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Topic Agree or Disagree: Help from the local community is crucial for raising children POINTS → discipline、safety、working parents、privacy 「肯定意見」 Iagree with the statement that help from the local community is crucial for raising children. There are two reasons to support this contention: the promotion in working for parents and the respect of discipline. These days, almost all the companies in Japan are facing the problem which is how they treat their employees who have children. In fact, these people, especially women, have difficulty in working. What the matters worse, many of them are forced to quit their job because of raising children. To deal with this problem, it is necessary for the local community to help parents raise children. Moreover, help from others will lead to promote the rate of women who continued working after childbirth. In other words, thanks to help from the local society, Japanese companies can improve their working environment. In addition to this, children will be sociable and polite if they are taken care of by another person of family. Also, children will realize the importance of cooperation with others. For these reasons, I strongly believe the local society should do more for parents who raise children.

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英語 高校生

この長文の①に入る単語を選ぶ問題で自分はエが1番自然だと思うのですが、不安なのでどなたか教えてくださるとありがたいです。

特殊構文 文法項目 fireworks remain an important part of celebrations in China. In particular, you are ' Fireworks were invented by the Chinese in the seventh century. To this day, C) Houses of Parliament (the meeting place of the British government) with enough 一*gunpowder to destroy the building and kill everyone inside it, including the king In the United Kingdom, fireworks are usually only seen in the first week of November each year. On November fifth, 1605, g Guy Fawkes was caught under *the テーマ 文明·風俗 UNIT 13 O Track 78-80 Reading almost certain to see fireworks during the Spring Festival, otherwise known . Chinese New Year. ©only in the past several centuries, however, ( ① 5 custom of viewing fireworks spread to countries all over the world. For the Japanese, fireworks are commonly viewed in the summer. In fact. on on.. given day of the summer season, you are likely to find a publically organized fireworks display somewhere in Japan. Many people wear traditional summer kimonos or yukata, and enjoy foods and sweets bought from *open-air stalls while watching the 10 fireworks in the night sky. The first fireworks were seen in Japan in 1733. Currently, the biggest fireworks display in Japan is held in Nagano prefecture, where about 39,000 explosions light up the sky. In America, fireworks are closely associated with two important annual events. 79 The first of these events is New Year's Eve. As the clock strikes midnight and 5 people welcome the New Year, fireworks light up the sky, which lets everyone know that the New Year has begun. The fireworks in *Times Square, New York are especially famous and live on TV across the nation. The second event is the Fourth of July, commonly known as *Independence Day. On this day, all Americans celebrate their freedom from the *British Empire and the birth of their country. Moo。 of the fireworks on this night are red, white, and blue in color iust like the flag o! b American's country. aningtai 3 Every year, around November fifth, people on fireworks shows to acroga

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英語 高校生

赤い枠の単語を必要があれば品詞を変えて埋めるのですが、よく分からないので教えてください。

Vocabulary Practice A. Completion. Complete the paragraphs below using the correct form of the words in the box. One word is extra. hazardous discard pile substance notify infrastructure Reuse and recycle: these well-known ideas for dealing with trash are being employed to handle e-waste such as old computers, cell phones, and televisions. Many companies send used electronic items from the United States and the European Union to developing nations. They claim to be recycling, and also helping the developing world modernize its Customers shop for used televisions at a secondhand electronics market in Lagos, Nigeria. - However, the reality may be quite different. The Basel Action Network of Seattle, Washington, recently reported that three-quarters of the supposedly reusable electronics shipped to Lagos, Nigeria, are in fact broken. Consequently, 2.. roads. Often it's picked apart by the desperately poor, who come in contact with toxic 4. 5. Richard Guttierez of the Basel Action Nerwork believes companies in developed nations pay lip service' to recycling while actually disposing of their e-waste as cheaply as possible, leaving the developing world to deal with the problems it causes. of e-waste end up being 3.. - along rivers and -Such as lead-in the broken equipment. Lead is known to be especially to the health of growing children.

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