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Write an essay on the given TOPIC. Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words Write your essay in the space provided on Side B of your answer sheet. Any writing outside the space will not be graded. TOPIC Should the government do more to encourage young people to vote in elections? POINTS Freedom of choice Social responsibility Taxes Trust in politicians

高校英語です 7~13の答えがなくて困ってます😢 誰かわかる人いたら教えてくださいませんか

8 9 10 11 7 2 Unfortunately, many children are reported ( 1 to being 3 to having been This music is ( ) to listen to. 1 please It goes A: B: Frank has lived alone for 50 years, so he is used ( 1 to live 2 living 3 to living ( without 次の文の間違っている箇所を1つ選び、正しく直しなさい。 Some words the professor used in her lecture were impossible to translate them. 1 forget 2 pleasant 3 pleased 2 have being Let's postpone ( 1 to decide 4 to have been Are you planning to watch this movie? Yeah, I don't want to ( ignore ) injured in the traffic accident. 2 deciding 4 pleasantly miss ) alone. 4 lived ) saying that correct pronunciation is just as important as correct spelling. 2 directly 3 straight 4 exactly 【 青山学院大学】 ) until everybody has seen the plan. 【名古屋学院大学】 3 for deciding 4 to decide it 【立命館大学】 ) seeing it. It's at the theater from next week. 4 neglect 【札幌学院大学】 【高知大学】 【学習院大学】 【福岡大学】

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〔4〕 九州大-理系前期 Read the following newspaper article and follow the instructions below. (36) 16 2019年度 英語 in Engligi taul" According to the Kanagawa Prefectural Police Station, a 20-year-old female university student caused a traffic death. The student was riding on a power- She moved off from an assisted bicycle when the accident happened. intersection and started riding on the sidewalk. At that moment, a 77-year-old lady was walking on the sidewalk and moved toward the bicyclist. The student hit the lady. The collision caused the lady to fall and strike her head. She was transported to hospital, but died of her injuries two days later. At the time of the incident, the student was apparently holding a smartphone in her left hand and a drink in her right while steering the power- assisted bike. Moreover, she had an earphone in her left ear. Therefore, police arrested the student for breaking the new law and riding recklessly. Police are investigating whether the student noticed that the old lady was walking toward her. They suspect that she was not paying sufficient attention because she was operating her smartphone right up until the collision. Her court appearance date has not been decided yet. The Mainichi, December 16, 2017 Instructions: Write two well-developed paragraphs in English. In the first paragraph, summarize the main points of the newspaper article above in lo approximately 100 words. Use different vocabulary and sentence structure from the original passage as much as possible. In the second paragraph, write your opinion about what should be done to reduce accidents like this in approximately 50 words. hosidinlong unich lor, condadnoah

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UNIT 7 Reading Reading 33点 10点 Grammar /32点 /15 Information Listening Writing /10 TOTAL 100点 全文 音声 なまけ者のトムが望んだ仕事とは何でしょう。 Tom was a very lazy man*. He didn't like hard work. But he needed a job. One day, (his/Tom / a job / asked / uncle / him / find / to ). "What kind of job?" asked the uncle. Tom answered, "I don't want to work. I want meat for lunch every day. I just want to walk around and take naps*. And I want 100 dollars a day." "( )" the uncle sighed*. 2 One day, Tom got a call from his uncle. "Tom, I found the perfect job for you. A tiger at the zoo died recently. They need a new tiger. You can be the tiger. You'll wear a tiger's skin and walk around, eat meat, and sleep in the cage* like a real tiger." "( 3 )" said Tom. "I'll start tomorrow!" 5 3 The next day, Tom was in the cage in tiger's fur. He just walked around, ate meat, 10 and took a nap. Tom was happy. 44 Suddenly, he heard an announcement*. "We'll soon have a special show. It's a fight between a lion and a tiger! Enjoy this exciting show." "( )" He looked around his cage. Then another cage was carried next to his. A fierce-looking* lion was in it. "I'll be killed!" he cried. The doors of both cages were opened. Tom jumped back. "( 6 )" 15 The big lion slowly walked toward him, roared*, and opened its mouth. "Stop! I'm not a tiger! I'm a man!" 5 "Shhh!" Tom heard a small voice from the lion. "( Ⓒ )” (252 words)

英検準1級のライティングです。 どなたでも構いません。添削をお願いしたいです！何を書いているか分からなければ、聞いてもらって全然大丈夫です。ていうか、読んだだけでは、全く理解できないと思います。 近日中に受けるので、明日の夕方頃までにお願いします🙏

Write an essay on the given TOPIC. Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words TOPIC Do you think that gas-powered cars will be replaced by electric cars in the near future? 電時の排出 POINTS 走行エネルギーの asse). Environment Convenience #1124-Kat #veg Cost Industry 高速産 ・充電せった コストが高い 産業限られた 短いきが しが ・使用者が買いかえようとは 思わない 2:33. 1 充電スペースの 2015 3. cars will be replaced by electric cars I do not think that gas-powered opinion. in the near future, I have two reasons to support this One reason is that it may be not convenient for people to drive electric cars in these days society. For example, electric cars take more time to charge than gas-powered cars. Moreover, electric cars can run few distance. Onother reason is that electric cars cost a lot of money in the many situation. For example, people who use electric, cars usually sex charging places at the each houses, but they have to pay so much cash to do it, Also, they need to prepare too much money every month to charge electric Propte cash, For these reasons above, I believe that gas-powered cars will be replaced by electric cars in the near future. total: 179 words

とても拙い英文で申し訳ないのですが、ピンクの斜め線の部分はどう直したら良くなるでしょうか？ タイトルは　rush hourの交通渋滞をどう減らすか　というものです 2枚目が模範解答です お願いします🙇‍♀️

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When making progress becomes difficult がallowsに矢印が伸びているのと to operate がCになるのはなぜですか。

一 発展問題の解答・解説 問題:本冊 p.31 英文図解 [When making progress becomes difficult], <taking a wak S M break> allows the unconscious processes to operate. on al V C making は動名詞です。 making progress で When の副詞節内のSです。 taking も動名詞です。 taking a break の名詞句をつくり、文のSです。 和訳 前進するのが難しいとき、休憩をとることで、無意識の作用を はたらかせることができる。 カタマリ編 識別編 第2章 +0: 編章 第 3 編 章 動詞の型編 第4章

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Grammar 150 1. Fill in the blanks. (1)私は,彼女が新しいタイプのエアコンを開発することに自信があった。 )a new type of air conditioner. I was confident of ( ) ( (2) 私は明日の今ごろ, 水族館でイルカを観察しているだろう。 I ( ) ( ) ( (3) 彼は若い頃,世界中を旅行したようだ。 120 760 )()( ) traveled around the world when he was young. ME He ( (4) その本を読んでいるとき,私は新しいアイデアを思いついた。 NOVE is biogabvel ) ( ) the book, I thought of a new idea. 2. Put the words in the correct order. MOTERI Sum 3 (1) その種類の蝶は飛んでいる間,羽を羽ばたかせない。 ( flying / its wings / doesn't / while / flap) ) dolphins in the aquarium this time tomorrow. or That kind of butterflies ing eirt to, (2) 私は昨日,弟のチームが野球の試合で勝ったことを誇りに思っている。 17 (winning / the baseball game / my brother's team) b Speaki yesterday. I'm proud of (3) 加藤先生は,大学でスペイン語を学んだようだ。 (Spanish / to / learned / have / seems) at college. Mr. Kato A: B: A: B (1

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Grammar 150 1. Fill in the blanks. (1)私は,彼女が新しいタイプのエアコンを開発することに自信があった。 )a new type of air conditioner. I was confident of ( ) ( (2) 私は明日の今ごろ, 水族館でイルカを観察しているだろう。 I ( ) ( ) ( (3) 彼は若い頃,世界中を旅行したようだ。 120 760 )()( ) traveled around the world when he was young. ME He ( (4) その本を読んでいるとき,私は新しいアイデアを思いついた。 NOVE is biogabvel ) ( ) the book, I thought of a new idea. 2. Put the words in the correct order. MOTERI Sum 3 (1) その種類の蝶は飛んでいる間,羽を羽ばたかせない。 ( flying / its wings / doesn't / while / flap) ) dolphins in the aquarium this time tomorrow. or That kind of butterflies ing eirt to, (2) 私は昨日,弟のチームが野球の試合で勝ったことを誇りに思っている。 17 (winning / the baseball game / my brother's team) b Speaki yesterday. I'm proud of (3) 加藤先生は,大学でスペイン語を学んだようだ。 (Spanish / to / learned / have / seems) at college. Mr. Kato A: B: A: B (1

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問題 3 以下の英文を読んで、次の問いに答えなさい。 (*のついた語には語注が ある。) If you are able to step outside and hear many types of birds, you might also have a greater feeling of well-being. Two studies show that hearing diverse birdsongs may help increase our happiness. (A) One study was done by researchers at California Polytechnic State University. A research team studied the effects of birdsong ( 1 ) people walking through a park in the U.S. state of Colorado. A biology graduate student, Danielle Ferraro, led the study. "There could be an evolutionary reason why we like birdsong so much. And the idea is that when we hear birdsong it could signal safety to us," Ferraro says. There could be many other reasons, too. Ferraro states that in some areas around the world birdsong can also signal the arrival of spring and nice weather. Bird diversity, she adds, can also mean a healthy environment. She explained her study to Voice of America (VOA). Ferraro and her team played recorded songs from a diverse group of birds native to the area. They did this on hiking trails in a park in Boulder, Colorado. (2) several weeks, the researchers played recorded birdsong at certain times of the day and other times they did not. Then they talked with hikers after they ( 3 ). Hikers who heard the recorded diverse birdsongs reported a greater sense of well-being than the people who heard simply the natural birds. The researchers suggest that both the bird sounds and biodiversity* can increase feelings of well-being. Ferraro explained that she used native birdsong for the study. This way it would sound as natural as possible. They also did the study during the summer. She explains why this is important. "So the study ( 4 ) in the summer and that's kind of important because the spring is most birds' breeding* season. And if we play the birdsong during breeding season, that might have disturbed them. (B) We didn't want to disturb the birds too much." The study was published in an academic journal called the Royal Society B in December 2020. - 10- ◇M2 (310-15)