英検一級のライティングの添削をお願いしたいです。 Should the Japanese government encourage more immigration? というトピックで書きました。よろしくお願いします。

The Japanese government should encourage more immigration Problems such as lack of diversity, Japanese companies retreating from the world declining birth rate 39 there is a because market, and aging population with a can be solved by increasing immigration. Japan, although it is one of the advanced countries, lack of diversity. Except of big cities like Tokyo, there are only few foreigners. I think this is a set back to Japan while other countries are stepping foward by changing its own system, Japan is refusing to make a change to its old style, and I believe this is because Japan doesn't have abundant. perspectives. foreign countries to. By encouraging more immigration, they can provide many different views and stimulate Jahanese people. as of what does other countries. a image Japanese companies are retreating from the world market. Many Companies in Japan are producing overeng ineered expensive products that only targets Japanese customers and it is losing its power in other countries : If Japan accepts more immigrants Japanese companies. will be able to get detailed regire to their product and stay in the world market. Aging population and a declining birth rate is a huge problem in Japan right now. Because of it, companies are losing workers and young people will have to saffer with a lot of taxes in the future. Encouraging immigration can increase population and solve. these problems more By encouraging more immigrations, many problems that Japan is facing can be solved.

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22. My foreign friends ()()() life in Japan. 私の外国人の友達は、日本での生活について知りたがっている。 23. You should () the weather ( )(a) when you plan a trip. 旅行を計画する時には、天気を考慮に入れるべきだ。 24. Kate got up early ( )( ) she ( ) catch the first train. ケイトは始発列車に間に合うように早起きした。 25. Our teacher ( )(p)( ) students. 私たちの先生は生徒に対して忍耐強い. 26. Anime() an important ( )( ) Japanese youth culture. アニメは日本の若者文化において、重要な役割を果たしている. 27. I()()() buya new car. 私は新車を買う余裕がない. 28. She can speak French and German, ()()() English. 彼女は、英語は言うまでもなく、フランスとドイツ語も話せる。 29. Jim began to watch the soccer game on TV ( )( )( ) to bed. ジムは寝ないで(寝る代わりに) テレビでサッカーの試合を見始めた。 30. John had to ( )( )( ) the hard work. ジョンはきつい仕事を我慢しなければならなかった. SHA

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どうして、スパルタ市民はヘイロータイの氾濫を防ぐために貴金属貨幣の使用を禁止したのですか？

80 3 ポリスのなかでも奴隷制度がもっとも発達したアテ ネ(イオニア系)では、個人所有の奴隷がふつうであ 家内奴隷 農業奴隷として った。その数は総人口の3分の1にものぼり さいくつ もちいられたほか, 手工業や銀山の採掘などにも多数従事させられた。 アテネとならび領土の広いスパルタでは, ドーリア系である1万人たらず のスパルタ市民が, はるかに多数の非ドーリア系の被征服民を奴隷身分の農 民とし, 農業に従事させた。 彼らをヘイロータイ (ヘロット)といい, 商工業 heilotai helot perioikoi に従事するペリオイコイ (周辺民) と同様, スパルタ市民に隷属する身分であ き きんぞく った。スパルタ市民は多数を占めるヘイロータイの反乱を防ぐため、 貴金属 貨幣の使用を禁止したり, 持ち分地を公平に分配するなどして, 市民団内部 かへい の平等を徹底し, 結束を高めた。 さらに市民の団結が外国からの影響でくず れないように 他国との自由な行き来を禁止する鎖国政策をとった。 Lykurgos リュクルゴスの制と呼ばれる, このような特殊な体制を前6世紀半ばまでに 5 アテネとスパルタ ●

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Unit 長文問題 睡眠がもたらすカ (1)Perhaps, 1 Do you ever fall asleep during class? What happens? your teacher tells you how to behave in class. How about at home? Do you ever take naps? How do you feel afterward? You will be happy Many scientists now say that 1 (read) the following information. You must be so catching a few z's can improve your performance. (2) happy to hear this, so let's continue. 2 Actually, this is important news for people who have jobs that require high levels of concentration. Can you think of such jobs? Surgeons, hospital staff (work) on the night shift, and air traffic controllers are just a few. These people must focus on their jobs at all times. Concentrating is so important in their profession. A lack of focus may cause serious accidents. 3 In the United States, a group of scientists got together and experimented on (two groups of university students. One group was asked to study the names of 50 countries and the flags of those countries for 5 hours in a row. (do) the same, but they took a (3) The other group was asked short nap after three hours. Results got from these experiments were simple and clear. Which group had better results? By now, you should know. The second group had much better results. The first group remembered about 45% of the information, but the second group got close to 70% correct. The scientists decided (repeat) the experiment several times on different people, but the results were always the same. Taking short naps improved people's memories. 1 Target ① 不定詞・動名詞 ② 助動詞 ③分詞 4 Sleeping can help people improve their performance, but the best way to deal with (become) sleepy during the day is to get enough sleep the night before. You may like to sleep in class, but I have a piece of advice for you. Get plenty of sleep the night before. (4) Getting enough sleep will give you lots of energy to spend at school. You need energy to learn and play. Lots of learning and playing will give you a good night's sleep. Do you ever 問 1 | 不定 適切な表現を <要約文〉 することがあり か? fall asleep behave 振る舞う take naps after ward その後 following o catching a few z's うとうとすること Do you of scientis best way require 〜を必要とする concentration surgeon on the night shift 夜勤で air traffic controller 交通管制官 focus on 〜 〜に集中(する a lack of ~の不足 cause 引き起こす get together 協力する experiment t in a row 続けて by now そろそろ sleep. deal with ~ 〜に対処する 問2 1 (4 plenty of たくさんの 問3 (1) (2) (3) (4) 1 S

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and remember There have been suggestions that the growth of o the brains of children is not steady, but occurs suddenly, each period of rapid growth ( 2 ) associated with a particularly important developmental or intellectual stage. These stages could

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350 351 その少年は, (the boy/ arms / her / asleep / The pianist ( 1 whose (3) wears found! long hair is my girlfriend. 2 with (4) has 352 あの赤い服の女性があなたのことを知りたがっていたよ。 The (was/ woman / in /curious / red) to know abo

英作文です. 文法や単語のスペルが合っているか教えて頂きたいです ˊᵕˋ； また、こっちの表現の方が良いみたいなのがあれば、教えて頂きたいです. 宜しくお願いします💍 ⸒⸒ 毎朝英作文を書くようにしているのですが、字が朝だからなおさら汚すぎるので、字を入力してます ... 続きを読む

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2 東京都内のある地域を訪れることにした Hiroto と Mike は, インターネットの画面を見ながら話 をしている。 (A) 及び (B) の中に,それぞれ入る語句の組み合わせとして正しいものは、 右 のページのア〜エのうちではどれか。 ただし、 右のページのⅡIは、二人が見ている, 東京都内のある地 域の施設別来訪者数を示したグラフである。