とても拙い英文で申し訳ないのですが、ピンクの斜め線の部分はどう直したら良くなるでしょうか？ タイトルは　rush hourの交通渋滞をどう減らすか　というものです 2枚目が模範解答です お願いします🙇‍♀️

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赤で印つけてある部分のwhichの役割が分かりません 関係代名詞ですか？ 前置詞➕関係詞で関係副詞の役割ですか？

bike green Is and it "he ure to agen. ent is every 2014, while bikes rose from 14,000 to 36,000. That's two cars for bike-and if trends continue, more people will be cycling than ( 11 ) into central London (during the morning rush hour in 2019 But London's cycling infrastructure needs to catch up. Over in the Netherlands, the Dutch are already reaching the point at which bike traffic is overtaking car traffic. In Amsterdam, 48% of city-center trips are by bike, while in the of the large northern city of Groningen, bikes are used for 61% of all trips. core 65 るよ

至急お願いいたします🚨 生物の質問です。 ミトコンドリアの経路についての説明だと思うのですが、電子オーバーフローモデルと電子分布モデルの違いを教えていただきたいです。 また、どういう仕組みなのか、何故このように電子が流れるのかも教えていただきたいです。 UQ poolはユ... 続きを読む

(A) Electron overflow model (considered out-of-date) Alt UQ pool Alternative oxidase inactive. Alt No alternative pathway activity Cytochrome pathway unsaturated Cyt (B) Electron distribution model (reflects current thinking) UQ pool Cyt Alternative pathway active Cytochrome pathway saturated Alt Alternative oxidase active Alt UQ pool Cyt Cyt Figure 14.33 Two models for regulation of electron flow through the alternative oxidase. (A) In the electron overflow model, no appreciable electron transfer through the alternative pathway takes place until electron flow through the cytochrome pathway is at or near satu- ration. This could result from the effects of respirato- ry control, if the rate of mitochondrial ATP produc- tion exceeds its rate of utilization in the cytosol, or from some externally imposed stress, such as low temperature. Under such circumstances, the UQ pool becomes sufficiently reduced to allow electrons to flow through the alternative oxidase, the latter re- quiring that the UQ pool be 40% to 60% reduced to attain significant activity. (B) In the electron distribu- tion model, the alternative and cytochrome path- ways both show significant activity at low levels of UQ pool reduction, and electrons are distributed be- tween the two pathways on the basis of the relative activities of each pathway. The activity of the alter- native oxidase under these circumstances is thought to be regulated by the action of a-keto acids and by reduction/oxidation of the intermolecular disulfide bond, as well as by additional regulatory mecha- nisms not yet characterized.

この日本語訳合っていますか？

問題 次の英文を読んで、 あとの問いに答えなさい。 A world-famous structure stands in Barcelona, Spain. It has been under construction for more than a century since 1882. It is an odd-shaped church named the Sagrada Familia. Funded only by donations from church members and admission fees, it has taken many years to construct. The architect who designed the church is Antonio Gaudi (1852-1926). He took over the head architect's position in 1883, when he was just 31 and almost unknown. Gaudi did not stick to the original plans. Instead, he changed the design drastically. Without Gaudi, the Sagrada Familia would be ( 2 ) different from what it is today. Gaudi was born into a craftsman's family in Catalonia, Spain. When he was a child, he had poor health and was not able to play outside. Instead of running around with his friends, he had to sit still and alone. He spent most of his childhood observing the nature around him such as plants, flowers, and insects, with his keen eye and strong curiosity. This experience had a great influence on his art. (1) 下線部①を日本語にしなさい。 彼が3歳でほとんど知らされていなかったときにアーティストのポジションをとった。

（4）の答えがthe problemでしたがsolving the problemではダメでしょうか？

humans. "We were able to identify one of the many molecular features that likely shape behavior," she adds. ** hol boquete es Though the origins of the dog/human partnership remain unknown, it's becoming increasingly clear that each species has changed (during our long years header The physical differences between a basset hound and wolf are obvious, but dogs have also changed in ways that are more than skin (or fur) deep. One recent study shows how by bonding with us and learning to work ogether with humans, dogs may have actually become worse at working together Their pack lifestyle and mentality appear to be reduced and are far as a species. less prevalent even in wild dogs than in wolves. But, Yale's Laurie Santos says, dogs may have compensated in other interesting ways. They've learned to use humans to solve problems. "Several researchers have presented dogs and wolves with an impossible problem (e.g., a puzzle box that can't be opened or a pulling tool that stops working) and have asked how these different species react," Santos explains. Researchers have found that wolves try lots of different trial and error tactics to solve the problem - they get at it physically. But at the first sign of trouble, dogs do something different. They look back to their human companion for help. This work hints that dogs may have lost some of their physical problem-solving abilities in favor of more social strategies, ones that rely on the unique sort of cooperation

英語　関係詞 下の2つの文にそれぞれ使用している文法の違いがわかりません。 ①I was irritated by 【the way】 they spoke to me. ②An important aspect of computer languages is 【th... 続きを読む

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Date people I agree with more should become vegetarians in the future. I have two reasons. Firstly, it is bad for the environment to have live stocks. Having live-stacks have many bad prints For instance, farmer have to use large water. By using whater too much, gloval. warming will be increasing. Also, farmer have to make food for animals, so they will use large gas or electric.. Secondly, metabora they eat a • because th lot of wents or fishs. Meat and fish contain ail, so they attect our health badly. Vegitable have less oil, and enough nutrients. Many people will protect their health, and Can live longer. Therefore, it is good for us to become vegetarians. I think we should eat only vegetable.

Scramble 問題集 発展の1～3番を教えて頂きたいです

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英検準1級ライティングなのですが、ここ減点されるなどあったら教えて頂きたいです。

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