英検２級のライティングです。 添削をお願いしたいです😿

・ライティング・ These days, people are thinking more about manners in public. places. Do you think that people using a camera in public places. should have better manners should have I agree with the opinions that people using a camera better manners in public places. to support my opinion. I have two reasons Firstly, it is important for everyone to take care of people around them. For example people want to take a it is so dangerous to enter the line when picture of the train. Secondly, privacy, is the critical factors. If personal information is exposed to the online, it will be danger and scary. reasons For the I believe that better manners mentioned above.. people using a camera should have public places. in pu

英検準2級writingです。 添削お願いします

2/12 Qwhich do you think it better for people borrowing books from libraries or buying books at stores? t I think it better for people borrowing books from libraies. I have two reasons. ix First, You read many books. You don't need use Htoo moneys. 25 Second, I feel relax in the libraries. So I enjoy going there. 38 For there reasons, I believe it better for people borrowing books from libraries.

英検準2級writingです。 添削お願い致します。

21.3 Q Do you think there should be more sports programs on TV? I think there should be more sports programs on TV. I have two reasons. First, you enjoy watching sports programs. Everyone makes it smile.. 10 30 Second, you can know sports rule. "Therefore, when you play sports, you are fun. For there reasons, I belive there should be more sports programs on TV. 51 38

高1英語grammar話法についての説明なのですが、 水色マーカーの文において、なぜknowは現在形なのにwasは過去形になっているのでしょうか。 時制の一致が行われていない気がしています。 解説をお願いします。 （どんな時に合わせないのかが分からないです。）

S 1 時制の一致 1. I know (that) Tom is tired. 2. I knew (that) Tom was tired. 3. I know (that) Tom was tired. 4. I knew (that) Tom had been tired. 11 時制の一致の原則: 主節が表す時制が基準となって, 従属節の動詞の形が決まる。 主節の動 過去形であれば,それに合わせて従属節の動詞も過去形 (2) や過去完了形 (4) になる. 時制の一致と助動詞 BASER 注意 la) 過去形になるもの: will would, shall→should, can→could, may might I am afraid that I may hurt her feelings. →I was afraid that I might hurt her feelings. b)変わらないもの:should, must, need, had better, ought to, used to 2 時制の一致の例外: 次のような場合,原則として 「時制の一致」 は適用されない. 5. We learned that the earth goes around the sun. 6. Jim said that he jogs every morning. 7. He didn't know that World War ⅡI broke out in 1939. a) 真理・ことわざ (5) : 時に関わらず不変の事がらなので、 現在形のまま b) 現在も変わらない事実習慣習性(→6): 現在形のまま C) 歴史上の事実 (7) : 過去に起こったということが明らかなので、 過去形のまま d) 仮定法: 非現実のことを述べるので,主節の時制の変化による影響を受けない. He says that he would become a poet if he were born again. + He said that he would become a poet if he were born again. 11 斜体の 1) Jim 2) Yuji 3) She 4) I we 5) I he 6) I se 7) My 8) I t 2 次の 1) M 2) A 3) M 4) 5) 6) 3 1

合っているか確認お願いします🙇‍♀️

[4][5] のそれぞれについて、 ave の部分の3語を正しい英語になるように並べ替えなさい。 並べ替えた結果を数字 で(123とか321とか) で解答欄に書きなさい。 [4] Next, sleep deprivation (1. affects 2. also 3. your) mental health. Many of you must have experienced fatigue, irritability, and a (1. focus 2. lack 3. of) after a poor night's sleep. It goes without saying that these consequences 1. affect 2. negatively 3. your) social life (1. academic 2. and 3. performance). Also, it increases your risk of getting (1. accidents 2. in 3. involved) due to drowsiness or lack of attention. To make the situation worse, lack of sleep is linked to an increased risk of mental illnesses, such as depression and anxiety. 213 b 231 213 d 213 321 [5] Now you can understand (1. I 2. recommend 3. why) having a good night's sleep on a regular basis. It reduces (1. of 2. risk 3. the) having the physical and mental problems 1. explained 2. I 3. that) previously. But not only that, it contributes to better academic performance. With good sleep, your brain 1. can 2. information 3. process) more efficiently and retain the information longer. In other words, you can learn and memorize better. So, everyone, let's (1. and 2. sleep 3. well) have an excellent university life! 312 b 321 32 d 132 231 a a C C e e

ここってなんで lives じゃないんでしょうか？？

189 桜のさかりはせいぜい3,4日ぐらいだろう。 花の命は確か に短く, はかないが,しかしそうだからこそ、ひとしお愛惜 の念がわく。 Cherry blossoms are in full bloom for only three or four days. Indeed, their life is quite short, but I love them all the better for it.

この英文の日本語訳で、combineをどのように訳していいかわかりません。また、自分が書いた日本語訳は合っていますか？ わかる方お願いします🙇‍♀️

高い頂 ⑩ Even though your steps may seem small, they will surely combine to become a great leap to make your future better. ◆even though は, ここでは「たとえ・・・であっても」という意味。 to become は、 ｢結果」 を表す to- 不定詞と考え、 「(その結果) ~になる」 とすると自然な解釈になる。 訳:たとえあなたの歩みが小さく見えようとも、それらは確かにあなたの未来をより 良くするような大きな飛躍となり結び付くだろう。

添削お願いします！ 英検準2級です🙇‍♀️🙏

ライティング ●あなたは、外国人の知り合いから以下の QUESTION をされました。 • QUESTION について, あなたの意見とその理由を2つ英文で書きなさい。 語数の目安は50語~60語です。 ●解答は, 解答用紙のB面にあるライティング解答欄に書きなさい。 なお、 解答 5 欄の外に書かれたものは採点されません。 ●解答が QUESTION に対応していないと判断された場合は, 0点と採点される ことがあります。 QUESTION をよく読んでから答えてください。 QUESTION Which do you think is better for people, borrowing books from libraries or buying books at stores?

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10 15 2 次の英文は,中学生の久美子 (Kumiko) と母の対話です。 これを読んで,あとの各問いに答えなさい。 Mother: Yesterday morning, when I met some students, they said in *loud voices, “Good morning.” I felt very ( 1 ). Kumiko: I think they are students from my school. We always *greet each other when we meet. So I always greet everyone every day. 5 Mother: You are nice. People feel very good when they *exchange *greetings with each other. Kumiko: I agree. (2) Mother: That's right. I'll tell you another thing. Greetings can be the first *step in communication. If you start talking to people with a greeting first, you can talk with them more. Kumiko: Well .... I have one thing to tell you. Last Monday, we got a new student from Tokyo. Her name is Mika. She looked *nervous because that day was her ( ③ ) day in our class. (4) Mother: Kumiko: No. I wanted to talk with her, but I could not say anything. Then my friend Yuri said to her, “Hello. I'm Yuriko. Everyone calls me Yuri. Nice to meet you.” Soon Mika smiled and started talking to us. We really enjoyed talking with her. Greetings are very useful for opening people's *minds. I learned that from Yuri. I'll never forget this important experience. 6 〔注〕 loud (声音が大きい greet あいさつする exchange やり取りする step 一歩 nervous 緊張して mind 心 (1) ( ① ), ( ③ )に適する語の組み合わせをア~エから選び,記号で答えなさい。 ア ① surprised (3) easy 1 glad ③ important ウ 1 sad ③ exciting I ① happy ③ first 〔土〕 (2) 対話が成り立つように, ⑥ に適する文をア~エから1つずつ選び, 記号で答えなさい。 ア So it was difficult for us to greet her. イ After that, we told her many things about our school. ウ A nice greeting can make them happy. エ You should work hard to have a better school life. (3) 対話が成り立つように, ④に適する疑問文を書きなさい。 (4) 下線部⑤とほぼ同じ内容を表すように, に適する語を書きなさい。 I am called Yuri by everyone. (5) 下線部⑦ が指す具体的な内容を日本語で答えなさい。 greeting あいさつ ②〔ウ] ⑥[イ] 日の ARNOX

英検準2級ライティングの採点をしていただきたいです。訂正お願い致します。

確認 ライティング I think is better living in the city than in the countryside. First of all, It we are living in the countryside, We Can't -shopping enough. Shopping make us fun. Second, there are • few jobs in the countryside. When we chooce a job, we can't choose enough it. For these reasons, I think is better living in the city than in the countryside.