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英検準1級のライティングが毎回悪いです。 1回目 内容 3/4 、構成 1/4 、語い 3/4 、文法2/4 2回目 内容 1/4、構成1/4、語い3/4、文法3/4 こんな感じで毎回ライティングの点数が1番低いです。 2回で共通しているのは、構成が... 続きを読む

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Youtubeで√tanxの積分を見ていたら、画像の赤線部のような記号が出てきました。これがなんの記号なのか教えて欲しいです。

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3 次の対話文は,中学生の友里 (Yuri) と留学生のニック (Nick) が What kind of rice ball do you 何の種類のお茶が like the best? という調査 (survey) の結果 (result) を見ながら話しているときのものです。 これを読 んで、あとの問いに答えなさい。 好き? Yuri Hi, Nick. Do you eat rice balls? Nick: Yes, I do. I'm on the soccer team at school. After practice, I sometimes feel hungry and want something to D(e convenience store to get rice balls. foods. Yuri : What kind of rice ball do you like the best? Nick: I like tuna-mayo the best. Why do you ask me? Yuri My teacher did a survey about that in my class last week, and here are results. Forty students answered the question. 4/41/ クイズの答え Wow, forty percent of students like tuna-mayo the best. ). At those times, I often go to a Rice balls are one of my favorite Japanese Nick : Yuri: Yes, and twelve students prefer mentaiko That is the second largest number. 2人 () rice ball b the Nick: I like sake, too. It's not [as/popular as mentaiko, but two more students like it than kombu. Well, how about you, Yuri? しかし2人の生徒はこんぶより 好きだと言うえっ あなたは? Yuri: My favorite kind of rice ball is umeboshi but it's the least popular in my class. Nick I can't eat umeboshi. I don't like it because it's too sour for me. 食べたことない Yuri: Really? I like umeboshi. There is a big ume tree in the garden at my house. Nick: Yes, I know that. When I visited your house in March, I 4 (see) the tree. It 3月 had a lot of blossoms. We were looking at the blossoms from the kotatsu in your practice the least in ... ...で最も~でない put ~を入れる (過去形も同じ) feet fall 落ちる bear fruit 実をつける honey はちみつ Why don't you ~? ~しませんか。 look forward to ~ 5 10 room then. It was cold outside, but I was 5 (worm) when I put my feet into Cpl, this ユダリはあたないコタツの内にいれぞ the kotatsu. at the ume blossoms from the kotatsu was wonderful. 20 Yuri : I agree. After the blossoms fall, the ume tree at my house bears a lot of fruit every year. My grandmother makes umeboshi from the fruit. She uses a lot of honey when she makes umeboshi, so her umeboshi is not so sour. Nick That sounds interesting. Can I try your grandmother's umeboshi? Yuri: Yes. You'll like umeboshi if you eat one of my grandmother's. Why don't you 25 come to my house after school? I can make you rice balls with my grandmother. I'll make your favorite one and my favorite one. Nick Thank you. I'm looking forward to eating your rice balls. garden E blossom E into ~の中に agree 賛成する SO それほど try ~を試す 〜を楽しみにする ask ~にたずねる percent パーセント prefer ~を好む sour 酸っぱい foot (足)の複数形 15

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in I think that it necessary for people to go to important historical sites in order to understand history better. There is two reason. Firstly, I think all of us. have know what was happened in the past. Visiting have interest - to can historical sites will be a good chance history. Secondly, by visiting historical places, we think about our future. These are two reasons Think people need to go to important historical sites. I understand history better. is in order to Date to

どうしてもお願いしたいです。お願いします。こう言う文全然わからないんです。答えをお願いします。できれば解説もあるとありがたいです。

2 次の中学生の敏夫 (Toshio)と雅子 (Masako)と留学生のボビー(Bobby) の夏休み中の会話文を読ん で、あとの問いに答えなさい。 Bobby: Hi, Toshio. Our city has the Himawari Festival for three days every August, right? Masako told me about it. That's right. I go to the festival every year. Toshio: Bobby: Toshio: Bobby: Toshio: That's nice. So, you went to the festival on August 21, right? (B) Right. Bobby: So, the festival won't start on Toshio's birthday this year. Masako: Right. I will go with my brother on the second day this year. The music club in our city will have a concert. They will play music from 10:40 to 11:00 in the morning. Their performances are wonderful. My brother and I enjoy their concert at the festival every year. We love music. I play the flute, and he plays the guitar. Bobby: Sounds nice! I love music, too! Toshio: Bobby, you play the piano very well. Last Thursday, I listened to your piano performance at your house. I really enjoyed it. And your brother plays the violin, right? Yes. My father plays the violin, too. And my mother plays the piano. Everyone in my family loves music. Then, let's go to the Himawari Festival together and enjoy the concert! Can your family come? Bobby: (C) How about you, Toshio? Toshio: Well, the second day is Saturday this year. You know, I'm on the school baseball team. We have practice every Saturday, so I can't go with you. I'm sorry. I will go to the festival with my parents and my sister on the first day. Bobby: Masako: Who do you usually go to the festival with? (A) With my parents and my sister. Every year, we join the festival on the first day. Last year, it was on my birthday, so my sister bought a nice bag for me at the festival. Masako: OK. Bobby: Well, can we enjoy any food at the festival? Toshio: Sure. You can eat your favorite food there.. Bobby: My favorite food? Do you mean my favorite Japanese food? Toshio: Yes. Guess what. Bobby: Toshio: (D) Well, is it sushi or sukiyaki? No. Masako, you said that you had it with your family last Sunday. Masako: Oh, I had yakisoba for lunch and oden for dinner that day, but we can't eat oden at the festival. We can eat () at the festival, right? Right! You can enjoy it at the festival! Bobby: Toshio: 5 10 15 25

エが間違えの理由を教えてください。

22D1S SAT OF 応用 llow) MOLIET 問1 地図を見て、次の対話文の空欄に入れるのに最も適当なものを、 ア~エのうちから選び,記号で答えなさ い｡ 対話をしている2人は★印のところにいるものとします。 A: Excuse me. Could you (地図) tell me the to the post office? One wa B: A: I see. Thank you very much. 7 Go down this street to the bank and turn right at that corner. You'll find it right across the street from the bank. 1 Go along this street to the end of the street. Then turn left. It'll be on your right. Go down this street and turn left at the second corner. Soon you'll find it on the left. I Go along this street to the bank and turn left at that corner. You'll find it on the right. park book- store post office way bank super market TH (I) station

下から4行目、the Omega Advance line は訳だとオメガアドバンス社でしたが、lineを調べても会社という意味はなかったのですが、このlineはどういう意味で使われているのですか？

T1-46 Questions 65 through 67 refer to the following conversation and list. W: Our printer isn't working as well as it used to. The lines and characters don't appear sharply on the page. M: I noticed that too. Everything looks like it has a shadow. W: It's good enough for internal documents, but it could make a bad impression when we send letters to clients. M: You're right. Well, the warranty on it expired last year. We should probably start looking for a new one. W: I was thinking the same thing. I'd recommend something from the Omega Advance line. I left their brochure on your desk. I don't remember the name of the model, but the second cheapest one looks like it would best meet our needs.

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I don't think scare people's salaries should be based on their job performance. I have two reasons. In the first place, It should be changed from their performance to age. As they get older, many people will have their family, so they need a lot. of money. If their salavies base on age, they can live in peace. In the Second place, some people don't have the skills. For example, people who have disability may not have enough skills. If their salaries be based on r their age, they can't get enough money. Last of all I think people's salaries had better be based on their age. It has a lot of benefit than being based on their job performance. Mary people can live in peace