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I Oglee with the opihion that peale todtey electuty I have tho reahs for thet. Fst of all, the cot of electHcrty 18 cheaper there doys. Tleretore people can wse thsとhe of it Second of all, Thele ave For cxairple use foo mech a lot of electiory without a lot of devices of electricrty. People need Shart phones, TV ond cleopors. eVeyriylifte of.jpeople I thnf thep a laige abmient 「or these reasois of lekctHerty 13 ised by people

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I aglee with the opinlon thap nore ad mole youkg people are startily thet onh' compohies I have tho rasons for theop. Fet, they can learh move 'akills y gyetienchg big Morks at iheir omn. componies. Brigegng wi th a lof'of worfehs wl Teod to lea Communica tion SFな Secmd I think thet tHhey mil' be iale to mafe hisher Mohey if they hope to yate a ot of mohey For there reaohs people mahage wll inchease. have oun compahies . Most people tehd to (92件)

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