英作文の添削をしてもらいたいです。

III brand. 5. Present an ad showing how unique and original the brand is right after viewers have watched a scary film. Answer in a short essay between 120 and 150 words in English. The full score for this essay is 20 points. Newspapers and news programs frequently report negative events. There are some people who think that it would be better if more good news was reported. What is your opinion? Explain your opinion and give at least two reasons to support it.

下から15行目のthrow whichのthrow とはなんですか？

y II Day 12 15 5 Negro Leagues Baseball was a collection of major and minor-league baseball leagues that were the first to showcase black team sports on intertwined with the African American and American experience not only a national scale. Launched in 1895, the leagues, as with jazz, became as a cultural element, but as a lucrative business endeavor. team The leagues were not under central management, and schedules and composition League, were changeable from season to season. Appearance and disappearance of leagues was common: the National Colored Baseball for instance, collapsed after only two weeks of operations. Latins, especially Cubans, were also a significant presence on teams. In these ways, the Negro Leagues were quite similar to their white counterparts which would eventually consolidate into Major League Baseball. Blacks near the beginning of the 20th century had only a fraction of whites' purchasing power, so the emergence of the Negro Leagues might have seemed unlikely. However, the Negro Leagues had two main draws that accounted for its business success. The first was a deep reserve of athletic talent. After blacks were formally excluded from white leagues in the 1880s, the Negro Leagues were the sole organization through which black players could work professionally. The quality of Negro Leagues 20 players was high, and substantiated through exhibition matches between Negro Leagues and Major League teams: over the years, both had their fair share of wins and losses in these matches. Another reason for the success of the Negro Leagues was an increasingly affluent black fan base. Driven by American industrialization, blacks were concentrating in major cities such as New York City, Chicago, and Atlanta. Usually barred by custom-and in the South by law-from attending many white entertainment outlets, blacks turned to Negro Leagues games. As a result of these factors, by the 20th century the Negro Leagues were earning a combined millions of dollars. This profitability ended with the desegregation of Major League Baseball. Black fans began attending Major League games, starving the Negro Leagues of its core revenue source. By 1951, the Negro Leagues had ended, although a succession of black star athletes in the Major League had begun.

速読英単語の別冊（解説）を無くしているので5番の解説のページを教えてください。見せてください。お願いします。

Z-KAI [改訂第8版] 速読英単語 Vocabulary Building x Rapid Reading <必修編〉 風早 寛 著 入試出現の95%をカバーする必須 1900語

I wonderで訳が「〜かなあ」になるのは分かるんですが、なぜその後にifがつくか分かりません。ifだと「〜かどうか」という意味で似たような意味なので二重になってると思うんです。that じゃダメですかね。それともこういう形だと覚えた方がいいですか？

(1) It is doubtful whether his (2) I wonder if he will be glad to get my letter. Fred made it clear that he objected to the proposal.

英検準一級の要約問題です。 添削していただけないでしょうか？🙇‍♀️

英検公式サンプル問題 ⚫ Instructions: Read the article below and summarize it in your own words as far as possible in English. ⚫ Suggested length: 60-70 words Write your summary in the space provided on your answer sheet. Any writing outside the space will not be graded. From the 1980s to the early 2000s, many national museums in Britain were charging their visitors entrance fees. The newly elected government, however, was supportive of the arts. It introduced a landmark policy to provide financial aid to museums so that they would drop their entrance fees. As a result, entrance to many national museums, including the Natural History Museum, became free of charge. Supporters of the policy said that as it would widen access to national museums, it would have significant benefits. People, regardless of their education or income, would have the opportunity to experience the large collections of artworks in museums and learn about the country's cultural history. Although surveys indicated that visitors to national museums that became free increased by an average of 70 percent after the policy's introduction, critics claimed the policy was not completely successful. This increase, they say, mostly consisted of the same people visiting museums many times. Additionally, some independent museums with entrance fees said the policy negatively affected them. Their visitor numbers decreased because people were visiting national museums to avoid paying fees, causing the independent museums to struggle financially.

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Onomatopoeia and verbs Lap Roar Click Howl Whimper Crunch Screamed Screech Whir Gurgle Chirp Squeak Splash Panting Clatter Thud Tinkle Clang Flap Murmur Rustle (BONUS use correct form -plain, -ing, -ed) o. The car screeched loudly when it stopped suddenly 1. The gentle waves hhhh at the shore. 2. "Ooowwwww," Sarah loudly when she fell down. 3. The dog is quietly because it is lonely. 4. 5. "Its Mrs. Green Apple!" the girls ! I walked on the icy snow. loudly when they saw the door open! 6. The blender 7. I could hear the small river 8. The little bird 9. as it makes the milkshake. in the background. happily. ! The floor was noisy when I walked on it. 10. Tom made a loud 11. "Wow, that was a long run!" I 12. The dishes when he jumped into the swimming pool. hard. onto the floor. 13. The book dropped onto the floor with a loud_ 14. The wind chime 15. The when the wind blew. gates warned a train was coming.

高校受験を控える弟の英語のテストなのですが、回答がなくて、どなたか回答案をくださりませんか？

7 次の(1),(2)の英文を読んで、それぞれの問いに答えなさい。 (1) ユタカ (Yutaka) とジョージ (George)は, 2人の住むみつば市 (Mitsuba City) について調査し,英語でプレ ゼンテーション(presentation)を行いました。 ユタカがスライド(slide)を使って発表をしています。 Hello, I'm Yutaka. I live in Mitsuba City and have lived there since I was born. There are some big parks in the city, and I often played in them with my friends when I was a child. I like my city very much. people than before. Look at Slide 1. Last month, I saw news about Mitsuba City on TV. It said that our city had fewer This shows the number of people in Mitsuba City. There were more than 300,000 people in 2000. The number became larger until 2010, but after that, it started to decrease. In 2020, about 280,000 people lived there. Why did the number of people become small? To find out the reasons, I read some books and checked some websites on the Internet. I got some ideas. Look at Slide 2. This shows the number of people in Wakaba City and Aoba City. These cities are next to Mitsuba City. You can see that these two cities had more people in 2020 than in 2000. In fact, Wakaba City started some plans to help parents in 2014. For example, parents don't have to pay money when they take their sick children to the hospital. This means parents can take care of their sick children ( A ) worrying about money. In Aoba City, a new train station was built in 2008. Since then, the city has more convenience stores, clothes shops, and restaurants. Living in Aoba City became more convenient, so more people started to live there. Look at Slide 3. You can see the number of each type of shop was larger in 2020 than in 2000. Now, Aoba City has become one of the most popular cities among people. Mitsuba City is a good city, but I don't think it has many attractive points. Parents still have to pay a lot of money to take care of their sick children. Also, there are not many shops and restaurants in the city. I think Mitsuba City should have more attractive points like Wakaba City and Aoba City. I want more people to live in Mitsuba City in the future. Slide 2 Slide 3 (people) 180,000 Covenience Stores 170,000 160,000 Clothes Shops 150,000 Restaurants 140,000 2000 2005 Wakaba 2010 2015 2020 --- Aoba (year) 0 10 20 30 40 50 (number) ■ 2000 m 2020 (注) be born 生まれる play 遊ぶ decrease 減少する in fact 実際は attractive 魅力的な find out take care of ~ news ニュース ~を探り出す ~ 〜の世話をする fewer より少ない website ウェブサイト convenient 便利な point -5-

こんばんは英作文の添削をお願いします！ たくさんの人の意見が欲しいです！ 1、2枚目が下書きでこの文章と点数です 最初で満点をとりたいのでchat GPTを交えて文を書き直しました。不自然な文があったら教えてください！ 明日の午後提出です！

I'm going to talk about an experience that changed my life Was when I studied studying abroad in Niseko, Hokkaido. I stayed for a total of 2 months last summer I made a lot of friends. and this summer. Speaking in both Japanese and English deepened our bond. Even after studying abroad we l are still in touch. We are going to have a reunion in Tokyo on Christmas Actually, I hadn't been good at English before I studied abroad. A friend of mine said "Don't be afraid ". Then to me •get rid of my weakness in English. I had a conversation with my I was able to native teacher in English through the activitities. In these activities, had a We did BBQ, cooked, and went sightseeing. It was d again, I would like to go skiing. lot of fun. If I could study abroad in Niseko to Niseko. You can enjoy Niseko's lifestyle Please yo m

participate ~ competitionってJapanese athletesを修飾していますよね？？また［A of B doing~］といった文章でdoing~がAを修飾することはないですよね？？

304 e delegation of Japanese athletes participating in next month's competition will be accompanied by coaches and other team personnel. delegation [dèligéifon] 名代表団、(権限等の) 委譲 類 delegate (代表者) パート5の語彙問題で出題例のある難語。 E participate [partísapèit] 参加する 名 participation (参加) 関 participant (参加者) attend (出席する、 参加する) パート5の「自動詞 or 他動詞」の問題でも狙われるので、 自動詞で前置詞in を伴う語 法も押さえよう。 類義語の attend は、 「出席する、 参加する 044」の意味では他動詞で 直接目的語を伴う。例 attend a conference (会議に出席する)名詞の participation や関連語の participantも重要 214。 competition [kàmpatifon|kôm-] 名 競技会、コンテスト、競争 (相手) compete (競う) 関 competitor(競争相手) 「競技会」 「コンテスト 153」 「競争相手) 127」といった意味で出る多義語。 accompany [ǝkámpǝni] 同行する入付 同行する、付いてくる、 伴奏する 関 accompanying documents (添付の書類) ●「〜に付いていぐ」 イメージの他動詞で、 能動態なら目的語が必要。 例 The original receipt should accompany all returns. (すべての返品には元の領収書 を添付してください personnel [pò:rsǝnél] 名 職員、従業員、人事部 ● 「職員、従業員」以外に、 「人事部 330」 の意味でも頻出。 つづりの似た personal (個人)との混同にも注意。 来月の競技会に参加する日本の運動選手の代表団には、コーチや他のチ ーム職員が同行する。 4303 304

大至急🚨 音楽の記号ってどうやっておぼえたらいいですか？ 教えてください🙇‍♀️

7 楽譜に用いられる記号と用語 記 PP 号 読み方 ○ピアニッシモ 意 ○とても弱く P ○ピアノ mp ○メゾーピアノ mf ○メゾフォルテ f ○フォルテ ○弱く 8 少し弱く 味 ff cresc. dim. Andante Moderato Allegretto Allegro meno rit. ○フォルティッシモ ○クレッシェンド ディミヌインド アンダンテ モデラート アレグレット アレグロ リタルダンド リテヌート アッチェレランド riten. accel. mossO XY モッソ piu moSSO ピウ モッソ tempo I アッラルガンド テンポ プリモ a tempo ○ア・テンポ poco a poco ポーコアポー allargando ○強く ○とても強く ○だんだん強く だんだん弱し ゆっくり歩くような速さで 中くらいの速さで やや速く 速く だんだん遅く 急に速度を緩めで だんだん速く 少し遅く 強くしながらだんだん遅く 始めの速さに戻る もとの速さで molto assai モルト アッサイ legato レガート animato アニマート espressivo エスプレッシーボ dolce div. ドルチェ ディウィジ tutti トゥッティ 少しずつ 非常に じゅうぶんに なめらかに 動きをもって生と 表情豊か 甘くやわらかに 別れて 全で