英検準1級の英作文の添削をお願いします。見にくいところがあれば言ってください。 Points Health Male-female equality Salaries Work-life balance

Date No Topic Topic: Do componies need to improve the way they treat their wates? | think Companies need to impreve the way they treat their workers. - I have twe reasens to support my opinion in termns of health and Salaries. Fist. Companies shauld adeiisate their workers' health. 2 If workers have an illnes and canmot wack esily, a lot. of. (2 Companies wald be Coniesed to manage. Companies need to do 経営こど?) health check for workne health. It is good for (o Companies and I Workers to check halth. I think this is an adrontage each other. 12 Second, Cormpanies have to raise salaries, Some Workers de not lc be paid salaries for extra tasks, They will be very ticed and ? have an illes, It is not good for them fo work hard. 12 For these reasons, Companies have (mprove the wey they treat their workers.

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以下のTOPICについて,あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい POINTSは理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。ただし、 - れら以外の観点から理由を書いてもかまいません。 語数の目安は80語~100語です。 解答は、解答用紙のB面にあるライティング解答欄に書きなさい。なお 解答欄の外に書かれたものは採点されません。 ●解答がTOPICに示された問いの答えになっていない場合や,TOPICから ずれていると判断された場合は, 0点と採点されることがあります TOPICの内容をよく読んでから答えてください。 1Sm 4 moiaid bns 9a0om TOPIC People around the world live longer lives than they did in the past. Do you think people will live even longer lives in the future? POINTS ●Changing lifestyles ●Developing countries Technologyd thes BamoyW Yo viengvinU ort buro got. 8tonb

英検準1級の英作文の添削をお願いします。 Points Construction costs Effect local people Spending by visitors The environment

Date No. Topic: Is it a good idea tar local govegnments to build touist sires, Such as theme parks and museums? I think it is nota good idea for local (3 governments to build touriT sites, sach as theme parks and museums. I have two reasons 7 to support my opinion in fems of construction Costs and the envinanmant. fist, bilding taurist sites Cost alot. For erample, local garernents shodd buy vast soil To bild taurist sies. Maay loal (6 govemments do net have rmuch raeonty because they have a lot of a things to 'de for local peple, so it is diffi ault to bil tourist sites. (2 Secende it is not good for the environment. If tourist sits are bilt, the envionmert would be boken down such as 破増さんら deferestation. I think proterting the_ environment is more inportant ? than building tarist sites. For these reasons, local goverments should not build tovist sites. la a

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Dat: No. Topic. Ague discgre There, sthould be stricter censership of the Intenet ar I I agree with the idea that there should be stricter censorship of the Intemet.I have two reasons to support my opinion in Terws of 14 secwity and viclence. First, the Intenet secarity shauld be high quality. Many people Contuse the Internet Virus these days, o the Internet secmrity have to be enbanced to protect the computer from virus. It is important for people To use the Compiter mae Contoctabdly. Secand. the rurdber of ballying is incensing on the Intemet For esample, o person is bullied on twirer by Bullying pople do not be krowm their name Tn public. other people いじめト々 Jepanere government have to make a new law to purish these people, For these reasons, consorshipothe Internet should be strit.

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教科書 p.4~51 絶滅にひんした動物 (現在完了進行形· 原形不定詞) /100点 ■次の対話文を読んで, あとの問いに答えよう。 ゆ か 絶滅にひんした動物 読書中の由香に父親が話しかけています。 トピック 場面 Dad :Yuka, you've been reading that book ( ① ) this 読書メモ チーターの生態 * 頭数が急激に減少 →保護が必要。 狩りをするとき →時速I10 キロも の速さで走ることが できる。 morning. I didn't know you were interested in that topic. Yuka : I learned about protecting endangered animals in English class. I have become interested in this topic ( 2 ) then. I haven't finished reading it yet, but 3 this book is very easy to read and helpful. Dad :Does that book tell you about cheetahs? Yuka : Yes, it does. Cheetahs can run as の(2語) 110 kilometers per hour when they are hunting. They are great hunters, but now their population is decreasing rapidly, so they must [2語) Actually, 10 I'm going to give a presentation about cheetahs in English next month. Dad :There will be a TV show about cheetahs and other wild animals in Africa tonight. How about watching it? Yuka : Oh, Ididn't know that. Thank you for telling me about it, Dad. I'll watch it. 15 Dad :6I hope it will help you prepare a presentation. (147 語) jova (注) cheetah チーター .. kilometers per hour 時速…キロ hunter 狩りをする動物 10と2の( )内に適する共通の語を下の[ 〕から選び, 書きなさい。 10点 [for / since / from ] 現在まで継続している動作が「始まった時点」 を表す前置詞は? 2下線部3は何に関する本だと考えられますか。 本文中の英語3語で答えなさい。 20点 3由香の読書メモの内容にあうように, ④と⑤の[ 内にそれぞれ指定された語数で英語を書 きなさい。 各 15点 4 5) 4 下線部6の英文を日本語になおしなさい。 20点 て文る 5本文の内容にあうように, 次の問いに英語で答えなさい。 What is Yuka going to do tonight? 20点 - She's going to watch a TV show about in Africa.

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●以下のTOPICについて, あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。 POINTSは理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。ただし、、 れら以外の観点から理由を書いてもかまいません。 語数の目安は80語~100語です。 解答は, 解答用紙のB面にあるライティング解答欄に書きなさい。なお 解答欄の外に書かれたものは採点されません。 ●解答がTOPICに示された問いの答えになっていない場合や, TOPICから ずれていると判断された場合は, 0点と採点されることがあります。 TOPICの内容をよく読んでから答えてください。 4 TOPIC 13 Some people say(that young people should spend more time thinking about their future careers. Do you agree with this opinion? POINTS Education ●Income ns pigd Skills

英検準1級の英作文の添削をお願いします。見にくいところがあれば言ってください。

Date No. Topic: Agre or disage : Lite in Japan is becoming more strertal I dsagee with the idea that lüfe in Japan is becaming more strest.l. I have two rensons to support my opinion in terms of househald applianes and health Firt, hausehold appliances are becaming more usetul so Our lives will be convenient. for erample, there is an auto cleaner. We do not have to clean aurselves because auo cleaners can clean theicelves. Thanks to them, we can have free time a to rest. 2 Secnd hedty focd is increosing these doys, s0 the nunber of peple have an illnes decrease. If we have an illness, we will not die e medical Technelogy is better than pact. It is goad for us to live Commericanly. becans 3 For these resons, life in Japan is not becoming. more stresstal.

英検準1級の英作文の添削をお願いします。

Date No. Topic: Do you to fural areas after retirement? think that it is beneticial to move from urban cities I de not think it is beneficial to move from urban cities p nural areas affer retirement. I have two reasorns to support my opinion in terms of corvenience and isolation. Fist, urben Life is more Convenient than raral Life. a For example, we can buy things what we want immediately (0 because there are. many stores near our house, Also. there are. 17 a lot of trains lines, so wrban plople are enable to (テ go eaythae Second. urban ife is hot iselation, If we live rural areas, 1 we wnuld not be saved by other pegple when a catastoraphy Occers, I think Some buildings built at urban area are. satey (1 than rural area's brilding. For these reasons, I think moving fom urban cities to rural areas is pot beneficial. 126words Ch

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Date No. Topic: Agree or diogre. Pegle will depend more on self- driing.cars in the future. I disagree with the idea that pesple will depand more on self- driving cars in the future, I have two reasons to support 9 my opinion in terims of unespectod poblems and Cost. Fist. there may be some unexpected problems when we are driving 運転中(2) I think that self- diving cars are not pertect, a self-driing car. so few accidents, at leost, will happen. We can not say a り。 Safe. Aren Second, self- deiving cars Cost is higher than ordinary cars. self-driving cars are Self-dhiving cars need high quality technelogy. Materials are. differat trem ordinary cars' materials. Alse. it is very diffialt Le to make self- driving cars, 50 they costs highly, People cannit co buy them easily. For these reasons,Ithink people will not depend more on self deiviog le と Cars in the futare.

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次の英文を読んで,設問に答えよ。 (小樽商科大) I Nearly every traveler who enters a new culture experiences some unpleasantness that has come to be known as culture shock. Jet travel makes possible the abrupt loSs of a familiar environment. / Experts believe that it is this sudden change that causes culture shock. Some of the symptoms are fear, sleeplessness, unusual irritation over 5 minor concerns such as suspicion about host foreigners, indecisiveness, and homesick- ness. / Don't be surprised if you forget much of the English you have learned the moment you enter America: that is also a temporary effect of culture shock. (1) It is fortunate that the cure for culture shock is very simple.| You must become familiar with the new environment. You can reduce the impact of culture shock by accepting it thoughtfully ahead of time. (2) It is a phenomenon you must pass through 10 just like customs at an airport. If you arrive at an American high school and feel culture shock, try to find an American you feel comfortable with and have a chat about any topic you might have in common (for example, love of baseball). |A feeling of being part of the new human environment begins the cure. 【注) abrupt「突然の」 1A~Eの問いの答えとして最適なものをそれぞれ選べ。<4点×5) A. What is the main topic of the passage? 壁%。4? O how to deal with culture shock 2 going to an American high school ③ homesickness as culture shock の how to develop culture shock