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I don't think scare people's salaries should be based on their job performance. I have two reasons. In the first place, It should be changed from their performance to age. As they get older, many people will have their family, so they need a lot. of money. If their salavies base on age, they can live in peace. In the Second place, some people don't have the skills. For example, people who have disability may not have enough skills. If their salaries be based on r their age, they can't get enough money. Last of all I think people's salaries had better be based on their age. It has a lot of benefit than being based on their job performance. Mary people can live in peace

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In my opinion, people should not trist information on the Internet. I have two reasons to support this based on news and socil media, In the first place, Internet news may contain fake news. I don't know whether information is true because it don't have evidence. However, many people don't know it and believe it. It is very dangerous In the second place, many people post take information on social media, and people who belive it twe pout it, too. It's bad a cycle / Therefore, I think people should be careful about I Internet Intamation.

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3/ have +0+分詞/see +0+分詞 1 have/ get +0+現在分詞 TARGET @ 161 (1) The comedian had the people laughing. (2) He got the machine working. T (1) そのコメディアンは人々を笑わせた。 (2) 彼はその機械を動かした。 「O を~させる/ させておく」 参考 参考 「Oを~してもら good have や get は〈have/ get +0+現在分詞〉の形で、 を~させる / させておく」という意味を表すことができる。 現在分詞は 「している最中」 という進行の意味を含む。 She had me waiting in the rain for thirty minutes. (彼女は私を雨の中で30分も待たせたままにした。) have はある状態への変化や継続を表すときに, get はある状態まで もっていくことを表すときに使う。 〈have + O + 動詞の原形〉は「○に~させる / してもらう」という意味 (p.199) で, 完結した動作を表すときに使う。 ove 2 have/get+0 +過去分詞 TARGET 162 pdtond you (1) I had my hair cut at a famous beauty salon. (2) I got my fingers caught in the train doors. (3) Have your essay finished by tomorrow! (1) 私は有名な美容室で髪を切ってもらった。 (2) 私は電車のドアに指をはさまれた。 (3) 作文を明日までに書き上げてしまいなさい! have や get を使 やっ どう

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= 23 626 TOPIC Agree or disagree: Movies and TV programs have more negative influence positive on how young people behave. than • Cost • Society • Entertainment •Culture Some people say that movies and TV programs have negative influence than positive on how young people behave. other hand, others say not. I lagree with the latter opinion. This will explain the two main reasons for essay my argument in terms of culture and society. The first reason is that watching movies, and TV programs is helpful to lean cultures. People can learn a lot of Fahiguages! and history by watching movies and TV progress. (23) The second reason is the people can know affairs of Society if they watch movies and TV programs. Soffiety is changing. So it is necessary for them to learn. Contemporary (33) All in all, it is for reasons mentioned above that I think it is good for young people to watch movies and TV progratius. cs GamScannerでスキャラ (29) ( 135 Words)

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例題1 Write an essay on the given TOPIC. Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. Structure: Introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words TOPIC Agree or disagree: Movies and TV programs have more negative influence than positive on how young people behave. Cost Society Entertainment Culture

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採点して頂きたいです。準一級です。 I do not think it is a good idea for local governments to build tourists sites, such as theme parks and museums. Firs... 続きを読む

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I agree This essay of food and crime. The first reason is that we are many cases, especially interested in food safety. if we don't improve food safety, food is likely get worse and worse because of some people will bring we will be able to get healthy. However, by improving; The second reason example, reducing crime is that I want to reduce crime in society. For t Soviet live in can for children. If it were provide a good opportunity to If it were not for reducing crime, we could not have such an opportunity lieve that society needs to improve food these In to that more needs to be done to improve public safety. will explain the two main reasons for my argument in terms and crime. on a disease. disease in safety

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