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[4] Read the instructions and write a well-organized answer in English. (50 points) Virtual reality (VR)* refers to a high-quality simulation of reality created by a computer. Probably the most famous use for VR so far is gaming. But VR has also been used to improve society in various fields such as education, medicine, and engineering. Describe a single specific way that virtual reality can be used to improve society. Explain your idea in detail in about 100 English words. Notes: Virtual reality (VR)*: VR systems use special glasses that completely cover the user's eyes. These glasses show a very realistic picture of a world created by the computer. In addition, the systems can tell when the user moves their head, arms, and sometimes other body parts. So users can control the action by natural movement. Some systems even let users feel like they are touching things. Thus, VR systems can make users feel like they are really in another world. 〔答案〕 I suggest you to simulation with VR. For example, doctors can practice operation. I have the three reasons. First, VR's display is very real. So doctors can do as if real simulation. Second, every one can make simulation software. If you want add patients information to VR and study how to make software, you can make VR software to yourself. Third, medical professors can use VR simulation in lecture. If they do this, Students who want be surgeon in the future will reduce about operation's anxiety. In this way, VR have a lot of possibilities that useful of medical field. For these reasons, I suggest VR simulations.

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一般に,電子レンジでの調理は,他の調理法に比べると栄養素 16 の保持には好ましいとされるが,調理時間が長かったり、多量の 水を使って調理したりするとブロッコリーでは心疾患のリスクを減らす フラボノイド類が減少するという報告がある。 ただ、食材によって栄養保 持の結果はさまざまであり,統一見解はない。電子レンジ調理にプラスチ ック容器を使うと, 可塑剤のフタラートなどの化学物質が溶け出すが, こうした物質は微量であってもホルモンや代謝系を乱すほか、 生殖問題や ぜんそく, ADHD との関連性など,さまざまな悪影響を及ぼすことが指 摘されている。また, 高温になる電子レンジでの加熱で分子の結合が変わ り,新たな高エネルギーの分子が作り出される。 これがDNA と反応し て突然変異を引き起こすとされており, ジャガイモを電子レンジ加熱した ことで,発がん物質として働くアクリルアミドが生成した例が報告されて いる。(400字以内)発 当 解答編

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Grammar 150 1. Fill in the blanks. (1)私は,彼女が新しいタイプのエアコンを開発することに自信があった。 )a new type of air conditioner. I was confident of ( ) ( (2) 私は明日の今ごろ, 水族館でイルカを観察しているだろう。 I ( ) ( ) ( (3) 彼は若い頃,世界中を旅行したようだ。 120 760 )()( ) traveled around the world when he was young. ME He ( (4) その本を読んでいるとき,私は新しいアイデアを思いついた。 NOVE is biogabvel ) ( ) the book, I thought of a new idea. 2. Put the words in the correct order. MOTERI Sum 3 (1) その種類の蝶は飛んでいる間,羽を羽ばたかせない。 ( flying / its wings / doesn't / while / flap) ) dolphins in the aquarium this time tomorrow. or That kind of butterflies ing eirt to, (2) 私は昨日,弟のチームが野球の試合で勝ったことを誇りに思っている。 17 (winning / the baseball game / my brother's team) b Speaki yesterday. I'm proud of (3) 加藤先生は,大学でスペイン語を学んだようだ。 (Spanish / to / learned / have / seems) at college. Mr. Kato A: B: A: B (1

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Grammar 150 1. Fill in the blanks. (1)私は,彼女が新しいタイプのエアコンを開発することに自信があった。 )a new type of air conditioner. I was confident of ( ) ( (2) 私は明日の今ごろ, 水族館でイルカを観察しているだろう。 I ( ) ( ) ( (3) 彼は若い頃,世界中を旅行したようだ。 120 760 )()( ) traveled around the world when he was young. ME He ( (4) その本を読んでいるとき,私は新しいアイデアを思いついた。 NOVE is biogabvel ) ( ) the book, I thought of a new idea. 2. Put the words in the correct order. MOTERI Sum 3 (1) その種類の蝶は飛んでいる間,羽を羽ばたかせない。 ( flying / its wings / doesn't / while / flap) ) dolphins in the aquarium this time tomorrow. or That kind of butterflies ing eirt to, (2) 私は昨日,弟のチームが野球の試合で勝ったことを誇りに思っている。 17 (winning / the baseball game / my brother's team) b Speaki yesterday. I'm proud of (3) 加藤先生は,大学でスペイン語を学んだようだ。 (Spanish / to / learned / have / seems) at college. Mr. Kato A: B: A: B (1

大学受験の長文問題です。 解答がないので答えをお願いします🙏

問題 3 以下の英文を読んで、次の問いに答えなさい。 (*のついた語には語注が ある。) If you are able to step outside and hear many types of birds, you might also have a greater feeling of well-being. Two studies show that hearing diverse birdsongs may help increase our happiness. (A) One study was done by researchers at California Polytechnic State University. A research team studied the effects of birdsong ( 1 ) people walking through a park in the U.S. state of Colorado. A biology graduate student, Danielle Ferraro, led the study. "There could be an evolutionary reason why we like birdsong so much. And the idea is that when we hear birdsong it could signal safety to us," Ferraro says. There could be many other reasons, too. Ferraro states that in some areas around the world birdsong can also signal the arrival of spring and nice weather. Bird diversity, she adds, can also mean a healthy environment. She explained her study to Voice of America (VOA). Ferraro and her team played recorded songs from a diverse group of birds native to the area. They did this on hiking trails in a park in Boulder, Colorado. (2) several weeks, the researchers played recorded birdsong at certain times of the day and other times they did not. Then they talked with hikers after they ( 3 ). Hikers who heard the recorded diverse birdsongs reported a greater sense of well-being than the people who heard simply the natural birds. The researchers suggest that both the bird sounds and biodiversity* can increase feelings of well-being. Ferraro explained that she used native birdsong for the study. This way it would sound as natural as possible. They also did the study during the summer. She explains why this is important. "So the study ( 4 ) in the summer and that's kind of important because the spring is most birds' breeding* season. And if we play the birdsong during breeding season, that might have disturbed them. (B) We didn't want to disturb the birds too much." The study was published in an academic journal called the Royal Society B in December 2020. - 10- ◇M2 (310-15)

【至急】この文章の題名として最も適切なものは何かという問いです。私は、②だと思ったのですが、解答は①です。 よろしくお願い致します。

次の英文を読んで、 問 1 ~ 問8に答えなさい。 (配点50点) Inspired by fierce family battles for the last remaining piece of cake, a team of three high schoolers in southwestern Japan's Oita *Prefecture have invented a device that cuts round cake and pizza evenly, no matter how many pieces are sliced, and their creation won the top prize in the prefecture's invention contest in 2021. The three students are members of the industrial technology club at Oita Prefectural Kunisaki High School. Their clever invention to solve a daily life problem with a flexible *2mindset won the governor's award in the competition and is gathering attention. Twelve students in the electronics department of the school ( 1 ) to the industrial technology club, which has continued to submit works to the invention contest for about 40 years. Five of their creations won prizes in the high school division of the 2021 edition of the competition that was launched in 1941. The top prize-winning device, whose name translates to "Let's kindly divide it up," was invented by second-year students Wataru Onoda, 16, Rinto Kimura, 17, and third-year student Mitsumi Zaizen, 18. It was inspired by bbattles for birthday cake in Onoda’s family. He needed to defeat his rival two sisters in games of rock-paper-scissors to get the last remaining piece because the cake was always cut into eight pieces despite his family having seven members. Based on Onoda's idea to equally divide a cake into seven pieces, Kimura created a drawing and computer program to precisely make parts for the device. While Zaizen could not be involved in the actual production due to preparations for her university entrance she created a video for the presentation, using her experience of winning a prize in the competition for two years in a row. exams, (2 ) a two-month trial and error process, the device was completed. When a cake or pizza is placed on a turntable made with a laser beam machine, it can be cut evenly into

英語がとっても苦手で何が書いてあるか全く分かりません。 明日の朝提出しなければならないのでどなたか解いてください。お願いしますお願いします。

44 15 20 25 30 Lecturer 10 Class times Office hours* Classroom Textbook Reading Read the following passage and answer the questions. English Writing Core I 43 ► This course is for foreign students to learn basic academic writing skills. The course is divided into three classes according to the results of a placement test. ► The placement test is on Tuesday, September 2 at 9:00 in Bldg. 10 Room 1. ▸ After the test, students must visit the student office by September 9 to register. This is a half-year course, and students who have completed one level can enter the next level in the spring term without taking the placement test. Level 1 Level 2 Level 3 Prof. Smith Friday 9:00 a.m.-10:30 a.m. Friday 10:45 a.m.-12:00 p.m. Bldg. 12 Room 1 "Advanced Writing Strategies Level 1: This course introduces students to the basics of English academic writing. Students will begin by learning how to write a coherent paragraph and then apply this skill to writing a five-paragraph essay. They will learn how to create an effective thesis statement, topic sentences, introduction and conclusion, as well as how to organize supporting sentences logically. Students are required to submit one single-paragraph composition, one essay outline and two essays on pre-selected topics at the end of the course for assessment. | 43-45 英 Green Valley University, Autumn Semester Level 2: In this course students focus on gaining an in-depth understanding of the form and function of *argumentative writing and compare and contrast representative essays. Emphasis is placed on writing effective thesis statements and developing paragraphs. Students also learn effective citation, paraphrasing and summarizing skills. Reading academic articles to improve their writing style and vocabulary is a key feature of this course. Assessment is based on two short essays and a paraphrasing and summarizing task. 4 Bldg. 19 pre-selected 24 paraphrase Prof. Simpson Prof. Wheeler Wednesday 9:00 a.m.-10:30 a.m. Monday 10:30 a.m.-12:00 p.m. Wednesday 10:45 a.m-12:00 p.m. Monday 1:20 p.m.-2:50 p.m. Bldg. 10 Room 1 "Have Fun Writing" Bldg. 10 Room 5 "Essay Writing Skills" Level 3: For more experienced students, this course aims to develop advanced essay. writing skills. Emphasis is placed on taking a position in an argumentative essay, researching, evaluating sources and logically developing ideas throughout the essay Students will also learn how to effectively integrate a range of sources into their writing. Assessment is based on one long essay on an academic topic chosen by the student. (379 words) * office hours: 大学の研究室などで教員に面談が可能な時間帯 thesis statement: (エッセイの) 主題文 argumentative: Words & Phrases 32 9 Prof. 20 assessment 29 take a position 15 coherent 21 in-depth 31 integrate A into B 19 composition 24 citation 31 a range of~ Read the passage and put T (True) or F (False) in the brackets. (各2点) (1) Students cannot choose the level of the course they want to take. (2) Students who have finished the level 2 course can enter the level 3 course without taking a test. ( ) (3) All students, whichever level they are taking, must submit at least one essay on a topic chosen by the student for assessment. ) 2 Questions Answer the following questions. [1] Choose one word which has the same pronunciation as the underlined part of the following word from the passage. (4点) thesis a. beneath b. breathe c. worthy d. smooth [2] Complete the answer to the following question. "What is a placement test?" "It is a test to [3] Hiroshi wants to see the lecturer of the Level 2 course to ask some questions. Tell him what to do to see the lecturer. (6点) [4] Choose the suitable word for each blank. (1) Level 1 students focus on how to write logical and well paragraphs. a. devised b. organized c. known (2) Level 3 students have to make their opinion essay. a. correct b. decent c. clear [5] Choose the suitable phrase for the blank. "Level 2 students are required to fully understand a. what argumentative writing is b. how important it is to write an effective thesis statement c. what the basic structure of English academic writing is d. how argumentative writing is evaluated 3 Listening Quiz (1) a. Visit the lecturer at the specified time. b. Go to Room 1 in Building 10 by September 9. d. spoken d. different (5点) c. Buy the textbook during the specified period. d. Register at the student office by the closing day. (2) a. To learn how to organize supporting sentences logically. b. To improve their writing style and vocabulary. c. To create an effective thesis statement. d. To develop ideas logically throughout the essay. (各4点) Listen to the recording and choose the best option. in an argumentative (5点) 45 回 (各3点) 33

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114 放送された英文 John Wilson was an Englishman who worked to prevent blindnes VI S. in the developing world. When he was 12 years old he was blinded in both eyes during an experiment in science class.) After that, he went to a school for the blind where he learned Braille, which is the writing system for people who can't see. Then he studied law at Oxford University. After Wilson graduated, he went to Africa. There, he was shocked to find widespread blindness hot caused by accidents, as in his own case, TUTT but resulting from the lack of effective treatment for certain diseases. For decades, he led an organization to prevent such blindness in Africa

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1 右の年表を見て、次の問いに答えなさい。(5点×168(12)は完答) □(1) AとBについて、平将門や藤原純友はそれぞれ一族や家来を 従えて集団をつくっていた武士だった。 この集団を何というか。 □(2) について,後三年合戦が終わった後、 北方との交易などで栄 え、拠点である平泉に中尊寺金色堂を建立した武士の一族を何と いうか。 □ (3) D について,院政を行ったのはどのような存在か,次のア~エ から1つ選びなさい。 イ ア 天皇 せっしょう ウ かんぱく じょうこう 上皇 白 エ寺社 摂政･ せとないかい □ (4) E について,平清盛はある貿易を行うために瀬戸内海の航路や 兵庫の港の整備を行った。 その貿易にあてはまるものを,次のア 〜エから1つ選びなさい。 にちげん ア 日元貿易 にっとう ウ 日貿易 にっそう イ日宋貿易 にちみん I 日明貿易 できごと 年代 935 平将門の乱が起こる(~940) 939 藤原純友の乱が起こる (~941) 1051 前九年合戦が起こる(~1062) 1083 後三年合戦が起こる (~1087) 1086 院政が始まる 1156 ①が起こる しょうえん ア 国ごとに守護を置き, 公領や荘園ごとに地頭を置いた。 イ国や公領ごとに守護を置き, 荘園ごとに地頭を置いた。 ウ国や荘園ごとに守護を置き, 公領ごとに地頭を置いた。 エ公領や荘園ごとに守護を置き, 国ごとに地頭を置いた。 □ (6) G について、 右の資料1は御成敗式目の一部である。 資料 1 □にあてはまる朝廷で使われていた法律を ごせいばいしきもく ちょうてい 資料1の 表す語句を漢字2字で書きなさい。 1159 ②が起こる だいじょう 1167 平清盛が太政大臣になる 1185 源頼朝が守護・地頭を置く 1221 ③ が起こる ほうじょうやすとき 1232 北条泰時が御成敗式目を定める ごけ にん 生活が苦しくなった御家人を助けようとした。 資料2 の法令を何というか。 1274 元寇が起こる (1281) そくい 1318 後醍醐天皇が即位する 1392 南北朝が合一される きんき 1428 近畿地方で一揆が起こる 1467④が起こる (~1477) 1488 北陸地方で一揆が起こる 各地で戦国大名が活躍する かつやく ......... B (7) Hについて,次の ①・②に答えなさい。 げんこう ていく □① 元寇を起こしたのは, モンゴル帝国の第5代皇帝にあたる人物だった。 この人 物はだれか。 かまくら □ ② 元寇の後、鎌倉幕府は右の資料2の法令を出して 資料2 ・E みなもとのよりとも □(5) F について, 源頼朝が守護・地頭を置いた場所について正しく述べているものを,次のア~エから1つ選び なさい｡ ・K ・M 女性が養子をとることは, ■では許されてい ないが,頼朝公のとき以来現在に至るまで, 子ども のない女性が土地を養子にゆずりあたえる事例は, 武士の慣習として数え切れない。 御家人以外の武士や庶民が御家人から買った土地に ついては、売買後の年数に関わりなく、返さなければ ならない。 □(8) I について,次ページのア~エはすべて後醍醐天皇に関係することがらである。ア~エを年代順に並べかえな さい｡

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