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英検に向けて英作文を書きました 添削や「こうしたらもっと良くなる」という点がありましたら、ぜひコメントよろしくお願いします🙇‍♂️ 客観的な意見を取り入れて、今後さらに良い作文を書きたいと思うので、ご協力お願いします

Topic Agree or Disagree: Help from the local community is crucial for raising children POINTS → discipline、safety、working parents、privacy 「肯定意見」 Iagree with the statement that help from the local community is crucial for raising children. There are two reasons to support this contention: the promotion in working for parents and the respect of discipline. These days, almost all the companies in Japan are facing the problem which is how they treat their employees who have children. In fact, these people, especially women, have difficulty in working. What the matters worse, many of them are forced to quit their job because of raising children. To deal with this problem, it is necessary for the local community to help parents raise children. Moreover, help from others will lead to promote the rate of women who continued working after childbirth. In other words, thanks to help from the local society, Japanese companies can improve their working environment. In addition to this, children will be sociable and polite if they are taken care of by another person of family. Also, children will realize the importance of cooperation with others. For these reasons, I strongly believe the local society should do more for parents who raise children.

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英語 高校生

【写真】の読むとき、どこを区切りればよいのか教えてほしいです。

Do you know how many children there are in the world? I thought there were 3 million Cnaren in the world. In reálity, there are 2.1 billion children in the world. Do you think they all are Iiving sáfely and cómfortably? It is not true. 356,000 children are troubled by poverty. I Khew foreign children were troúbled by póverty, but I didn't know Japanese children were troubled by póverty. 1 in 7 Children in Japan live in poverty. I was surprised to hear that. Japan is not at war and not a poor country. It is an advanced and developed nation. So, why does it have this problem? 「nere are many causes. First,non-regular employmentis increasing. Non-regular employees don't get enough money and they don't have a stable job. Second, the number of elderly people is increasing. When the number of elderly people increases, it burdens Japan's workload. Finally, single-parent families are increasing. So how can we solve these problems? The first is food support. For example, there are certain projects and corporations that carry out food services and children's cafeterias.Certain food services are free for low-income single-parent families. Children's cafeterias' dishes are free or low price for children. There are about 12 children's cafeterias in Koriyama. Second, schooling support. Children can go to supplemental school and go to lessons set up by a support group. There are various ways to solve the problem. What can we do for poor Japanese children? I think we should understand this present condition and donate money. I want to be a member ofa support group. The day when children in Japan and around the world can live safely and with peace of mind Willit come?I hope that children around the world, including Japan, can live safely and securely. Through the SDGS, I hope we can secure happiness for all children.

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英語 高校生

【写真】を読む時に… •アクセントをどこに付ければいいのか •どこできって読めばいいのか •繋げて読む部分はどこか •語尾を上げる又は下げるところはどこか を教えてほしいです。

Do you know how many children there are in the world? I thought there were 3 million Chiidren in the world. In reálity, there are 2.1 billion children in the world. Do you think they all are Iiving sáfely and cómfortably? It is not true. 356,000 children are troubled by póverty. I Knew foreign children were troūbled by póverty, but I didn't know Japanese children were troubled by póverty. 1 in 7 Children in Japanlive in poverty. I was surprised to hear that. Japan is not at war and not a poor country. It is an advanced and developed nation. So, why does it have this problem? There are many causes. First,non-regular employment is increasing. Non-regular employees don't get enough money and they don't have a stable job. Second, the number of elderly people is increasing. When the number of elderly people increases, it burdens Japan's workload. Finally, single-parent families are increasing. So how can we solve these problems? The first is food support. For example, there are certain projects and corporations that carry out food services and children's cafeterias.Certain food services are free for low-income single-parent families. Children's cafeterias' dishes are free or low price for children. There are about 12 children's cafeterias in Koriyama. Second, schooling support. Children can go to supplemental school and go to lessons set up by a support group. There are various ways to solve the problem. What can we do for poor Japanese children?1 think we should understand this present condition and donate money. I want to be a member of a support group. The day when children in Japan and around the world can live safely and with peace of mind Will it come?l hope that children around the world, including Japan, can live safely and securely. Through the SDGS, I hope we can secure happiness for all children.

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英語 高校生

プロミネンス1のLesson8のExercisesです。全然わからないです😭至急お願いします🙇🏻‍♀️🙇🏻‍♀️🙇🏻‍♀️🙇🏻‍♀️🙇🏻‍♀️

The State-of-the-Art Origami Engineering 5of the Exercises hange the word in parentheses into the appropriate form. 1(See) the pictures in the album, I remembered my happy childhood.. 2(See) from here, Mt. Fuji looks really beautiful. 3.I called my uncle, (thank) him for the nice Christmas present. 4. My teacher was standing by the front gate, (look) straight at me. 5.(Be) busy with his studies, he can't find time to play sports. B Fill in the blanks so that the two sentences have almost the same meaning. 1. In fact, he was very sick. >( The )( fAct )was ( that ) he was very sick. 2. He came here to speak out against us and made nothing but trouble. > He came here to speak out against us, ( ) nothing but trouble. 3. If I hadn't seen it myself, I wouldn't have believed it. > Since I ( ) it myself, I ( )it. C Write in the missing words to complete the sentence. 1.私のおじは1人で家を建てた。 My uncle built a house on ( his )( 0wn ). 2.芸術は一握りの者のためだけにあるのではない。 Art is not ( ) the few. 3.真の解決策はより良いコミュニケーションにあるのかもしれない。 The real solution may ( ) better communication. 4.彼が手伝ってくれたら, 私たちはもっと早く仕事を終わらせられる。 ) to finish the job sooner. His help will ( D Put the words in the correct order to make a sentence. 1. The (don't /is/listen/that / trouble / you / you / with). 2. If (had / have /I/I/known, / told/you/ would). 3. This (your / be/cannot / case/ rule/ to / applied). 4. The (nothing/up/meeting / deciding / ended).

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英語 高校生

ア順番に12131であってますか? わかる方教えてください!!!! お願いします!

For most of the 20th century, magnetic north was located around the northern parts of molten iron in the earth's core which affect how the earth's magnetic field behaves. What is surprising to scientists is the speed at which the pole has been moving in recent years. magnetic poles, on the other hand, are ( ア ) moving. This fact has several implications poles are located at the northernmost and southernmost ends of the earth. The location of the Shifts in the position of the North Magnetic Pole are nothing new. Since 1831, scientists Earth has two sets of poles: the geographic poles and the magnetic poles. The geographic have been tracking its location. The movements are caused by changes in the flow of swirling for navigation and transportation. Canada. It drified around, moving slowiy north at an ( イ ) speed of approximately 10 MIometers per year. In recent decades. that rate has increased significantly to about 3 KIIometers per year. The North Magnetic Pole is nowmoving away from Canada toward eastern Russia. While scientists can't fully explain how changes in the earth's molten core are affecting the pole's movement, they can map the earth's magnetic field. Doing so allows them to (ウ ) the rate of change over time. This, in turn, provides information on how the magnetic field may shift in the future. Information on changes to the earth's magnetic field is used to produce the World Magnetic Model (WMM). This model is used as the basis for all forms of modern navigation, from how ships move at sea to mapping software in smartphones. ( エ ) inthe model, caused by shits in the real location of the North Magnetic Pole, can seriously impact almost all forms of moderntransportation. The model is updated every five years, but in 2018, during routine checks of the 2015- 2020 model cycle, scientists noticed a problem. Because of the rapidly shifting pole, the WMM was close to being outside the acceptable limits for navigational errors. This forced the release of an updated version of the model. was revised ( オ ) in2020, and the current version is expected to last until 2024. As well as keeping track of the WMM's accuracy, scientists continue investigating why the magnetic ficld is changing so dramatically. This essential work will ensure a safe journey for everyone navigating their way through the world.

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