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4 Use the passive of the verbs in brackets and complete the sentences. [一→ L.1 mainly from the U.S.A. [import] (1) Soybeans (2) How much for your first job? [pay] [過去時制で) you (3) A new theater near the station now. [is building] (4) Identity badges by all visitors. [should wear] (5) The file ; it may have a virus. [mustn't open] 1(6) our new gym? It's amazing. [have shown] you (7) It 19) gad yooy nst (8) The teacher that the company will open a new factory in Malaysia. [say] [「~だそうだ」の意味に) vit all the people in this town. [know] (9) Her boss her latest report. [satisfy] by her teammates because of her leadership. [look up to] (10) Sarah is 5 Put the words in the right order. [→L.8] 9qy To eon (1) My aim in life ( novelist, become, a, to, is ). lood s mid ovsy (2) I believe this is ( a, to, good, take, approach ). 00 (3) It ( is, to, very, predict, difficult ) the result of this match. (4) Billy ( important, it, make, thinks, to ) a success of his life. (5) The shop assistant kindly ( operate, how, showed, to, me ) the machine. (6) My mother ( to, to, withdraw, went, the post office ) some money. (7) I had no ( in, on, to, rely, friends ) Canada. I felt very lonely. (8) I'm(to, the soccer team, that, know, excited ) will come to Japan. 6 Correct the following sentences which contain one error each. [総合問題] (1) The festival is much bigger than it would be ten years ago. (2) My sister may talk with Mr. Williams at the. party last night. (3) Children under the age of six do not allow in this large pool. (4) I can't lend you my digital camera because it's repairing this week. (5) They have been discussing about the topic for more than two hours. (6) Helen was very pleasing with her exam results. (7) She pretended to not know anything about the matter. (8) This dictionary is easy to use it, so I recommend it to my juniors.

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問題は【1】~【4】まである。答えは各問題の指示に従って別紙の解答用紙に書きなさい。 【1】次の英文を読んで設問に答えなさい。 Headaches are a big problem. Each year, millions of people suffer from severe headaches that affect their enjoyment of life, (1) not to mention their productivity at work. estimate, headaches cost individuals and businesses more than (2) $50 billion each year! (3) This is one of the reasons research into headaches has become a worldwide effort. Although he did not know much about how headaches work, Hippocrates was the first doctor to find a way to treat them. By 400 BC, Hippocrates had discovered that the *bark from willow trees was useful in treating pain. He made a white powder from the tree's bark and gave it to his patients. Hippocrates did not know it, but he was actually prescribing a natural chemical in willow bark called salicin. Whena person eats salicin, the chemical is changed inside his or her body into (4) salicylic acid. It turns out that salicylic acid is good for stopping pain, including headache pain, but it is bad for a person's stomach. In the 1800s, a chemist in Germany slightly changed easier for people to take. commonly known as aspirin. Aspirin was used throughout most of the 1900s to treat headaches, but doctors had little idea about what really caused headaches. When doctors can *diagnose the cause of a disease, they can find better ways to treat it. Therefore, as medical technology developed, doctors began to use it to learn more about the human brain and about headaches. In fact, according to one m to make it This new form of the chemical was called acetylsalicylic acid, now acid's Now doctors classify headaches ( A ) two general types: primary and secondary. A primary headache is a condition ( B) as only the headache itself. one caused by another physiological condition, such as an *infection or a *tumor. For primary headaches, doctors have determined three possible causes. headache is caused by stress. characteristically felt on both sides of the head as a dull, steady pain. Another kind of primary headache is the *migraine headache. Exactly what causes these headaches is not well understood, but many experts believe it could be abnormal brain activity causing changes in the brain's chemistry and blood flow. For many people, migraines are caused by certain (5) stimuli, such as poor sleep or particular foods or smells. A sufferer usually feels intense pain on one side of the head and becomes sensitive to light and noise. If the migraine is severe, the sufferer may *vomit repeatedly. The third kind of primary headache is known as the cluster headache. Cluster headaches typically occur around the same time each day for weeks or months at a time. The person ( C)from this kind of headache usually feels pain on one side of her or his head, and the pain is centered around one of the eyes. Doctors do not know much (6) at present about cluster headaches, but they seem to be more common among men and could be related to alcohol or other things that affect a person's blood flow. Using computers and more advanced medical equipment, doctors continue to learn more about what happens in the brain before and during headaches. Especially in the case of migraines, some doctors believe they have found the part of the brain that sets off the reaction for severe attacks. With these insights into brain processes, doctors hope new ways will be discovered to stop headaches before they begin. On the other hand, a secondary headache is One kind of primary Doctors usually call these tension headaches, and they are 注: bark 樹皮 diagnose ~を診断する、~を突き止める 感染症·伝染病 migraine (headache) 偏頭痛 infection tumor 腫場 vomit 食べたものを吐く (出典:READING FOR THE REAL WORLD 3rd edition, Compass Publishing より)

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PRE 以下の TOPIC について, あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。 ●POINTS は理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。ただし、これ。 以外の観点から理由を書いてもかまいません。 ●語数の目安は 80 語~100 語です。 ●解答は,解答用紙のB面にあるライティング解答欄に書きなさい。なお、解営 欄の外に書かれたものは採点されません。 ●解答が TOPIC に示された問いの答えになっていない場合や, TOPIC からずれ ていると判断された場合は, 0点と採点されることがあります。TOPIC の内容 をよく読んでから答えてください。 ライティング BRIN 4 TOPIC Today, some young people do not want to start working for large companies. Do you think the number of these people will increase in the future? POINTS Incomeer po ● Opportunity Use for the elecre ickers wou onle S ncjce nadnon TGG0 GIG Stress 2ovammen 020ONSUIDE 171,201

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d ) odhigosd ライティング ●以下の TOPIC について, あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。 POINTS は理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。ただし,これら 以外の観点から理由を書いてもかまいません。 ●語数の目安は 80 語~100 語です。 ●解答は,解答用紙のB面にあるライティング解答欄に書きなさい。なお,解答 欄の外に書かれたものは採点されません。 解答が TOPIC に示された問いの答えになっていない場合や, TOPIC からずれ ていると判断された場合は,0点と採点されることがあります。TOPIC の内容 other をよく読んでから答えてください。 fore lnsib2 4 hun TOPIC People around the world live longer lives than they did in the past. Do you think people will live even longer lives in the future? The Porcent wcre aquong wan an bluow ti ueuu inow b POINTS 1 1ah b OAOW oy ● Changing lifestyles ● Developing countries ● Technology tow They amo 76.38 d roy Too 20THO) ho

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4 一次試験·筆記 問題編 p.32 トピックの訳 若者は自分の将来の職業について考えることにもっと時間を使うべきだ と言う人がいます。あなたはこの意見に同意しますか。 ポイントの訳 教育 収入 技能 解答例) I do not think that young people should spend more time thinking about their future careers. First, schools already offer career education. For example, there are classes where students can learn about jobs and careers, and schools often invite guest speakers to talk about their experiences in society. Second, young people should try different kinds of jobs instead of only thinking about a future career. By experiencing these jobs, they d songuo can find what skills and abilities they have. In conclusion, I do not believe young people should spend a lot of time thinking about their future careers. 解答例の訳 若者は自分の将来の職業について考えることにもっと時間を使うべきだ とは思いません。第1に、学校がすでに職業教育を提供しています。 例 えば,学生が仕事や職業について学ぶことができる授業があって,学校 は社会での経験について話してくれるゲストスピーカーをしばしば招き ます。第2に,将来の職業についてただ考える代わりに, 若者はさまざ まな種類の仕事を試してみるべきです。これらの仕事を経験することに よって,彼らはどんな技能と能力を自分が持っているかを見つけ出すこ とができます。結論として, 若者は自分の将来の職業について考えるこ

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●記入上の注意(記述形式) 指示事項を守り,文字は,はっきりと分かりやすく書いてください。 太枠に囲まれた部分のみが採点の対象です。 4 ライティング解答欄 I donf think That sone pong peaple who do not want To Start iworking for |ange comupanies will inchease iん fature. The tirst reason is that we have a lot ot oppoitunity to gtow up ny.cetfin lange bonmpanies. The secoud reason is thet the income the is stable than shs-t companies more For these heesous that I explained above Some Voung pe0ple who do net want to start iwotking tor large companles wl hot ihchea se m thé tatere 1 have Jeay opiaion. Tuo To support heasous 1152.