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Write an essay on the given TOPIC. Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words TOPIC Do you think that gas-powered cars will be replaced by electric cars in the near future? 電時の排出 POINTS 走行エネルギーの asse). Environment Convenience #1124-Kat #veg Cost Industry 高速産 ・充電せった コストが高い 産業限られた 短いきが しが ・使用者が買いかえようとは 思わない 2:33. 1 充電スペースの 2015 3. cars will be replaced by electric cars I do not think that gas-powered opinion. in the near future, I have two reasons to support this One reason is that it may be not convenient for people to drive electric cars in these days society. For example, electric cars take more time to charge than gas-powered cars. Moreover, electric cars can run few distance. Onother reason is that electric cars cost a lot of money in the many situation. For example, people who use electric, cars usually sex charging places at the each houses, but they have to pay so much cash to do it, Also, they need to prepare too much money every month to charge electric Propte cash, For these reasons above, I believe that gas-powered cars will be replaced by electric cars in the near future. total: 179 words

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問題 3 以下の英文を読んで、次の問いに答えなさい。 (*のついた語には語注が ある。) If you are able to step outside and hear many types of birds, you might also have a greater feeling of well-being. Two studies show that hearing diverse birdsongs may help increase our happiness. (A) One study was done by researchers at California Polytechnic State University. A research team studied the effects of birdsong ( 1 ) people walking through a park in the U.S. state of Colorado. A biology graduate student, Danielle Ferraro, led the study. "There could be an evolutionary reason why we like birdsong so much. And the idea is that when we hear birdsong it could signal safety to us," Ferraro says. There could be many other reasons, too. Ferraro states that in some areas around the world birdsong can also signal the arrival of spring and nice weather. Bird diversity, she adds, can also mean a healthy environment. She explained her study to Voice of America (VOA). Ferraro and her team played recorded songs from a diverse group of birds native to the area. They did this on hiking trails in a park in Boulder, Colorado. (2) several weeks, the researchers played recorded birdsong at certain times of the day and other times they did not. Then they talked with hikers after they ( 3 ). Hikers who heard the recorded diverse birdsongs reported a greater sense of well-being than the people who heard simply the natural birds. The researchers suggest that both the bird sounds and biodiversity* can increase feelings of well-being. Ferraro explained that she used native birdsong for the study. This way it would sound as natural as possible. They also did the study during the summer. She explains why this is important. "So the study ( 4 ) in the summer and that's kind of important because the spring is most birds' breeding* season. And if we play the birdsong during breeding season, that might have disturbed them. (B) We didn't want to disturb the birds too much." The study was published in an academic journal called the Royal Society B in December 2020. - 10- ◇M2 (310-15)

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Date people I agree with more should become vegetarians in the future. I have two reasons. Firstly, it is bad for the environment to have live stocks. Having live-stacks have many bad prints For instance, farmer have to use large water. By using whater too much, gloval. warming will be increasing. Also, farmer have to make food for animals, so they will use large gas or electric.. Secondly, metabora they eat a • because th lot of wents or fishs. Meat and fish contain ail, so they attect our health badly. Vegitable have less oil, and enough nutrients. Many people will protect their health, and Can live longer. Therefore, it is good for us to become vegetarians. I think we should eat only vegetable.

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I disagree that Big companies have a positive effect on society. I have two reasons. Firstly, it is bad for the environment to produdet @ [arge-scale products. Big company mode a lot of products so they use maturials such as water, electric, and gas@ Also, they discharge carbou dioxide. By doing so, global warming will be increasing. Secondly worker is difficult to grotect! Work-life balance. Big companies ask them for many job 1,0 Go they will home go at late night. Also some peode have to move their house for working. They will lose their free time, and fell,. tired. Therefore, big companies have a lot of bod points. I think people should work widdle or small companies than big companies will have a happy lifel. and google

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To get good score on the test? 8 次の英文は、小笠原諸島についての講演の資料を要約したものです。 次の英文を読んで、 以下の問題に答えなさい｡ (2点×5) The Ogasawara Islands became a World Heritage Site in 2011. Many people visit our islands every year. We, the people of the Ogasawara Islands, love our islands. We believe that they are very special. There are many unique animals and plants. We made some rules to protect them for future generations. They are "Don't take plants and rocks as souvenirs.", "Don't scare the animals.”, “Stay away from the sea turtle's nests.” All the visitors are welcome. You can go diving and swim in the beautiful ocean. You can visit the observatory on Mt. Mikazuki and watch the sunset. We can teach you about the island's ecosystem. Please think about the environment before you do. 男 We live in balance with nature. We hope that our visitors will understand this. Then turtles will be here with us and our children. 2 (注) island 島 World Heritage Site 世界遺産 protect 保護する generation 世代 visitor observatory 展望台 4000 souvenir みやげ scare 怖がらせる ecosystem 生態系 sea turtle ウミガメ 訪問客 environment 環境 balance つり合い nest 巣 (1) 小笠原諸島の人々が作った規則の一例を日本語で詳しく説明しなさい｡ (2) 下線部を this の内容を具体的にして日本語に訳しなさい。 (3) 次の日本語の文をそれぞれ正しければ〇を､間違っていればXを書きなさい。 ア. 小笠原諸島が世界遺産になってからまだ10年も経っていない。 イ. 小笠原諸島に訪問する人々は自然を守るために規則を作った。 ウ. 小笠原諸島の人々は自然とのつり合いの中で生きている

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5 Many philosophers have argued that nature has little or no [21] can give it. However, we have failed to place sufficient value on key biological resources. For example, though forests are richest in the tropics, these regions contain many of the poorest countries today. Often, the poverty of the local people is blamed for environmental destruction. However, the weakness of property rights in those countries is a more important, but overlooked, factor. Poor eople often do not care about forests, except as a means to gain immediate benefit. To address this, governments in such poor countries need to establish poor people's rights to the biological riches around them, letting them own and manage these natural areas. [22] surely recognize the benefits of maintaining their forests.