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英検準一級です Should people trust information on the internet? でライティングしました。 添削お願いいたします。

I don't agree that people should truse information on the Internet. This essay will explain the two main reasons for my opinion Th Terms of News and online shopping The first reason is that we cante lonow that the news 75 correct. Although we are able to obtain a variery of Information, the news may have a hias. A tending may suffer to us such as There fore, I found that A tending information the big earthquake in Kumamoto. don't have to rely to everything. we For example, when The second reason is the online shopping is likely to send we buy the dress through internet, goods which we down requine. we can't know whom this dress sell by. If it were not for buying clothing ac online store, it could not have such a opportunity to purchaseing different clothing. For these reasons, I don't believe people ought not to trust information. on the Internet.

官能基 下の写真の(2)についてです。 解説では『①〜④の構造より、極性が大きい官能基が存在しない①を色素1と考えて良い』とありました。 極性が小さいほど上に行くのは理解したのですが、 ①〜④のうち、どうやって極性が大きい官能基があるない、を見分けられたのかがわかりま... 続きを読む

問4 次の文を読み、 (1)~(2) に答えよ。 薄層クロマトグラフィーを用いて、 ほうれん草に含まれる色素を分 離する実験を行った。 ジエチルエーテルでほうれん草から色素の混合 物を溶液として取り出した後、その色素混合液を図のAのようにシリ カゲルをコートした薄層プレートのある位置につけた。 その後、 薄層 プレートの下端を展開溶媒に浸すことで、 色素混合物が溶媒とともに シリカゲル上を上に向けて移動するのに伴い、 図のBのように各色 素が分離された。 シリカゲルの表面はシラノール基 (Si-OH) が大量 に存在しており、色素成分はシラノール基と相互作用しながら分離さ れる。 色素は色素混合液をつけた位置から移動した距離 (移動度) が大きいため、シリカゲルとの相互作用が[a]、極性の[b] 成分であると考えられた。 色 素2.3.4は色素1よりも移動度が小さいため、色素と比べてシリカゲルとの相互作用が [c]極性の[ d] 成分であると推測された。 また、ほうれん草の色素には、クロロフィル以 外にβ-カロテン、ルテイン、ネオキサンチン、ビオラキサンチンなどのカロテノイド色素が含まれて いることがわかっている。 色素Ⅰは最も移動度が大きかったことから、[e ] と考えられた。 ① β-カロテン H₂C CH₂ CH₂ CH₁ (1) 文中の[ ] [d] にあてはまる語句の組み合わせとして、 もっとも適当なものを次 の①~④のうちから一つ選べ。 ① a:強く b: 大きい c:弱く d: 小さい a : 強く b: 小さい d: 大きい 3 a: < c: 弱く C:強く c: 強く b 大きい b:小さい d: 小さい ④a: 弱く d: 大きい (2) 文中の[ ]にあてはまるものとして､もっとも適当なものを次の①~④のうちから一つ 9 CH3 CH₂ H.C. CH₁ A HC CH3 B 色素 色素2 色素3 ◯色 4 H₂C CH₂ HO ③ ネオキサンチン HỌC CHA HO CH₂ HO CH₂ c0 CH₂ H&C CH₂ ④ ビオラキサンチン CH3 CO CH3 CH3 CH₂ CH 3 CH3 CH₂ CH3 CH₂ H.C. CHI CH3 HC CHẾ HC- CH 3 HỌ CHÍ OH CH₂ H.C 0 OH LOH H₂C CH₂ 2 AC 濃 考

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〔4〕 九州大-理系前期 Read the following newspaper article and follow the instructions below. (36) 16 2019年度 英語 in Engligi taul" According to the Kanagawa Prefectural Police Station, a 20-year-old female university student caused a traffic death. The student was riding on a power- She moved off from an assisted bicycle when the accident happened. intersection and started riding on the sidewalk. At that moment, a 77-year-old lady was walking on the sidewalk and moved toward the bicyclist. The student hit the lady. The collision caused the lady to fall and strike her head. She was transported to hospital, but died of her injuries two days later. At the time of the incident, the student was apparently holding a smartphone in her left hand and a drink in her right while steering the power- assisted bike. Moreover, she had an earphone in her left ear. Therefore, police arrested the student for breaking the new law and riding recklessly. Police are investigating whether the student noticed that the old lady was walking toward her. They suspect that she was not paying sufficient attention because she was operating her smartphone right up until the collision. Her court appearance date has not been decided yet. The Mainichi, December 16, 2017 Instructions: Write two well-developed paragraphs in English. In the first paragraph, summarize the main points of the newspaper article above in lo approximately 100 words. Use different vocabulary and sentence structure from the original passage as much as possible. In the second paragraph, write your opinion about what should be done to reduce accidents like this in approximately 50 words. hosidinlong unich lor, condadnoah

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〔4〕 九州大-理系前期 Read the following newspaper article and follow the instructions below. (36) 16 2019年度 英語 in Engligi taul" According to the Kanagawa Prefectural Police Station, a 20-year-old female university student caused a traffic death. The student was riding on a power- She moved off from an assisted bicycle when the accident happened. intersection and started riding on the sidewalk. At that moment, a 77-year-old lady was walking on the sidewalk and moved toward the bicyclist. The student hit the lady. The collision caused the lady to fall and strike her head. She was transported to hospital, but died of her injuries two days later. At the time of the incident, the student was apparently holding a smartphone in her left hand and a drink in her right while steering the power- assisted bike. Moreover, she had an earphone in her left ear. Therefore, police arrested the student for breaking the new law and riding recklessly. Police are investigating whether the student noticed that the old lady was walking toward her. They suspect that she was not paying sufficient attention because she was operating her smartphone right up until the collision. Her court appearance date has not been decided yet. The Mainichi, December 16, 2017 Instructions: Write two well-developed paragraphs in English. In the first paragraph, summarize the main points of the newspaper article above in lo approximately 100 words. Use different vocabulary and sentence structure from the original passage as much as possible. In the second paragraph, write your opinion about what should be done to reduce accidents like this in approximately 50 words. hosidinlong unich lor, condadnoah

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2と3の答えがare givingとwill experience になる理由を知りたいです。よろしくお願い致します。

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中2 理科 電流が作る磁界 の問題です。 画像の赤丸の部分2.5.6がなぜ以下のような答えになるのか分かりません。 どなたか解説して頂けると幸いです。 各問の答え⬇️ （2）変わる （5）北 （6）変わる です。

② 実数 6 電流がつくる磁界 白紙の上に鉄粉を均一にまいてから､ 導線に電流をa→bの向きにし、 鉄 の並び方の変化をする。 白紙 発泡ポリスチレンの板 抵抗器 (5Ω) 球のまわりに磁針を置 き、 導線に電流をa→bの 向きに流し、磁界の向きを 調べる。 目 電流をbaの向きに変 えて、磁界の向きを調べる。 □ (8) 導線に流れる電流の向きは, 右ねじを回す向き, 進む向き のどちらにたとえられるか。 口 (9) 図1で、電流の向きを逆に すると、磁界の向きはどうな るか。 コ) 図1の磁界の強さは, ① 電 流が大きいほどどうなるか。 また、②導線に近いほどどう るか｡ 磁針 (1)で、導線に電流を流すと、鉄粉による模様はできるか。 (22で、導線に電流を流すと、磁針のさす向きは変わるか。 口 (③3)図で,電流の向きを変えると、磁針のさす向きは②と比べて どうなるか。 □ (4)で,磁針を遠ざけていくと、磁針のさす向きは変わるか。 15 で,磁針のN極がさす向きはしだいに東西南北のどの向 きに近づくか。 (6) で,電流を大きくすると、磁針のさす向きは(5) と比べて変 わるか。 □(7) 図1で まっすぐな導線に 電流を流すと,どのような鉄 粉の模様ができるか。 図1 導線のまわりの磁界 電流の向き、 図2 コイルのまわりの磁界 コイルの軸 電流の向き HIIII 図 2 で, コイルの内側には, ルの軸に対してどのよう 界ができるか。 で, コイルの外側の磁界は何がつくる磁界と似ているか。 で, 電流の向きを逆にすると, 磁界の向きはどうなるか。 (1) (2) 磁針けていき線から 電流 す向きの変化を調べる (3) (4) (5) (7) (8) (12) (13) (11) (10) 1 A-267 2 針がさ の後、電流を大きくし、 がさす向きの変化を調べる。 孝 1 結果 1

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