【英検準1級英作文】 英検準1級の英作文を添削して頂きたいです。自分でも見直したのですが、黄色のマーカーを引いた部分が表現として合っているか分かりません。また、他にも間違えがあれば指摘して下さると嬉しいです。よろしくお願いします。

Write an essay on the given TOPIC. ise TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words TOPIC Do you think print newspapers and magazines will disappear in the future? POINTS-即時性 r 好み IConsumer preferences ●Speed of news 費用対友効果 ICost effectiveness Health issues

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単元1 動詞の過去形 (1) 私は今日, 宿題をしなければなりません。 do my homework today. 1 正答数 間/8間中 1 次の文の()内から適するものを選び, 記号で答えなさい。 (1) He (アlive イ lives ウlived ) in Kyoto last year. Ehave I to 1 (2) この公園で野球をしてはいけません。 must (3 TO not write should wash doesut have ウ ウ play baseball in this park. (3) 私の祖母は英語で手紙を書くことができます。 You (2)(ア Is ィ Was ウ Did) your sister tired last Sunday? イ (3) Ken (アwasn't イ doesn't ウ didn't) cook yesterday. My grandmother letters in English. (4) A: (ア Did イ Were ウ Are ) you happy two days ago? イ イ (4) あなたはタ食前に手を洗うべきです。 B: Yes, I (ア was イ were ウdid ). I had a good time. your hands before dinner. (5) 健は彼女といっしょに行く必要はありません。 You 2次の文を[ 】内の指示にしたがって書きかえるとき、 に適する語を書きなさい。 to go with her. Ken (1) Iam at the station at five. [文末に yesterday を加えて) 2 2次の対話が成り立つように、 に適する語を書きなさい。 2 I at the station at five yesterday. Was Do you make breakfast? (2) My father gets up at six.(文末に two days ago を加えて) B: OK. 90t werent subject studred |Shall I My father up at six two days ago. (2) A: bring some books? (3) They were famous ten years ago. 【否定文に) ( Can I B: No, thank you. They famous ten years ago. (3) A: use your pen? (4) Jim studied science with Kumi. [下線部をたずねる文に] B: Sure. What Jim with Kumi? 単元4 There is ~. の文, 文型, 接続詞 正答数 問/10問中 単元2 進行形、 未来の文 正答数 問/8問中 1 次の文の()内から適するものを選び, 記号で答えなさい。 1 次の文の( )内から適するものを選び,記号で答えなさい。 1 (1) My mother made (アme イ my ウ mine) a cake. ) John was ( ア sleep イ sleeps ウ sleeping) then. * Im(アwil イ going ウdoing) to help him next week. We(アdidn't イ aren't ウ won't) work tomorrow. ウ ウ イ イ ア イ ア (2) There (ア is イ are ウ do) a school near here. (3 ウ (3) Iknow(ア and イ when ウ that ) he can swim. (4) You(アmake イ look ウ see) happy today. ウ will be ) tired. イ (アIs イWill ウ Does ) she going to swim next Sunday? (5) Ill help you if you ( ア do イ are (6) Iwas watching TV (ア when イ that ウif) Tom visited me. の文を[ 内の指示にしたがって書きかえるとき, に適する語を書きなさい。 2 次の各組の文がほほ同じ内容を表すように、 に適する語を書きなさい。 2 It is sunny today. [下線部を tomorrow にかえて) IIl show them the pictures. 2 will is It sunny tomorrow. 1 to them Ill show the pictures Makoto uses the computer. [「~しています」という文に) the computer. using is didrt play do 「You were very busy, so I made dinner. because There are Makoto you were very busy. 'My town had three parks ten years ago. I made dinner played baseball. [「~していませんでした」という文に) doing baseball. three parks in my town ten years ago. umi and Yuki are going to make sushi next Friday. We became sad when we saw the movie. 一線部をたずねる文に) The movie sad. Kumi and Yuki going to next Friday? nat

この線を引いてるところの②の問題で、2枚目の写真のエが正解なんですけど、なんでウではだめなんですか？！ ※文章の流れ分からなくても大丈夫だと思います！！写真の全文読まなくていいです🙌🏻

water purification téChHIU teeth, or washing the dishes. We also use water when we take a bath or の Our toilet. We use water in many ways. I think it's as necessary as air. :I think so, too. be : People use water not only in daily life but also in agriculture and industry. In Japan, 66 percent of all water resources are used for agriculture, 19 percent for dailv life, and 15 percent for industry. :I'm surprised. I thought industry needed more water than the other two. Why is a lot of water used in agriculture? : Well, I think animals need much water. be : Yes, they need water, but most of the water in Japan. is for growing rice We see a lot of water in rice fields. be: That's right. Well, have you ever heard of virtual water trade? : No, I haven't. What is it? be: If we import agricultural and livestock products, we also import water used to produce those products. : Please give me an example. be : OK. Let's talk about beef, for example.(イ)私たちはオーストラリアで生産された午内と 食べます。 comes to Japan, water also comes. This is virtual water trade. Look at this tavio When farmers in Australia produce it, they use water. When the beef

至急！英検2級ライティング問題です。添削お願いします🙏写真が見づらかったらすみません!

6 以外の観点から理由を書いてもかまいません。 語数の目安は80語~100語です。 ていると判断された場合は, 0点と採点されることかあります。 TOPICの をよく読んでから答えてください。 TOPIC These days, many automobile companies are developing seli. driving cas. Do you think people will stop driving cars by themselves in the future? 人間が運転しないこと の利点·欠点を比較し、 POINTS 支持文を組み立てやす

問3について ④みたいな選択肢のとき、ついついwhenを 「～とき」と訳してしまいます。 模範解答は「いつ、他者のそばに立つべきか」と書いてあったのですが、なぜこのときはwhenを「いつ、～」と訳してるんですか？どういうときに「いつ」と訳せばいいんでしょうか？ あと、「～... 続きを読む

第6問(配点 24) A findings to your classmates. social positions. Personal Space and Culture Hall also told an interesting story illustrating cultural influenee, He was Sitting alone on a chair in the lobby of a hotel when an unfamiliar Arabian man came within arm's length) The man looked as if he was waiting for someone and stood in front of than an Asian person. strangers. him. Due to his personal space being violated, he felt very uncomfortable and tried to show his discomfort, but the Arab did not seem to notice at all) Hall had no idea why the man was standing so close, thinking that even in a public place like a hotel lobby, someone's personal space should be respected by others. Afterward, when he 0 taik with your friends even when thev are closer than this distance. However, you met his Arab friend, Hall asked why the man had acted so rudely. His friend said, “That's just an American idea. Arabs believe that personal space does not exist for anyone in a public place like a hotel lobby." Furthermore, a distance of less than 1.5 feet (46cm) from you is called *“intimate In a globalized society, knowledge of cultural influence on interpersonal distance aistance." Since physical contact with others is likely to occur within this distance, is necessary in daily life/ People from different cultural backgrounds have a personal only those who have a very close relationship with you are allowed to come nearer space of a different size, and it is very likely that you will mistakenly violate their than that. By contrast, when you step into a stranger's space formed by intimate personal space. This may sometimes cause(serious trouble, Therefore, understanding distance, they may feel that you are trying to frighten them or physically attack them. the sense of interpersonal distances in other cultures will help avoid conflict with Hall classifies “personal distance” and “intimate distance” as someone's personal others. space. The space outside of your personal space can also be divided into two types, depending on the distance./ A distance of between 4 feet (1.2m) and 12 feet (3.7m) from you is called “social distance," and a distance of more than 12 feet away from you is called"distance." in non-situations, in business or parties, place at a social . On the other hand, a public distance is a public speech. You also to keep this distance when meeting people in important The point here is that , , the same for all , but are by your or, , by the culture you belong to. , that people in South , in , space than people in Asia, a South will allow a to get closer 3- 31 3- 30

I finished using the bathroom. この文って5文型のどれに当てはまりますか…？ また、文型の簡単な見分け方があれば是非教えていただきたいです…！🙇 (ちなみに、文型を覚えたは良いものの、何に使えばいいか分からないのですが…何か活かせることありますか？)

2枚目下から2段落目のhis first oratorio in Englishだけを見て、 彼にとって初の英語のオラトリオなのか 彼の初めてのオラトリオが英語でかかれたのか、 どちらか特定することは可能ですか？？

The two greatest composers of the Baroque era would be George Your group is preparing a poster presentation entitled “The Greatest Baroque Frideric Handel and Johann Sebastian Bach. Handel was born in Halle, | Brandenburg-Prussia (nowGermany), in 1685. Unlike Bach, who was born 54 第5問 (配点 20) is Composer," using information from the magazine article below. rade and four fingers on ト m to be able to perform into a great musical family, Handel's father was a surgeon. rwhich he wrote severa/ apse again wathina yea. Handel composed his S Handel showed an exceptional talent in playing instruments from very early age. He learned harpsichord, violin, and organ from the organist at the Halle parish church, Friedrich Wilhelm Zachow. Zachow recognized a Handel's extraordinary talent and systematically introduced him to a diakand to give charity slist pertormed in D , but enjoyed great variety of styles of music. He also taught Handel composition. It is said L.he was invited byr th. that Handel started to compose at the age of nine. In 1702, Handel became the organist at the Calvinist Cathedral in Halle. The wage was good, but the contract was just for one year. The next sperformed and loved ba In1752, Handel co. Sal. he continued to p year, he moved to Hamburg. He was hired by the orchestra of the Hamburg Oper am Gànsemarkt as a violinist and harpsichordist. In 1705, his first opera Almira was produced. In Hamburg, he made three more operas. He was recognized as a brilliant opera composer. tan three thousand pe Handel was invited to Italy in 1706 by Gian Gastone de' Medici, who had a keen interest in opera. Rodrigo, Handel's first all-Italian opera, was produced in Florence in 1707. In 1709, he produced another opera, Agrippina in Venice. It turned out to be a huge success and ran for 27 nights successively. In Italy, he also composed oratorios like La Resurrezione and II Trionfo del Tempo e del Disinganno. The oratorio 1S a narrative musical work for singers and an orchestra., based on a story from the Bible. Handel moved to England in 1712 and decided to live there permanently (He changed his nationality in 1727.) In 1713, he composed Utrecht Te Deum and Jubilate for Queen Anne, and was granted a yearly income O1 rer ir Ag Cos reciam al the Rigral Acade scanding qpers hke Cioh demy cadsed to functh

下線部を日本語訳した時にこの文の動詞ってどれになりますか？またこの文のunderの意味を教えてほしいです。

centuries. But, (1) by the 5th century, it seems that the Chinese already had the concept of negative numbers and perhaps also had the concept Various other of "zero", Around the 13th century, Chinese mathematicians were solving equations using methods that Europeans would not discover until 500 years later! 5 (2 Unfortunately, near the end of the 14th century, the leaders of China began to be critical of math and science. Because of this change in attitude, people turned away from the study of math to study 10 plants and medicine instead. It wasn't until the 19th century that the Chinese would become interested in math again, but this time under the influence of European mathematical knowledge. (120 words) 3 b○Lpe eGurcucs p2 cOLLCCE SCCOLm go ppe bazzyBc' qug bng x 9dh 9101od aai16msdisa baibu 1sd yainuoa yino sdt ai snido oituloyan lsiutaubni 2nidO 9 OW] 19VO 16bnslso s

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Also, Since we do not have our own stadium, we oniy use pubiic piayi1g fields. There is, however, the cost of using our minibus, which we need for taking players to games. The club also buys shirts and equipment for the players. As our sponsor, your company's name would be printed on our shirts. civina vOu valuable publicitv. Of course. our games are not shown on

1.2.5の問題を教えていただきたいです🙇‍♀️

よりも但父母と暮らしたいです。 J acお 29 菜日 Step 2 日本語を参考に, 英文を完成しましょう。 Complete the sentences in English. の モ葉日 1. A: volunteer activities for senior citizens? お年寄りのためにボランティア活動をしたいですか。 B:Yes, of course. 2. A:My dream is to study abroad in France. What is your dream? to improve the health of elderly people. .a Tlom お年寄りの健康を向上させるために働くことを切望しています。 ovdio B: 9nt 19 3. A: There will be more and more senior citizens in Japan. B: for them to live in. 日本が彼らにとって住むのに最高の国になることを望みます。 4. もっと頻繁に祖母に会うことができればなあ。 5. お年寄りのために何がしたいですか。 oweiitgil 1006 TryIt! 「希望·願望」の表現を使って, 祖父[祖母]としてみたいことを書きましょう。 Write about what you want to do with your grandfather or grandmother using expressions for desire and hope. 例 My grandfather is an excellent speaker of English. I want to go on a trip abroad with him someday. I will introduce Japanese pop culture to the people there, and he can explain traditional Japanese customs in English. We can work together to teach people about Japan.