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Topic Agree or Disagree: Help from the local community is crucial for raising children POINTS → discipline、safety、working parents、privacy 「肯定意見」 Iagree with the statement that help from the local community is crucial for raising children. There are two reasons to support this contention: the promotion in working for parents and the respect of discipline. These days, almost all the companies in Japan are facing the problem which is how they treat their employees who have children. In fact, these people, especially women, have difficulty in working. What the matters worse, many of them are forced to quit their job because of raising children. To deal with this problem, it is necessary for the local community to help parents raise children. Moreover, help from others will lead to promote the rate of women who continued working after childbirth. In other words, thanks to help from the local society, Japanese companies can improve their working environment. In addition to this, children will be sociable and polite if they are taken care of by another person of family. Also, children will realize the importance of cooperation with others. For these reasons, I strongly believe the local society should do more for parents who raise children.

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しまう Relative Clause: Fill in the gaps to complete the sentences. 吉 Select from: That, Which, Where, When, Whose, Who 1. Neil Armstrong is the Astronaut was the first to walk on the moon. 2. A surgeon is a doctor per forms operations. 3. California is a state in Amer ica gover nor is the famous actor Arnold Schwar zenegger. 4. The Volga is a river is the longest river in Europe. 5. J.K. Rowling is an author “Harry Potter” series of books are very popular. 6. A dictionary is a book gives us the meaning of words. I can try Fugu? “Romeo and Juliet" 7. Is there a restaurant around here 8. Shakespeare was an English author wrote 9. A hospital is a place sick people go to become healthy again. 10. New Zealand is a country has more sheep than people. 11. Gr aduat ion is an event you celebrate graduating school or university. 12. Carnivores are animals only eat meat. 13.A dentist is a person checks and helps take care your teeth. 14. Ringo Starr is the drummer in the Beatles name was Richard Starkey when he was born. 15. Stefani Germanotta is a singer stage name is "Lady Gaga” . 16. August is the month many Japanese return to their hometown for Obon. ser ved his favour i te food. 17. To celebrate John' s Birthday they went to a restaurant 18. My car, is very expensive, is a Mercedes Benz. 19. Brazil is the country hosts the next Soccer Wor Id Cup in 2014. 20.1 like movies have happy endings 21.1 dislike people who 22.1 like places where 23.1 don't like it when 24.1 like animals that An interesting story - Rewrite the story using who, which, that where or and. which who I was sitting in a café. 1 often go there for a drink after work. I called the wai ter. I know him quite well. I asked for a cup of coffee. While I was waiting I looked at a newspaper. It was lying on the table. I started reading an article on the front page. It said: "Police are looking for a woman, Cather ine. She has been mi ssing from her home for two weeks.'1 looked at the photo. It showed a Woman with dark cur ly hair, she had a round face. I recognized it at once. She was my new neighbor . She had moved in just 2 weeks before.

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Grammar Target * Using to at, from, en, and in with directions an Write the missing words. Notice the prepositions for locations. Listen to check. at Go straight, then turn right The Salad Bar. The Salad Bar? OK. It's the second shop your left. Second o_ the I___?1 see. Go to the food court. You'll see it i_ f__Qrof you. It's about 50 meters f___ the taco place, the jewelry store. Go __ the food court. Got it. ト B_ the jewelry store? Right.

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noa 1.雅子、今日の稽古のためのお花を買うのを忘れないでね。 Masako, don't forget Exercises Ter2 Mt the flowers for today's lesson. Choose Trect words and in the blanks. nange the form, if ecessary. 2. 彼女は、その有名な画家に会えるとは思っていなかった。 She didn't expect the famous painter. 3. 知子は、フランス語で俳句を作るのを、やめてしまった。 Tomoko has stopped haiku in French. Baeble 4.私は、友人とお茶を飲むのはいつでも楽しい。 I always enjoy tea with my friends. 5.私は先日、花屋に寄ったことを覚えている。 hoe in at a flower shop the other day. I remember [ drop / drink / write / buy / see ] 2 Fill in the blanks and complete the sentences. 1.日本太鼓の打ち方を、練習し終わりましたか。 Did you( )() how ( ) beat the Japanese drum? 2. 正直なところ、私はたたみの上で正座できない。 ), I can't sit properly on tatami. でもり 3. 生け花を習得するのは、容易ではない。 Flower arrangement is ( ) master. ud sn 4. 言うまでもなく、茶道には長い歴史がある。 ( )() ( ), the tea ceremony has a long history. 5. 吉田先生は、20年前に合気道を習い始めた。 Ms. Yoshida( ) ( ) ( ) aikido twenty years ago. USE!

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and touches it. Then, G. Answer the following questions. for farmers to grow the “Helping” others is not easy. Sometimes we send the wrong message when we say, "Can I help you?” We mean done as soon as possib well, but we sometimes send the message, “You are not OK; you need to change." I (ア)(むしろ~したい:2語) From the 1970s to th think of it this way: “I see you have a flat tire on your bike. I have some tools and patches here if you want to use There is, however, a b= them. (A) I can also stay around while you fix your bike if you want company." This is (イ) (適する関係代名詞: 1語)Ilearned from my experience along the Sumida River. cluster bombs. This m weapons of war. Let My work is my "vote” on what kind of society I want to live in, Food is also a "tool."(B) Iwant to live in place to live. a society where there is a way to get these “tools" to the people who need them. I don't think of my work as ける conflict 紛争 “helping" people, but rather matching up surplus food with those who can use it. I (ゥ) (~に情熱をもやしてい る:3語)making these matches. ② (much /what / it /sQ/ makes / is / myjob /Yun). 1. 下線部(1)が指して 他の兵器より破壊力 ( ③ ) ような兵 1. Choose the word from the text to match each of the following definitions. (1) the rubber, usually air-filled cover around the edge of the wheel of a car, bicycle etc. 2. 下線部(2)を並- (2) a choice or decision that you make by making a paper 3. Why is the cluster ヒ 2. Fill in the blanks of (ア)~(ウ) with suitable phrases. 4. Fill in the blanks of 3. For underlined part (A) into Japanese. (下の日本語に合うように答えなさい。) あなたが自転車を修理している間に ( 5.(あ)~(う)の空欄に (あ)~に出くわて 4. According to underlined part (B), what kind of society does Mr.Mcjilton want to live in? Answer it in Japanese. 5.下の日本語の意味になるように下線部②を並べ替えなさい。 「これが私の仕事をとても面白いものにする。」 6.In <Summary>, fill in the blanks of (あ)~ (う) with suitable words and complete the sentences. H. [Reading engine 1. 意味が通るように (1)彼女はみんなが目 she raised her vc

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魔女1 BA 女2 ) 彼らは次の映画を作る予定があります。They ( a/ have /make / to/plan) their next movie. 次の文の()内に適するものをア~エから選び, 1記号で答えなさい。 問 B We went to the park yesterday ( 1 1 次の日本文を英文にしなさい。 D 今,何もすることがありません。 (nothing を使って6巻で) )Howers. ア see イ saw ウ to see エ to sawW ロ Mary has something ( ) to her mother. (ユ) ア say イ to say ウ 口2) 私はテレビを見るために早く宅しました。 キキ1 says エ said 口3) Kyoto has many places ( キキ2 ア visits イ visiting ) 早く寝ることはとても大切です。 ウ visit エ to visit (は) 口(4) To read books ( ) very interesting. トンボ 2 あなたが高校に入学後、取り組んでみたいことを1つ取り上げ、 そのことについて内につがりの ある英文3文以上で書きなさい。 ア is イ ウ are am エ be (曲) トンボ 2 次の2つの文をほぼ同じ意味を表す1つの文に書きかえるとき, 空所に適語を書きなさい。 ジグ1 ロ I have no money. I cannot buy a new guitar. 口(1) I have no money ジ2 bue a new guitar. Jane often goes to Tokyo. She takes a lotof pictures there. to (庫) ■3 次の恵子 (Keiko) の日記を読んで、 あとの問いに答えなさい。 キャス 口2) Jane often goes to Tokyo Thursday. January 10 Ta there Toke alot of pictures. Mr, Yoshida said to us, "To write is a good *way to study Engliah." His English class is fun and he speaks English very well. He talka about a lot of things is English 1want to speak English like Mr. Yoshida, He also said, "You learned some English Words, Try to use them. Write about your school life and friends. To write English キャス I heard the news. So I was-glad. 夏(3) I was glad To Mear the news. 5 3 次の文を( )内の指示にしたがって書きかえなさい。 口1) Tom has a lotof work to do, (疑問文に) every day is important." So Iwwill do it from today. Monday, January 21 Does Tonl hawe aot of work to de 口2) Do you want anything fo drink? (cold を補って) Do yar Mant uathing Cold イa dpink? 口3) Igot up early to walk my dog. 不線部が答えの中心となる疑問文に) thy dd you get up early 14) Iwant to be a scientist in the future. (下線部が答えの中心となる疑問文に) In the morning. Kumi said to me in the classroom, "You played the piano very well at the concert yesterday! I was there with my sister." I didn't know that. So I was 10| surprised.Kumi and I talked about music and we had a good time. She also likes music. She said, "I want to listen to your music again," I was happy to hear those Words. Iwant to play the piano well, so I practice for two hours every day. (注)ay 方法 MaT do yau Want To be in the fiuture? ) 吉田先生(Mr. Yoshida) は, 英語を書くうえでのアドバイスを3つしました。 それらを日本語で きなさい。 4 次の日本文に合うように, ( )内の語を並べかえなさい。 L) 母は車を使うのが好きではありません。 Mv mother ( to / does/ like/ not / use ) a ca. My mother doés a car. hat.ke 口2) 私はそのことを聞いて残念です。 (am/to/ sorry/ hear/1) that. 10 Use that. 口2) 恵子が下線部のように感じた理由を, 日本語で具体的に書きなさい。 す。 hear 3)私たちは9時に働き始めました。 fto/ began / we / at/ work) nine. nine. Ne belon to 4OM 口3) 次の質問に英語で答えなさい。 How many hours does Keiko practice the piano every day? (6-7で They_haie their next movie. t make A Dlan have Pan to make

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10 In many American families, it is common for both parents to have full-time jobs, even when they have little children. But if both 192 words の「熟 問題 かせ 載しま べて 2 アメリカでの子守の現状 have full-timejobs, even when they have little children. But if both Mom and Dad are gone all day, who on earth takes care of th。 「文 高し *eA long time ago, only rich people could afford to have a nanny. Nannies were usually middle-aged, unmarried women who were kids? In quite a few homes, the *nanny does. strict with the children. Thev insisted on their children's behaving themselves at all times. 3 These days, however, many middle-class families have college 10 students to work as nannies. Usually these people who take care of children are young women, but some young men do this type of work, too. Often nannies live with the family, and the children grow up to love them very much. These *live-in jobs appeal to college students because they don't have to spend money on rent or food. Lomo9 15 0 Sometimes foreign students take jobs as nannies, hoping such work will help them improve their English skills. There is one problem, though. Because they spend so much time playing and talking 8 with little children, most ofthe English theylearn is “baby talk!” (注)nanny 「乳母」 live-in 「住み込みの」

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3 Grammar Check e tatenent Unscramble the following words and complete the sentences. 1. [all, every, classes, student, in ] decided to participate in the event. decided to participate in the event. 2. Itis still unknown [the, why, suddenly, disappeared, man]. It is still unknown

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3 Grammar Check TEhe statene Unscramble the following words and complete the sentences. 1. [all, every, classes, student, in ] decided to participate in the event. decided to participate in the event. 2. It is still unknown [the, why, suddenly, disappeared, man]. It is still unknown

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)内から適切なものを選びましょう。 Choose the correct words. 1. If Tom(is, were) here, I could explain our situation to him. 2. I could have gone out with him if I (weren't, hadn't been) so tired. 13. If he had gone to the doctor at that time, he would (be, have been) alive today. 4. I wish I (can, could) travel to Africa. 5. She wished the doctor (came, had come) a little sooner. 6. If you had attended the party, you (Could see, could have seen) my parents. *7.I wish I (went, had gone) to see you last night. m 1orl soy