とても拙い英文で申し訳ないのですが、ピンクの斜め線の部分はどう直したら良くなるでしょうか？ タイトルは　rush hourの交通渋滞をどう減らすか　というものです 2枚目が模範解答です お願いします🙇‍♀️

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次の英文を読んで、 問 1 ~ 問8に答えなさい。 (配点50点) Inspired by fierce family battles for the last remaining piece of cake, a team of three high schoolers in southwestern Japan's Oita *Prefecture have invented a device that cuts round cake and pizza evenly, no matter how many pieces are sliced, and their creation won the top prize in the prefecture's invention contest in 2021. The three students are members of the industrial technology club at Oita Prefectural Kunisaki High School. Their clever invention to solve a daily life problem with a flexible *2mindset won the governor's award in the competition and is gathering attention. Twelve students in the electronics department of the school ( 1 ) to the industrial technology club, which has continued to submit works to the invention contest for about 40 years. Five of their creations won prizes in the high school division of the 2021 edition of the competition that was launched in 1941. The top prize-winning device, whose name translates to "Let's kindly divide it up," was invented by second-year students Wataru Onoda, 16, Rinto Kimura, 17, and third-year student Mitsumi Zaizen, 18. It was inspired by bbattles for birthday cake in Onoda’s family. He needed to defeat his rival two sisters in games of rock-paper-scissors to get the last remaining piece because the cake was always cut into eight pieces despite his family having seven members. Based on Onoda's idea to equally divide a cake into seven pieces, Kimura created a drawing and computer program to precisely make parts for the device. While Zaizen could not be involved in the actual production due to preparations for her university entrance she created a video for the presentation, using her experience of winning a prize in the competition for two years in a row. exams, (2 ) a two-month trial and error process, the device was completed. When a cake or pizza is placed on a turntable made with a laser beam machine, it can be cut evenly into

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Read the passage and answer the questions that follow. (1). „Why do batteries matter? Look at all your electronic devices: from laptops to smartphones to Kindles or iPads, even your watch. Those electronics are getting more energy-efficient and require less energy than they used to. But as they do, people get greedy and want their capabilities to increase. The battery, or how much energy you can 05 store in a given volume and weight, is the defining factor in this whole field. Then there are electric cars. If we can make batteries with double the "energy TR2Z density of today's and drive the price below $200 per "kilowatt-hour (versus $300 to $800 today, depending on type and weight), we could have a car with a 300-mile range, even with the air conditioner or heater turned up, that would sell for $25,000 to $30,000. The 10 Department of Energy's goal is to get batteries to $150 per kilowatt-hour by the year 2020. 01 Finally, there are the "utility-scale batteries, which are very important for renewable TR28 energy. Wind and solar power are going to become more common. Wind is already the second-cheapest form of new energy, after shale gas, and it will become the cheapest 15 15 within a decade. Right now "utility companies get about 4 percent of their power from renewable sources other than "hydro- and that 4 percent is roughly all from wind. We may see a day when renewables make up 50, 60, 70 percent of the total supply of energy. Utility companies will need batteries to stabilize the flow of renewable energy into the *grid, and also require a better electrical control system to (3)do the switching. People 20 may have these batteries at their homes instead of generators. All of this would create a huge market. But the effects would be more profound. T There are mountainous places even in the U.S., like western Alaska, that will never be connected to the electric grid. There aren't enough people, and the distances are too great. There are many parts of South Asia like this, too. But they will have solar and 25 wind power - which, in 10 or 15 years, are going to be as cheap as any other form of energy, or cheaper. Once you have "storage systems, you can put a little "solar installation on your roof or "a plot of land, and then you will have your electric supply! It will be like cellphones' "leapfrogging the "land-line era. It will transform the prosperity of the world. 【Notes】 energy density エネルギー密度 (ここでは電池の容量を意味する) kilowatt-hour キロワット時 (1キロワットの機器を1時間使ったときの消費電力量) utility-scale 電力供給に使う規模の hydro utility company t storage 貯蔵 (ここでは電気を蓄えておくことを意味する) grid solar installation a plot of land 一画の土地 land-line 地上 (の電話) 線 by a factor of two (増減の幅が)2倍で (50pts.) leapfrog 〜を一足跳びにする

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〔Ⅰ〕 次の英文を読み. 設問 1~21 に答えよ。 Sandy lives in an apartment so small that when she comes home from shopping, she has to decide what to move out to make room for her purchases. She struggles day-to-day to feed and clothe herself and her four-year-old daughter on money from freelance writing jobs and helping neighbors. (2) Her ex-husband has long since disappeared down some unknown highway, probably never to be heard from again. As often as not, her car decides it needs a day off and refuses to start. That means bicycling (weather permitting), walking or asking friends for a ride. 13 The things most Americans consider essential for survival- a television. microwave, big freezer and high-priced sneakers are far down Sandy's list of "maybe someday" items. (5) Nutritious food, warm clothing, an affordable apartment, student loan payments, books for her daughter, absolutely necessary medical care and an occasional movie eat up what little money there is to go around. Sandy has knocked ) more doors than she can recall, trying to find (7) a decent job, but there is always something that doesn't quite fit-too little experience or not the right kind, or hours that make child care impossible. Sandy's story is not unusual. Many single parents and older people struggle with our economic structure, falling into the gap between being truly self-sufficient and being poor enough that the government will provide assistance. What makes Sandy unusual is her outlook. "I don't have much in the way of stuff or the American dream," she told me with a genuine smile. "Does that bother you?" I asked. "Sometimes. When I see another little girl around my daughter's age who has nice clothes and toys, or who is riding around in a fancy car or living in a fine house, then I feel bad. Everyone wants to do well for their children." she replied. "But you're not angry?" "What's to be angry (9) and I have what is really important in life," she replied. "And what is that?" I asked. (10) "As I see it, no matter how much stuff you buy, no matter how much )? We aren't starving or freezing to death. (11) money you make. you really only get to keep three things in life." she said. "What do you mean by 'keep?" (12) "I mean that nobody can take these things away from you." "And what are these three things?" I asked. "One, your experiences: two, your true friends; and three, what you grow inside yourself." she told me without hesitation. (13) For Sandy, "experiences" don't come on a grand scale. They are so-called ordinary moments with her daughter, walks in the woods, napping under a shady tree, listening to music, taking a warm bath or baking bread. Her definition of friends is more expansive. "True friends are the ones (15) who never leave your heart, even if they leave your life for a while. Even after years apart. you pick up with them right where you left off, and even if they die, they're never dead in your heart," she explained. 16 ) to each of us. (17 As for what we grow inside, Sandy said, "That's ( isn't it? I don't grow anger or sorrow. I could if I wanted to, but I'd rather not." "So what do you grow?" I asked. Sandy looked warmly at her daughter and then back to me. She pointed toward her own eyes, which were shining with tenderness. gratitude and a sparkling joy. "I grow this." From the book Chicken Soup for the Woman's Soul by Jack Canfield. Mark Victor Hansen. Jennifer Read Hawthorne, and Marci Shimoff. Copyright 2012 by Chicken Soup for the Soul Publishing, LLC. Published by Backlist. LLC. a unit of Chicken Soup for the Soul Publishing. LLC. Chicken Soup for the Soul is a registered trademark of Chicken Soup for the Soul Publishing, LLC. Reprinted by permission. All rights reserved.

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A. Circle the letter of the word or phrase that best completes the sentence. 1. His parents. a. intend 2. I may have to him by not allowing him to play computer games. b. locate c. motivate a. face a challenge 3. Some animals could not a. adapt 4. The building is a. based on 5. You must be a. amazing d. punish getting a job to pay for my books if the bookstore keeps raising its prices. b. come to an end d. take over c. resort to b. discover d. surround finished. They will finish working on it this month, I am sure. b. just about c. tempted to d. in touch with about your birthday next weekend. b. excited c. jealous 6. It is interesting to watch the a. energy to the colder weather, so they died. c. rank b. interaction 7. Most people imagine a desert a. empire b. factor 8. She knows how to a. repair b. reward d. medical of these two babies with each other. c. recipient almost anything that is broken. c. respond d. structure to be boring, but I find it quite interesting. c. landscape d. status d. ruin

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44 15 20 25 30 Lecturer 10 Class times Office hours* Classroom Textbook Reading Read the following passage and answer the questions. English Writing Core I 43 ► This course is for foreign students to learn basic academic writing skills. The course is divided into three classes according to the results of a placement test. ► The placement test is on Tuesday, September 2 at 9:00 in Bldg. 10 Room 1. ▸ After the test, students must visit the student office by September 9 to register. This is a half-year course, and students who have completed one level can enter the next level in the spring term without taking the placement test. Level 1 Level 2 Level 3 Prof. Smith Friday 9:00 a.m.-10:30 a.m. Friday 10:45 a.m.-12:00 p.m. Bldg. 12 Room 1 "Advanced Writing Strategies Level 1: This course introduces students to the basics of English academic writing. Students will begin by learning how to write a coherent paragraph and then apply this skill to writing a five-paragraph essay. They will learn how to create an effective thesis statement, topic sentences, introduction and conclusion, as well as how to organize supporting sentences logically. Students are required to submit one single-paragraph composition, one essay outline and two essays on pre-selected topics at the end of the course for assessment. | 43-45 英 Green Valley University, Autumn Semester Level 2: In this course students focus on gaining an in-depth understanding of the form and function of *argumentative writing and compare and contrast representative essays. Emphasis is placed on writing effective thesis statements and developing paragraphs. Students also learn effective citation, paraphrasing and summarizing skills. Reading academic articles to improve their writing style and vocabulary is a key feature of this course. Assessment is based on two short essays and a paraphrasing and summarizing task. 4 Bldg. 19 pre-selected 24 paraphrase Prof. Simpson Prof. Wheeler Wednesday 9:00 a.m.-10:30 a.m. Monday 10:30 a.m.-12:00 p.m. Wednesday 10:45 a.m-12:00 p.m. Monday 1:20 p.m.-2:50 p.m. Bldg. 10 Room 1 "Have Fun Writing" Bldg. 10 Room 5 "Essay Writing Skills" Level 3: For more experienced students, this course aims to develop advanced essay. writing skills. Emphasis is placed on taking a position in an argumentative essay, researching, evaluating sources and logically developing ideas throughout the essay Students will also learn how to effectively integrate a range of sources into their writing. Assessment is based on one long essay on an academic topic chosen by the student. (379 words) * office hours: 大学の研究室などで教員に面談が可能な時間帯 thesis statement: (エッセイの) 主題文 argumentative: Words & Phrases 32 9 Prof. 20 assessment 29 take a position 15 coherent 21 in-depth 31 integrate A into B 19 composition 24 citation 31 a range of~ Read the passage and put T (True) or F (False) in the brackets. (各2点) (1) Students cannot choose the level of the course they want to take. (2) Students who have finished the level 2 course can enter the level 3 course without taking a test. ( ) (3) All students, whichever level they are taking, must submit at least one essay on a topic chosen by the student for assessment. ) 2 Questions Answer the following questions. [1] Choose one word which has the same pronunciation as the underlined part of the following word from the passage. (4点) thesis a. beneath b. breathe c. worthy d. smooth [2] Complete the answer to the following question. "What is a placement test?" "It is a test to [3] Hiroshi wants to see the lecturer of the Level 2 course to ask some questions. Tell him what to do to see the lecturer. (6点) [4] Choose the suitable word for each blank. (1) Level 1 students focus on how to write logical and well paragraphs. a. devised b. organized c. known (2) Level 3 students have to make their opinion essay. a. correct b. decent c. clear [5] Choose the suitable phrase for the blank. "Level 2 students are required to fully understand a. what argumentative writing is b. how important it is to write an effective thesis statement c. what the basic structure of English academic writing is d. how argumentative writing is evaluated 3 Listening Quiz (1) a. Visit the lecturer at the specified time. b. Go to Room 1 in Building 10 by September 9. d. spoken d. different (5点) c. Buy the textbook during the specified period. d. Register at the student office by the closing day. (2) a. To learn how to organize supporting sentences logically. b. To improve their writing style and vocabulary. c. To create an effective thesis statement. d. To develop ideas logically throughout the essay. (各4点) Listen to the recording and choose the best option. in an argumentative (5点) 45 回 (各3点) 33