こんばんは英作文の添削をお願いします！ たくさんの人の意見が欲しいです！ 1、2枚目が下書きでこの文章と点数です 最初で満点をとりたいのでchat GPTを交えて文を書き直しました。不自然な文があったら教えてください！ 明日の午後提出です！

I'm going to talk about an experience that changed my life Was when I studied studying abroad in Niseko, Hokkaido. I stayed for a total of 2 months last summer I made a lot of friends. and this summer. Speaking in both Japanese and English deepened our bond. Even after studying abroad we l are still in touch. We are going to have a reunion in Tokyo on Christmas Actually, I hadn't been good at English before I studied abroad. A friend of mine said "Don't be afraid ". Then to me •get rid of my weakness in English. I had a conversation with my I was able to native teacher in English through the activitities. In these activities, had a We did BBQ, cooked, and went sightseeing. It was d again, I would like to go skiing. lot of fun. If I could study abroad in Niseko to Niseko. You can enjoy Niseko's lifestyle Please yo m

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3 次は、高校生のHayato (男性) が書いた文章です。 これを読んで, 間 1~ 問6に答えなさい。 *印の ついている語句には、本文のあとに〔注〕があります。(34点) I love bicycles. I've been using my bicycle since I was a junior high school student. One morning, however, I got scared on my way to school. A car passed me really fast. It almost touched my bicycle. There are only a few *bicycle lanes in my town, and I think some of those lanes are too narrow for a bicycle to use safely. I wanted to make our streets safer for cyclists, and then I read about "Copenhagen, Denmark in a bicycle "magazine. It's Aas one of the most *bicycle-friendly cities in the world. I learned more about the city on the Internet and thought it's really a wonderful city for cyclists. I'd like to write about it. In Denmark. 90% of the people have a bicycle, and in Copenhagen, 49% of the workers and students go to work or school by bicycle (27 % go by car, 18% by bus or train, and 6% on foot). Many streets in the city have bicycle lanes and bicycle traffic lights, and there is even a bicycle bridge named "The Bicycle "Snake." I was "envious of the cyclists in Copenhagen because the city is bicycle-friendly in every way. You can ride a bicycle at 20 km/h without B at red lights even when the traffic is busy, and you can bring your bicycle on trains and buses. In the 2019 ranking of "Bicycle-friendly Cities," Copenhagen was No. 1 and Tokyo was No. 16. ② A lot of people were using cars in Copenhagen, too, but around 1980, the city started making better roads and rules for bicycles, and the number of bicycle users started increasing. Around 2017, the number of bicycle users in Copenhagen became almost the same as the number of car users. I was also surprised to see that the number of bicycle accidents in Copenhagen was "lower than in other large cities. I think it's because the roads (cyclists for safe/follow/ and/ are cyclists the traffic rules. In many Japanese road safety classes, children are taught that roads are dangerous and sometimes shown shocking scenes of traffic accidents, and they learn that they must follow traffic rules when they ride a bicycle. But in Denmark. children play games in their classes. They can have fun when they learn traffic rules. Now there is a movement in Japan that gives children road safety classes in this way. Bicycles are cheaper than cars and healthier. They're also friendlier to the environment. The United Nations expects that about 70% of the people in the world will live in big cities by 2050. Such a large number of people will cause some problems, and more traffic is one of them. Copenhagen is a very good role model for Sustainable cities and communities" which is one of the U.N.'s "Sustainable Development Goals. I think Copenhagen's ideas to increase the number of bicycle users are wonderful because people there don't have to stop doing anything. They choose bicycles because the city is designed in a way that using a bicycle is more convenient than using a car, bus. or train. However, after the number of bicycle users increased, more parking spaces are needed there. (3 To make a bicycle-friendly city, just making more bicycle lanes isn't enough. We must think about the future of our cities. Denmark has made a lot of great plans and has more exciting plans for the future. For example, it's going to build a "bicycle" "superhighway" between cities and other areas by around 2045. I definitely want to ride a bicycle on it some day! 〔注〕 be cared おびえて こわがって bicycle lane 自転車専用の車線. レーン cyclist ...... 自転車乗りの人、サイクリスト pass…………〜を追いこす。 通り過ぎる narrow ・・・・・・幅が狭い Copenhagen コペンハーゲン (Denmark 「デンマーク」の首都) magazine 雑誌 on foot... 徒歩で bicycle-friendly... 自転車にやさしい traffic light...信号 (traffic は 「交通 (量)｣)

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この英文の文法を教えて欲しいです。 (関係代名詞、不定詞など) 英語が苦手なのでどのような使い方をするのかなど教えてもらえるとありがたいです。

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(教科書 pp.52-59) Unit 4 Is your city sustainable enough? star n = 1. The Can- Do! Speak 都市問題について聞いた情報をもとに説明することができる。 都市問題を解決する方法について議論することができる。 Write 自分の住む地域の自治体に要望書を書くことができる。 Small Talk 4) How is the building in this picture different from an ordinary house? Do you think your town is comfortable for you and people of all ages? banihobnu Listen ai "but won" ansom bidro coll Riko and her cousin Yuri are talking online (Yuri is now a college student studying in Vauban, Germany). Listen to the conversation and fill in the blanks. Riko col mont hio daw blow ch Vauban Buildings: ⚫designed to consume less [ Cars: .2[ ]% of the residents: don't have a car the public transportation service ⚫not allowed to [ ] in the residential areas children: play safely in the [ ] Yuri is related Listen Again 1) Listen again, and fill in each blank below. 2) After that, choose one similar expression from (a) to (c). Communication Strategy ① 久しぶりに会った相手にかける言葉は? Riko: Hi, Yuri. How's your college life in Germany? (c) What's up? pane (a) It's a pleasure to meet you. (b) Long time no see. Communication Strategy ② 話題にさらに論点を加えるには? Yuri: Trams run every seven minutes along the main road, and residents have easy access to the stops. so that children can play safely in the streets. (a) Finally cars are not allowed to park in the residential areas (c) On top of that (b) In other words Sp You (@ in the wor haring ex 4210. and th Mbuisn Expla de6 eftor

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5 10 15 20 25 30 The Olympics were held in Tokyo in 1964. A few years ago before the Olympics, Japan had a big problem. It was a problem of communication. Many foreign people didn't visit Japan, and we had only, Japanese signs. For example, words like "i" or "" were on toilet doors. These signs were not understood by many foreign people. Japanese people at that time needed to make signs in many different languages for foreign people. But when they put many words on one sign, the "letters became too small. They could not easily read the sign. They had to think of ) signs for foreign people. Mr. Masaru Katsumi, a leader of a design team for the Olympics, had a great idea. everyone /to/ was easy / thought / understand he forit pictures. He wanted to make picture signs. These signs are called *pictograms and are used in many places now. Picture 1 Picture 2 Picture 3 Look at these pictures. Picture 1 shows a shower. Picture 2, shows a toilet. Picture 3 shows a restaurant. Foreign people can easily understand what each picture shows. They had to make pictograms which everyone could understand without any trouble. When they started to make them, one of the pictograms was a shower. Many Japanese people didn't know about showers at that time and didn't have one at home. One of the designers didn't even know the word "shower." One officer had to explain how to use it with a photo of a shower. The designer made the pictograms through the officer's words. With a lot of trouble and hard work, twelve designers needed three months and made pictograms for the Olympics. When the last pictogram was finished, Mr. Katsumi said to all the designers, "You did a great job, but this work is not for us. We did it for all Japanese people. Please write your names on this paper." The paper said that they'd like to give up the *copyright to the pictograms. They wrote their names on the paper. They gave up the copyright. One of the designers said, "Mr. Katsumi hopes that many people in many places will use the pictograms in the future. Money from the copyright is not important to Mr. Katsumi. He is proud that he is one of the members who worked for the Tokyo Olympics." In 2020, we are going to have the Olympics in Tokyo. Our life will change a lot. What kinds of new signs or pictograms will we see around us? (E) letter pictogram ピクトグラム(絵文字) designer www. デザイナー officer 役人 copyright 著作権

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14 第6問 次の文章を読み、下の問いに答えよ。 標準解答時間 9分 depressed. It was not the exam that made her feel that Christine came out of her last examination, feeling way, but the fact that it was the last one; it meant the end of the school year. She dropped in at the coffee 5 as usual, then went home early because there didn't 10 seem to be anything else to do. shop "Is that you, dear?" her mother called from the living room. She must have heard the front door close. Christine went in and sat on the sofa. "How was your exam, dear?" her mother asked. "Fine," said Christine flatly. It had been fine; she had passed. She was not a brilliant student, she knew, but she was hard-working. Her professors always wrote things like "A serious attempt" and "Well thought out but 15 perhaps lacking in energy" on her term papers; they gave her Bs, the occasional B*. She was taking Political Science and Economics, and hoped to get a job with the government after she graduated; with her father's connections she had a good chance. 20 "That's nice." Christine felt, bitterly, that her mother had only a vague idea of what an exam was. She was arranging roses in a vase; she had rubber gloves on to protect her hands as she always did when engaged in what she 25 called 'housework.' As far as Christine could tell, her housework consisted of arranging flowers in vases. Sometimes she cooked elegantly, but she thought of it as a hobby. It was hard, anyway, to argue with her mother. She was so easily upset that it was better to avoid 30 arguing with her.

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2 次の英文を読み, 空所に入れるのに最も適切なものを,それぞれ下の①~④のうちから一つずつ選びなさい。 (6) When growing tomatoes, we know we should pick them when they're bright red. With carrots, however, ( 6 ) because they grow underground. ①we should pick them when they turn orange (2) it's hard to know when they're ready (3) we should grow them more carefully than tomatoes (4) it's easy to know when they're bright red (7) Although it is quick, easy and convenient to be able to look up information on the internet, it can sometimes be difficult ( 7 ) because there is so much information. to find what you are looking for (2) to improve the convenience of the internet (3) to get more than what you need that people often experie (4) to have good computer literacy (8) Would you be happier if you were richer? Many people believe that they would be. But research conducted over many years suggests that ( 8 ). People in the United States, for example, are, on average, richer than New Zealanders, but they are not happier. poorer people tend to worry about their financial problems 2 pleasure in life usually comes from great wealth (3) the best way to be happy is learning how to save money greater wealth doesn't generally imply greater happiness (9) Many European rivers were once heavily polluted by manufacturing industries. As a result, wild animals dependent on clean water disappeared. However, as stricter environmental standards took effect, rivers such as the Thames of London have become much cleaner. Consequently, ( 9 ). water quality has continued to decline wild animals avoid drinking from the Thames (3) wild animals are making a comeback in many rivers (4) wild animals no longer depend on clean water

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5 次の英文を読んで, あとの問いに答えなさい。 <川越東改> Origami is the Japanese art of folding paper. To do origami, the artist starts with a square piece of paper. Some people like to use special origami paper that is two colors. The front of the paper is one color, and the back of the paper is another color. Other people like to use origami paper that has patterns on it. After ①(choose) your paper, you can find many instructions for folding the paper into different things. Many people enjoy (make) origami flowers, animals, or things ( 3 ). For all of these things, there are a few kinds of folds that you need to use. For example, sometimes you need to fold the paper in half. Sometimes, the paper must be folded from corner to corner. If you follow the directions carefully, you can create a beautiful paper flower or animal. However, origami is more than folding paper. First, origami is an important part of Japanese life. For example, nature is important in Japan. In Japan, people care about the seasons, weather, water, or other things in nature. Origami is also a part of nature. That is why the most popular origami shapes are things like animals. Birds, fish, flowers, and stars are all popular shapes. It is a quiet activity, and can calm the mind and body. People who do origami like the activity as much as the art. They like it because origami demands a lot of attention. When people think hard about creating something, they forget about their problems. This allows them ④ to calm down. ⑤ Origami is also good for teaching children. They also learn to work carefully. Also, origami has squares and triangles. These shapes are important in all kinds of learning. Origami helps children to learn about these shapes. Maybe you can try to do origami yourself. You only need some paper and a book of instructions. You can find instructions for many origami shapes on the Internet. instruction direction (1)①,②の( )内の語を適する形にかえなさい。 (2) 30( に適するものを, ア~エから1つ選びなさい。 (3) (4) 7 to paint with 1 to talk with 1 (2) making. to play with I to help with (イ) ④に適するものを,ア~エから1つ選びなさい。 Origami is also easy to learn. 1 Origami is also good for your imagination. Origami is also difficult to learn. I Origami is also good for your mind. ⑤にはA~Cの文が入ります。 自然な流れの文章になる配列を, ア~エから1つ選びなさい。 A Children must follow these steps exactly. B First, origami has many steps. C This way, children can learn to follow instructions. ア A-B-C イ A-C-B B-A-C I B-C-A (5)本文の内容にあうものを, ア~エから1つ選びなさい。 If you follow some instructions for paper folds, you can enjoy many different origami shapes. Learning origami gives us a good chance to help animals on the earth. You may feel tired if you try hard to do origami carefully. I The most important thing for children's education is origami. (土)