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英検の英作文の添削をお願いしたいです。 問題 Agree or disagree: Japanese companies should require employees to use English in their workspace. 答え I disagree J... 続きを読む

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英検準1級の英作文の添削をお願いします。 Points Curriculum Globalization Pressure on students Quality of teaching

Date No. lopic: Agre or disage: High school education in Japan needs to be ingroved with the idea that high school education in Japan needs agree to be improved. I hare twe reasens to support my opinion Tn terms of curiculun and glebalizatign. Fist. high schooleducation shauld change because Seciety in Jpan is shiting For exaasle, science techndogy improves mare thse deys,. 11 So Students iill get along with them in the fataure Therefore. they should study abast sicnce technelogy such as pogroning a and robots, Second, studants heve to Communicate foreigners becauce the number of oppes that. they Comect To forignare increases recertly. for eromple, people in Japen work with them, Student need not ony Ernglish skille bat alo acknonlager abant foreign Countries' culture. For these reasons, high school education in Japan hare to think about Curicatum and globalization To improve

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英検準1級の英作文の添削をお願いします。見にくいところがあれば言ってください。 Points Effect on work Social lives Shared interests Personal relationships

Date No. Topici Agree or disagree : The Internet has made people mere Sacialy isolated I disagree with the idea that the Irntenet has made people more- Socielly isolafed.T have two ressons to suppoct my opinon 8 in terms of shered interests and personal relationship. Fist. people Can Cantact with other peple who have same a interests, For exaple. peaple search other people and share a lot of inforermtion aboust their interests. It is impor tant 10 tor them to erevbt from i solation. Second pesele ron keep in tauch with other people esily. 10 For instence, worker contact wirth other workers on the Internet lo wehon they are diferent place each other. I think pegple (0 who can Connect the Internet would not be iselated. a For these reasons, the Intemet has not mode people more Socialy isalated

英検準1級の英作文の添削をお願いします。見にくいところがあれば言ってください。 Points Health Male-female equality Salaries Work-life balance

Date No Topic Topic: Do componies need to improve the way they treat their wates? | think Companies need to impreve the way they treat their workers. - I have twe reasens to support my opinion in termns of health and Salaries. Fist. Companies shauld adeiisate their workers' health. 2 If workers have an illnes and canmot wack esily, a lot. of. (2 Companies wald be Coniesed to manage. Companies need to do 経営こど?) health check for workne health. It is good for (o Companies and I Workers to check halth. I think this is an adrontage each other. 12 Second, Cormpanies have to raise salaries, Some Workers de not lc be paid salaries for extra tasks, They will be very ticed and ? have an illes, It is not good for them fo work hard. 12 For these reasons, Companies have (mprove the wey they treat their workers.

英検準1級の英作文の添削をお願いします。 Points Construction costs Effect local people Spending by visitors The environment

Date No. Topic: Is it a good idea tar local govegnments to build touist sires, Such as theme parks and museums? I think it is nota good idea for local (3 governments to build touriT sites, sach as theme parks and museums. I have two reasons 7 to support my opinion in fems of construction Costs and the envinanmant. fist, bilding taurist sites Cost alot. For erample, local garernents shodd buy vast soil To bild taurist sies. Maay loal (6 govemments do net have rmuch raeonty because they have a lot of a things to 'de for local peple, so it is diffi ault to bil tourist sites. (2 Secende it is not good for the environment. If tourist sits are bilt, the envionmert would be boken down such as 破増さんら deferestation. I think proterting the_ environment is more inportant ? than building tarist sites. For these reasons, local goverments should not build tovist sites. la a

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Dat: No. Topic. Ague discgre There, sthould be stricter censership of the Intenet ar I I agree with the idea that there should be stricter censorship of the Intemet.I have two reasons to support my opinion in Terws of 14 secwity and viclence. First, the Intenet secarity shauld be high quality. Many people Contuse the Internet Virus these days, o the Internet secmrity have to be enbanced to protect the computer from virus. It is important for people To use the Compiter mae Contoctabdly. Secand. the rurdber of ballying is incensing on the Intemet For esample, o person is bullied on twirer by Bullying pople do not be krowm their name Tn public. other people いじめト々 Jepanere government have to make a new law to purish these people, For these reasons, consorshipothe Internet should be strit.

英検準1級の英作文の添削をお願いします。見にくいところがあれば言ってください。

Date No. Topic: Agre or disage : Lite in Japan is becoming more strertal I dsagee with the idea that lüfe in Japan is becaming more strest.l. I have two rensons to support my opinion in terms of househald applianes and health Firt, hausehold appliances are becaming more usetul so Our lives will be convenient. for erample, there is an auto cleaner. We do not have to clean aurselves because auo cleaners can clean theicelves. Thanks to them, we can have free time a to rest. 2 Secnd hedty focd is increosing these doys, s0 the nunber of peple have an illnes decrease. If we have an illness, we will not die e medical Technelogy is better than pact. It is goad for us to live Commericanly. becans 3 For these resons, life in Japan is not becoming. more stresstal.