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Topic Agree or dis agree : Companies should promote workars on performnnce bathen than seniori ty. I agree this opinion thart Companies should rather than seniority.. I have twO First, if companies promote workers on perfirmance, it will be motivation to wort, As a resiit, uortrers will not be feel stvess befobe. So, worrers coan work early , compantes get benefts. Second, wortrers can have a lot of experience, there fore , it wtll be useful to thein works、 Some people say that more and more ideas frding who have mony experience. For ecomple relation ship wtth China companies. It.is promote worrers on pe-fomance 4 reasons、 28 40. wOrk 49 59 7L 7. uarkers can be speatring Chine se, they may be have . for Company to crorld, If the company have relationship mith China, 93. 109 18 Important the y prosed in t can share tdeas to make tool, and building. の or these reasons , I promote workers 128 132 compahies shauld on penfermance than_setionty.

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The really Dastonishing thing is that ②most of us don't ③think ourselves as Ohaving a relationship to water. 〈中央大〉

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1 ()に入れるのに最も適切なものを選び、番号をマークしなさい。(各1点) 1 The term of the contract ( ) for three years. Orun 2 is running (3) runs の have run 2 You( D had better not ② had not better ③ not had better ④ had better not to ) swim in this river. It's dangerous. 3I recommended that she ( ) the professor. D had seen saw 3 should see ④ would see 4 He looks quite young. He ( 0 cannot 2 may ) be over 50. 3 ought to ④ must 5“Is Bill still using your car?" "Yes, I wonder when he ( ) it.” fcob dw ta の has returned ② returned ③ returns 0w(4) will return 6 It has been hard to concentrate on my studies lately because a road ( )in front of my house. O builds 2 has built ③ is being built ④ is building 7 The book I am reading is so exciting! I will lend it to you as soon as I ( )it. 0 will have finished 2 will finish ③ have finished am going to finish 8 The mountain is ( ) snow. 0 covering by ② covering with③ covered by ④ covered with 9 We've just missed the train. Dshould We( ) left our office a little earlier. 2should not 3should have のshould not have 10 Be sure to turn off the lights when you ) the room. の leave 2 will leave 3 left ④ leaving 11 Half of the students in this class ( ) glasses. ② are wearing ③ is wearing 0 put on 4) wear 12 He sold the TV set which he ( )only a few months before. ① has watched ② has used from ③ had bought ④ got in 1

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の Music therapy is the beneficial use of music and mysical elements bya professional music therapist to prgmote, maintain, and restore the mental beneficial for a wide variety of persons régardless of age, ability, or musical background. 2 What we call "music thefāpy" today datěsBack to ancient Greece. The writings of Aristotle and ato refer to the healing influence of music on health and behavior. But it was not uhtil the 20th century that music thérapy was first used professionally to ánswera need for forms of treatmenf' G-? that were different from conyentional practices. One of the first significant uses"6f music therapy was to help relieve thousands of World War I veterans of the traumá known as "combat a 3 Although theré are different approaches to the ise of music in therapy, impoftánt "to all approaches is the development of a close, relationship between the patient and the therapist. As a general rule. both the patiént and_the" therapist take an active _part in the sessions by playing, singing and"listening to music. I The therapist does not" teach the patient to sing or play an instrument, nor does he or she play music all the time to entertain the patient. Rather, patients are encouraged to use accessible percussion and various other instruments and their own voices to enjoy the world of sotind and to create a musical language of their own. patients musicaliy, the therapist is able to give them a meaningful musical experienēe, 1a Whatever form the therapy takes, the therapist aims to bring about positive changes in a patient's behavior and emotional health. 有在な 『nd physical health of patients. It is 回復 なく アリストテレス いやし を。 Poで: 歴来の 用途 す。 fatigue." 積極的に By responding to the 対応する 目指す

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