·問44点×4, その他 ア [対話文読解) 7 Aaorn : Thank you, Billy, This CD is wonderful. I like all the songsS on it. Billy : Good! I'm glad to hear that. Which song do you like the best? Kaori : I like the last song. Billy : Me, too. It's one of my favorite songs. Kaori :[ A Billy :I have about fifty. Kaori: Oh, really! You have a lot of CDs. By the way, are you free next Sunday? Billy : In the morning I'm going to visit Ms. Sato to learn Japanese. She's my Japanese teacher. But I'll be home about eleven. Kaori :I have two tickets for the baseball game next Sunday. Would you like to go with me? Billy:Sure! [ B ] Kaori: At two in the afternoon. before the game? Billy : That'sa good idea. Where shall we meet? Kaori :There is a hamburger shop near the stadium. Let's eat lunch there. Billy:OK! [ C] Kaori:By bus or by subway. Billy :I think going by bus is better. Kaori: OK, let's go by bus. Should I come to your house? Billy : No, Ill go to your house at about eleven thirty. Kaori:See you next Sunday. (注) by the way ところで ticket チケット hamburger ハンバーガー subway … 地下鉄

問7で、 I want to sing a song with children. Singing makes us fan, so we can spend good time. 添削をお願いしたいです🙇‍♀️

ウ money I his clothes to change. 3 o heae member at the center.) 2ame.A Joseph: n yOu work here. 1on. of the children here are very small, so you have to be careful. Joseph: Jo Creat! Well, there are some popular Japanese stories written in English here. a then I see. Ill be careful. Sirstel But we (them/the children/ read / have/to/ never]. Why don't you read these *picture books in English ? Oh, I see. I hope they'll like listening to the stories in English. et to Joseph: Ms Aida: These stories are very popular, so I think the children will like them. Please read 2oudi the picture books slowly. Ms. Aida: Of course. If you are ready, you can start now. すっ。 Toseph: Sure. I'll try to do that. Can I choose some of the stories now ? Joseph : OK! (注) picture book…絵本 問5 ( 内のすべての語句を正しい順序に並べかえて書きなさい。 (4点) 問6 下線部 that は,どのようなことをさしていますか。日本語で答えなさい。(4点) 4〈That night, Joseph sends an e-mail to Miku.> Hi, Miku! I went to the Child Care Support Center today and met a lot of children there. 書き time. Some of them cried, but Ms. Aida helped me a lot. I really liked working there and I want to go again. Taking care of children is very *challenging work! ButI think that nothing IS more important than spending time with children. The little children enjoyed listening to the picture books I read in English, and we had a great Next time, Id like to do something else at the center. Do you have any good ideas, Miku ? See you soon. 下線部について, もしあなたが子育て支援センターでボランティアをするとしたら, 子供 だちに絵本を読むことの他に、どのょうなことをしたいですか。 2文以上の英語で書きなさい。 「文目は,具体的にしたいことを書きなさい。2文目以降は, その理由が伝わるように書きな さい。(4点) 【注) challenging やりがいのある 旧o

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2(自己表現 いてみよう。「名称·定義」→ 「詳しい説明」→ 「自分の考え」の順で書くこと。 1の文と例を参考にして,日本の伝統的な文化を紹介する文を自由に英語で書 例 Hinamatsuri is a traditional event on March 3. It is an event for girls. We decorate our homes with beautiful dolls called hina-ningyo. We eat delicious food and singa song in front of hina-ningyo. Natsumatsuri delicious foods. A kakigorin hingo We is Qvcnt Summer You.can eat. a On many famous. ame. and takoyaki the fire works are yokata and watch wear

共通テスト英語リーディングです。 最も態度が良かった人を問っているのにどうして最後の文の振り付けとかの話が出てくるのか全くわかりません。 優勝者を聞いてるのか態度が良かった人を聞いてるのかよくわかんないです

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共通テスト英語リーディングです。 最も態度が良かった人を問っているのにどうして最後の文の振り付けとかの話が出てくるのか全くわかりません。 優勝者を聞いてるのか態度が良かった人を聞いてるのかよくわかんないです

Judges' final average scores Song Choice (6.0) Total Dance Contestants / Qualities Attitude Choreography (6.0) (18.0) (6.0) ub Mike 4.9 5.6 6.0 16.5 5.9 5.4 5.2 16.5 |Jane |Jamie 4.9 5.9 5.7 16.5 Susan Toodan ofi (did not perform)dossT hesH oft

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18。N*関係代名詞。 LE マと文をむすぶ接続詞のはたらさと、 開のはたらきを兼わz、 画係代名詞といいます。 文をむすふ同にとの関係代名詞を用いるを 先行詞 主 格 所有格 目的格 先行詞と格によって決まります。 Cbow 9d eb whose who(whom) 人 who which w 1o 物 which whose 人·物 that that 1 主格の関係代名詞 I have a friend who lives 2 所有格の関係代名詞 Sydney.(私にはシドニーに住んでいる友達がいます。) 3 目的格の関係代名詞 (彼女が私にくれた人形はとてもかわいい。) The doll that she gave me is very pretty. 0a0o gD 0DdDaD AロAロ J00 SCnoilaie oe0od wor 1 10 oy A 次の文の( )の中に適当な関係代名詞を入れなさい。 0 That is a bus goes to Yokohama Station. 2 He gave me the book( ) cover was yellow. ) played the part of Hamlet. Jodiw husband is dead is calleda widow. 3 He is an actor( ④ A woman( 5 This is the T-shirt )I bought in Hawaii. 6 There are many foreigners( ) speak Japanese well. 本日き文英の式 0 abiead ogeugmsl gienol 19dious 19teem of Tol v1s ad B 次の文を日本語に訳しなさい。 0 The lady that you met at the station is my English teacher. on 2sw ii gA 2 There are many children who don't like carrots. 1ert 2anb baT orr 2t il ¥9ura 3 Is that the boy you had a date with yesterday? の This is the song which is very popular among young people now. C 次の文を英語で書きなさい。 0 これは昨日兄がつかまえた魚です。 os nol woH 2 トムと話している少女はナオミです。 20 Primer

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12。N.分 LE 詞。 正。 1 形容詞の働き LOok at the sleeping baby. (眠っている赤ちゃんをごらんなさい。) Look at the baby sleeping in the bed. (ペッドで眠っている赤ちゃんをごらんなさい。) 修飾語 12) This is the picture painted by her. (これは彼女によって描かれた絵です。) 2 補語の働き (1) The white dog came running toward me V (その白い犬は私の方に走って来た。) S C I saw a bear walking around in the woods. O (私は森の中で熊が歩き回っているのを見た。) SV C 4D4D )の中から適当なものを選び, ○で囲みなさい。 A 次の( 0 The boy(sitting, to sit ) in the front row is my brother. の I found Tom(sleeping, to sleep ) in his room. ③ She received a letter ( written, writing) in English. 4 A lady (wearing, worn ) a big hat is singing a song. の A S C aa (ou einin 1aum oY gub nieg omo) 5 Do you know the man (to stand, standing) over there? gbind a ai enolT linm not ofm ) shsm ai 1ollua 6 She left the baby (to cry, crying) all night. (Barking, Barked) dogs don't always bite. 交英で合文本日の 8 B 次の日本文に合うように( ) 内の語を並べかえなさい。 0 これは盗まれた車ですか。 (this / stolen /is/car/a)? Joun ud sdT 向こうで泣いている女の子はだれですか。 (crying / is / there / the girl / who /over)? adh のもで合 の文本日の C 次の文を日本語に訳しなさい。 0 Is this the letter written by my father? 9C1O Smg eab sdh aah) 2 She sat reading a book. There were a lot of birds singing in the trees. bogru Oia obbne Primer