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九州大学英語2019年の英作文の添削をお願いします🙇‍♀️ 大問4が要約と英作文、5が和文英訳です!🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️

〔4〕 九州大-理系前期 Read the following newspaper article and follow the instructions below. (36) 16 2019年度 英語 in Engligi taul" According to the Kanagawa Prefectural Police Station, a 20-year-old female university student caused a traffic death. The student was riding on a power- She moved off from an assisted bicycle when the accident happened. intersection and started riding on the sidewalk. At that moment, a 77-year-old lady was walking on the sidewalk and moved toward the bicyclist. The student hit the lady. The collision caused the lady to fall and strike her head. She was transported to hospital, but died of her injuries two days later. At the time of the incident, the student was apparently holding a smartphone in her left hand and a drink in her right while steering the power- assisted bike. Moreover, she had an earphone in her left ear. Therefore, police arrested the student for breaking the new law and riding recklessly. Police are investigating whether the student noticed that the old lady was walking toward her. They suspect that she was not paying sufficient attention because she was operating her smartphone right up until the collision. Her court appearance date has not been decided yet. The Mainichi, December 16, 2017 Instructions: Write two well-developed paragraphs in English. In the first paragraph, summarize the main points of the newspaper article above in lo approximately 100 words. Use different vocabulary and sentence structure from the original passage as much as possible. In the second paragraph, write your opinion about what should be done to reduce accidents like this in approximately 50 words. hosidinlong unich lor, condadnoah

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英語 高校生

高1です 間違っているところを教えて欲しいです🥹 (2.3.6.8.10あたり間違っていると思います💧)

[A] 日本語の意味に合うように,( (1) 私の夢は国際連合で働くことです。 My dream is ( ) ( ) for the United Nations. )に適語を入れなさい。 (1) (2) 私を病院に連れていってくれてご親切にありがとうございました。 It was ( ) ( ) you ( )( ) me to the hospital. (2) thank (3) はっきりした目標を定めることは重要です。 It's important ( )() clear goals. (4) 私はアメリカでビジネスを勉強することを望んでいます。 I hope ()()( ) in the United States. (4) (5) 私は健康を維持するために週に2回泳ぎます。 I swim twice a week ( )()(). You were (about/ my health/to/very] (8) to 10) 彼は住む家を探している。 He's looking for a house ( had you sorry a cold (8) 私の健康のことを心配してくれて, あなたはとても親切でした。 ykind/worry). very kind [C] 次の日本語に合うように 従いなさい。 各3点 9) きみの事故のことを聞いて残念に思っている。 I'm sorry ( )( ) about your accident. 各3点 )()(). hoiles Lanh to (5) To keep [B] 日本語の意味に合うように,( )内の語(句) を並べかえなさい。 各3点 (6) 私たちは健康について学ぶべきことがたくさんあります。 learn a We (a lot of /about/have/learn/things/to) good health. (6) have to lot of things about (7) あなたが先週末風邪だったと聞いて気の毒に思います。 I'm (a cold/ heÁr/ had/ sorry/th / that / you) last weekend. to hear that (7) tokemoto (10) (3) to to To study (9) holis about my health. に適切な語を入れ英文を完成させなさい。 指示がある場合は指示に work to live take decide Chatsw business fit hear him

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