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ATIC B *のメールは,あなたが,10月にハワイから北海道にホームステイに来る予定のマイク(Mike) に送るものです。あなたは,このメールの ン 20語以上の英語で自由に書きなさい。ただし,英文は記入例の書き方にならうこと。 にどのような英文を書きますか。条件にしたがっ メール Hello, Mike. 2gsugnsl 19do mssl of mut 2 や Thank for e-mail. Now I'll answer your questions. you your J5 91idw s asi sd2 エ See you soon. MC Unar &o OM 10:A 0 迎えに行く場所と, 誰と迎えに行くかを伝える。 sque Sif of s x 2 どのような服装を用意したらよいかを, 理由とともに伝える。oiwoin oif 0oauboy niot li I 条件 記入例 イ 1-の ェ S MSI6DUR noA 93-5 Hello everyone How My」 6語 are you name is Momoka I'm junior___ 12語 しびなさ in the future 42語 bpa Wgor bos.tpes.aida.wob o Soslst ti liw gol woH

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あとの各問いに答えなさい。(12点)sM O学中販 お の(S) (1) 次のような状況において,あとの①~③のとき,あなたならどのように英語で表し ますか。それぞれ5語以上の英文を書きなさい。 ただし、I'm などの短縮形は1語として数え,コンマ(),ピリオド(.) などは語数 に入れません。 3 C 0公 (つunim) 00 【状況) あなたは、カナダから来た外国語指導助手(ALT)の David 先生と, 廊下で話を しているところです。 OS の 放課後に時間があるか尋ねるとき。 0 ah。 2 昨夜書いたレポートを読んでほしいと伝えるとき。 YabnoM 3 日本の伝統文化についてのレポートだと伝えるとき。 129gnol srit onsiq odt (2) Reina は,留学先のロンドンでホストファミリーが開いてくれる歓迎パーティーに 出席することになりました。そこで挨拶することになり,下の原稿を準備しました。 あなたが Reina なら,①~③の内容をどのように英語で表しますか。 それぞれ4 語以上の英文を書き,下の原稿を完成させなさい。 ただし,I'm などの短縮形は1語として数え, コンマ(,), ピリオド(.)などは語数 に入れません。 SIVBD 「9 200g9 uo buscgecq bjs2n iPS 、 Su.0U。 S T6TV 【原稿) Hello, everyone. My name is Reina. Nice to meet you. 05人家族だということ。 2_テニスが得意だということ。 3_英語を勉強するためにロンドンに来たということ。 Thank you.

これは何について答えれば良いですか？

Hello, Alice, Thank you for your e-mail. I am happy because you are having good days with your friends. And I'm glad because you found your wallet. I think the man is very kind, too. I have had the *same kind of experience as yours, When I *was in trouble, a kind person helped me. I'll tell you about the experience. 1 was very happy. Now, I think I have to be a kind person, too. Write to me again soon!

この英文が正しいかを教えて頂きたいです💦 お願いします🙏

高校生の美香(Mika)は, 来週の日曜日に留学生のアンナ(Anna)と一緒に出か ることになりました。アンナからEメールでどこに行くか相談を受けた美音は, 園に行くことを提案しようと思い,アンナにEメールを送ることにしました。 あなたが美香ならば, どのような内容のEメールを送りますか。次の条件12 したがって,“Hello, Anna. I'm Mika.” のあとに 20語程度の英語で書きなさい。コン やピリオドなどの記号は語数に含めないこと。 (*17 年大阪府A) く条件1>最初に, 自分はアンナと一緒に南動物園 (Minami Zoo)に行きたいということを書くこと。 く条件2>次に,動物園に行きたい理由を考えて書くこと。 Hir Minani Zo Hello, Anna. I'm Mika. Sans a lot with Can me M フM )o0 aninals Late puo 0 do

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(18) Caroline doesn't have as ( she often borows his. 1 soon )CDs as her brother does, so (23) A: Hey、 Rob. Can you and Yuki come for dinner tomorrow? I'm making curry. B: That sounds good. ( 23 ) A: Oh, I didn'tknow.I can make a mild one especially for her. B: That's very kind of you. I'll ask if she's free tomorrow evening. 1 But I don't like making Indian food. 2 But I ate curry at a restaurant yesterday. 3 But Yuki doesn't really like spicy food. 4 But Yuki thinks curry is hard to make. 2 much 3 long 4 many (19) A: When I asked Patrick to go toa movie with us tonight, he said no. But he didn't say ( B: Maybe he's not feeling well, or maybe he just has other plans. 1 which ) he doesn't want to come. 2 what 3 why 4 who (20) Randy just got a puppy for his birthday. He really likes it and (24) A: Hello, sir. Welcome to Ron's Pet Store. Can I help you with can't stop( 1 to follow 3 to be followed )it around the house. 2 following 4 followed Something? B: Yes. ( 24 )Ithink his old one is to small. A: I see. How about this one? It's the largest we have in the store. B: That's perfect. He'll have plenty of space to swim around. 11want to getabigger turtle. 3 I was just looking at that turtle. 4 I need a tank for my turtle. 次の六つの会話文を完成させるために,(21) から(28) に入るものとして最も適切 2なものを1, 2,3,4の中から一つ選び、その番号を解答用紙の所定欄にマーク 2 I bought a baby turtle recently. しなさい。 A: Hi, Kaori. I haven't seen you in the office for a while. Ha you been on vacation? B: Yes.I wentto Rome with my husband for a week. It was fantastic. A: Did you take any pictures? I'd love to see them. B: Well, I did, ( 25 ) A: Oh, that's too bad. You must have been really upset. B: I was, but luckily my husband also took some, I'll show them to you later. A:I was thinking about going to Rome myself. Do you recommend it? B: Yes. ( 26 ) There are s0 many interesting things to see. (21) A: Guess what, Uncle Bob! I started learning karate today. Mom said you used to do karate. B: That's right. I took lessons in high school. A: Can I practice with you? We could do it in the backyard. B:( 21)You might get hurt. Maybe after you've had some more lessons. 1 That's probably not a good idea. 2 You should practice withme now. 3 It would be better to quit your lessons. 4 I'll get changed into my karate uniform. (22) A: I'm going to Paris on a homestay this summer. B: Really, Karen? My sister lives there. ( 22 ) A: That would be great. I'd like to meet her. B: Well, write to her soon because she's very busy. (25) 1 but I forgot where I took most of them. 2 but I lost my camera on the last.day. 3 but I haven't gotten them from the store yet. 4 but I didn't bring the camera with me today. 1 Shall I go to France with you? 2 Shall I introduce you to a host family? 3 Shall I give you her e-mail address? 4 Shall I teach you some French? (26) 1 I'm sure you'd havea great time. 2 It's more fun with lots of people. 3 You should go to Milan instead. 4 I like to practice my Italian. 38

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(18) Caroline doesn't have as ( ) CDs as her brother does, so (23) A: Hey, Rob. Can you and Yuki come for dinner tomorrow? I'm she often borrows his. 1 soon making curry. B: That sounds good. ( 23 ) A: Oh, I didn't know. I can make a mild one especially for her. B: That's very kind of you. I'll ask if she's free tomorrow evening. 2 much 3 long 4 many (19) A: When I asked Patrick to go to a movie with us tonight, he said no. But he didn't say ( B: Maybe he's not feeling well, or maybe he just has other plans. 1 which ) he doesn't want to come. 1 But I don't like making Indian food. 2 But I ate curry at a restaurant yesterday. 3 But Yuki doesn't really like spicy food. 4 But Yuki thinks curry is hard to make. 2 what 3 why 4 who (20) Randy just got a puppy for his birthday. He really likes it and (24) A: Hello, sir. Welcome to Ron's Pet Store. Can I help you with can't stop ( 1 to follow 3 to be followed )it around the house. something? B: Yes.( 24 ) I think his old one is too small. A: I see. How about this one? It's the largest we have in the store. B: That's perfect. He'll have plenty of space to swim around. 2 following 4 followed 次の六つの会話文を完成させるために, (21)から (28) に入るものとして最も適切 なものを1, 2, 3, 4の中から一つ選び, その番号を解答用紙の所定欄にマーク しなさい。 2 I bought a baby turtle recently. 1 I want to get a bigger turtle. 3 Iwas just looking at that turtle. 4 I needa tank for my turtle. A: Hi, Kaori. I haven't seen you in the office for a while. Have you been on vacation? B: Yes. I went to Rome with my husband for a week. It was fantastic. A: Did you take any pictures? I'd love to see them. B: Well, I did, ( 25 ) A: Oh, that's too bad. You must have been really upset. B: I was, but luckily my husband also took some. I'll show them to you later. A:I was thinking about going to Rome myself. Do you recommend it? B: Yes. ( 26 ) There are so many interesting things to see. (21) A: Guess what, Uncle Bob! I started learning karate today. Mom said you used to do karate. B: That's right. I took lessons in high school. A: Can I practice with you? We could do it in the backyard. B: ( 21 ) You might get hurt. Maybe after you've had some more lessons. 1 That's probably not a good idea. 2 You should practice with me now. 3 It would be better to quit your lessons. 4 Ill get changed into my karate uniform. (22) A: I'mgoing to Paris on a homestay this summer. B: Really, Karen? My sister lives there. ( 22 ) A: That would be great. I'd like to meet her. B: Well, write to her soon because she's very busy. (25) 1 but I forgot where I took most of them. 2 but I lost my camera on the last.day. 3 but I haven't gotten them from the store yet. 4 but I didn't bring the camera with me today. 1 Shall I go to France with you? 2 Shall I introduce you to a host family? 3 Shall I give you her e-mail address? 4 Shall I teach you some French? (26) 1 I'm sure you'd have a great time. 2 It's more fun with lots of people. 3 You should go to Milan instead. 4I like to practice my Italian. 38

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Jane :Hello? This is Jane. May I speak to Ken, please? 5or LE SON *A Telephone Call 次の会話文を読んで、①~⑤までの()の中に入れるのに最も適当なものを下から選んで, その記号を○で囲みなさい。 Yooo r emoo bluow et iiouort ue bluow S Ken : Yes, this is Ken. bnel ioy bluoW em tiw Tnbluow ehi bluoda bie Lane :Oh hi, Ken. 1 have some news for you.won emort vale bfuore uoY bluode 8 (0) She's going to stay with me for a week. のチ ト Ken : Oh, really? く mwa of Tno: Yes, it is. She has wanted to come to Japan for a long time. ed 1'nao sids d fon teui Ken Jane : She's your age. Why don't you come over and meet her? )の A Taso T)aMO blaod2 biuoW ).9 内 Ken :I'd be very glad to. When shall I come over? Jane : How about three o'clock next Saturday? Ken : All right.(④ ) ) ai no Jane : Yes, you can bring some of your friends. bluow liw マ) od binz sH Ken : Oh, that will be nice. Ill bring Emi.Masako and Jiro DleuoW I'd like to buy something for her. What does she like? 1同は文のの 8 Jane : Well, she's interested in Japanese castles. Jest mn ma Ken :I see. I'll try to get an English book about Japanese castles. W Jane :( 5). I'll see you at three next Saturday. won 100 og f'no Ken : Good-by. uoY 0 ア. My sister is coming to visit me from Boston. 15iug s) valg T'obluoo ! イ. My sister is too young to stay alone in Japan. uO so of svad I o0 ウ. My sister is visiting our aunt in the U.S. Ho 1. エ, My sister is too busy to come to Japan. ア、Is she pretty? 2 ア. Do you like Japan? イ. Is she older than I? イ. Is it raining now? ウ、Is she your friend? ウ. Is Tokyo bigger than Boston? エ, Is this her first visit to Japan? エ, Is she a teacher? 5 ア. No, thank you. ア. Can you come with me? イ.I'd like to. 1. Can anyone also come with me? ウ. How nice! ワ、 Can anyone speak English with Jane? エ、 You are too kind to get it. エ、 Can I come over to your house? 5 Primer

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come here. Why don't you talk together?” I felt a little nervous. But I went to the table and residents were sitting around a big table in the *dining room. A *care worker said to me, “Ken, 6 次の英文は中学生の健(Ken)が, ボランティア活動(a volunteer activity)をしたときのことについて書 In the afternoon of the first day, many *residents were ①(enjoy) their *teatime. Eight During the summer vacation, I visited a *nursing home for four days to work as a volunteer. (静岡改) .a to the eight residents, "Good afternoon, I'm Ken. Nice to meet you." Then, I sat next to an J woman called Reiko-san. She smiled and said to me, “Hello. How old are you? Where do , live2" I answered, “Well, I'm fourteen. I live near this nursing home.” I was hanny when Reiko-san talked to me. Then, I wanted to ask some questions about her. but. I what to ask. So, I 3 and we kept quiet. I felt sorry for her. nursing home 老人ホーム care worker 介護福祉士 resident 入居者 teatime お茶の時間 dining room 食堂 (1) のの( )内の語を適する形にかえて書きなさい。 (3点) (2) 2, 3の に適する語(句)の組み合わせを,ア~エから1つ選びなさい。 (5点) ア 2 knew asked many questions イ knew didn't ask anything asked many questions 2 didn't know (3 didn't ask anything ウ 2 didn't know 3 エ (5点×2) (3) 本文の内容にあうように,次の質問に英語で答えなさい。 (a) How long did Ken work at the nursing home as a volunteer? (b) How did Ken feel before talking to the eight residents on the first day? 39

この英作文の添削をお願いしたいです🙇‍♀️

* 次の英文を読んで, あなたの考えを,[条件]と [記入上の注意〕に従って40語以上 50語程度の英語 で書きなさい。*印のついている語句には、本文のあとに[注]があります。 (10点) This kind of art IS called "street art" or "graffiti." Those pictures sometimes become problems when thev are painted without *permission. *Banksy. Some *artists *paint on the *walls. bridges, and buildings in a town. But there are also some very popular street artists lilko One street artist says he makes street art for *poor people who can't go to th。 In one Japanese town, children painted a picture on the wall of a *tunnel with their teachers and parents. art museum. The tunnel looks much better now and people in the town like it In another city, after a picture of flowers was painted on a street near the train station the *number of bikes that were *parked there illegally got Smaller. Do you think street art can make your town better? paint…(絵を)描く artist………芸術家,アーティスト walls, bridges, and buildings… 壁や橋, 建物 Banksy……バンクシー (ストリートアートで有名な芸術家の1人) poor……貧しい number……数 [注) permission… 許可 tunnel………トンネル ちゅうりん (be) parked illegally ………違法に駐輪(車)される [条件) 下線部の質問に対するあなたの考えを,その理由が伝わるように書きなさい。 (記入上の注意 ① 【記入例】 にならって, 解答欄の下線 の上に1語ずつ書きなさい。 *符号(,.?!など)は語数に含めません。 * 50 語を超える場合は, 解答欄開の破線。 で示された行におさまるように書きなさい。 2 英文の数は問いません。 ③ 【下書き欄】は, 必要に応じて使ってかまいません。 【記入例) Hello, everyone! I'm Tiffany from Canada. I'm twenty-one old. Hob years August 12, 2020. That was 50 語 a lot of fun.

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ただし, I'm などの短縮形は1時として数え,コンマ(),ピリオド()などは語数 セケチと言の品意お0を示 ) などの短縮形は1語として数え,コンマ(,),ピリオド(.) などは語数 あとの各問いに答えなさい。(12点) (1)次のような状況において,あとのD~3のとき,あなたならどのように英語で表 しますか。それぞれ4語以上の英文を書きなさい。 ただし,I'm などの短縮形は1語として数え,コンマ(),ピリオド()などは語数 に入れません。 1. : L 19dsm9uo/. > 3 じょうきょう 【状況】 Ju0 379W IoV slid W あなたは,カナダから来た留学生の David と,週明けに学校で話をしていま m01 995229MM す。 O8amg sd li の 昨日は,雨が降っていたので,家で過ごしたと伝えるとき。 32父にもらった本を読み終えたと伝えるとき。x hlad 19 sd 3 好きな小説家(author)は誰かと尋ねるとき。sH NsaesRe: だれ たず D bt92 9209 9 d 1D MOr Tro0mrsttp zisl sa tto sstt (2)Saori は,オーストラリアに1年間留学していました。 帰国後すぐに,オーストラ リアにいる友人の Ellen に Eメールを書いています。 あなたが Saori なら, ①~③の内容をどのように英語で表しますか。それぞれ5語 2SW 996229m ainl T 以上の英文を書き,下のEメールを完成させなさい。 ただし、 に入れません。 9le m ds anoid29up omoe Nas of yisM bsliso swsy0 .aM ned W.ト 19OK S saesReILo J -ure tters and the phnto album afer hor Jno asw 【Eメール) M nbluoo sde 32us9d insys odt tuode Hello Ellen, |Thank you very much for everything you did for me when I was in Australia. 0昨日の夜,自宅に到着したということ。 留学を通じて多くのことを学んだということ。 3_異文化を理解することは大切だと思うということ。 とうちゃく Your friend, Saori