英作文の添削をしてもらいたいです。

III brand. 5. Present an ad showing how unique and original the brand is right after viewers have watched a scary film. Answer in a short essay between 120 and 150 words in English. The full score for this essay is 20 points. Newspapers and news programs frequently report negative events. There are some people who think that it would be better if more good news was reported. What is your opinion? Explain your opinion and give at least two reasons to support it.

仮定法の問題です。教えてください。

日本語に合うよ 鳥のように空を飛ぶことができればなあ。 英文を書きなさい。 (6点×2=12点) I 2. 彼の業務は1カ月2,000ポンドに値する。 fly in the sky like a bird.

英語の関係代名詞についてです！ プリントの問題を解いたのですが、間違っているでしょうか？💦 間違っていたら教えてほしいです🙇🏻‍♀️ よろしくお願いします🙏🏻

3.[]から適切な語を選び, 対話文を完成させなさい。 (2点×5=10点) (1) A: Did you watch the figure skating championship last night? (優勝した女の子は一生懸命 B: Sure. The girl ( who (2) A: ( How ウォン トレインドウ won the championship must have trained hard! トレーニングした に違いない。) ) was the online concert you watched yesterday? B: It was great. I really enjoyed it! (昨日見たオンラインコンサートはどうでしたか。) (3) A: Jack, could you come down and help me ? B: Sorry, Mom. I can't hear ( What (4) A: What kind of cat do you have? グレー you said. It's too loud out there. (言ったことが聞き取れませんでした。) B: I have a gray cat (which ) has blue eyes. (5) A: Did you enjoy your school trip to London? B: Yes, I did. The people (whom [how/what/who/whom/which ] (私は青い目をした灰色のネコを飼っています。 I met there were very kind and friendly. フレンドリィー (私がそこで会った人たちはとても親切でフレンド リーでした。)

②に入る単語がwhereになる意味がわかりません。場所を意味する文なのかも分かりません😭

A h A Humpback whales visit California to feed in the summer and autumn before migrating south 15 to reproduce off the coast of Mexico. They are the world's most endangered among their species. An estimated 35,000 to 40,000 remain in the wild. The Marine Mammal Center says the main threats facing humpback whales are strikes from ships and getting caught in fishing and waste equipment. The Whale Safe system is designed to identify and protect several different species, 20 including humpback, blue, fin and gray whales. It uses three methods to do so. First, it uses devices that float - known as buoys - to record sounds the whales make. Second, it uses computer models to process current and historical ocean data to predict where the whales are most likely to be. Third, it permits trained observers and citizens to report whale sightings through a mobile app. Developers of the system say the expansion of Whale Safe to San 25 Francisco demonstrates that the system can be successfully used in more places in the United States and around the world. 年度 一般前期 1月30日 Jeff Boehm is a leader of the Marine Mammal Center. He said the Whale Safe system combines the latest technology with thoughtful conservation efforts "to create a solution to reduce risk to whales." Boehm added, "This is ( 2 ) tech meets Mother Nature for the benefit mads S 30 of marine life." avili .1 (0) 英語 Douglas McCauley is director of the Benioff Ocean Science Laboratory. He said in a Lilline of whales hv ship strikes is "an avoidable problem." "We can't any は、

英検準1級のライティングなんですが添削していただけませんでしょうか？ 字も汚くて綴りもおかしいところ多いとは思うんですがお願いします🙇‍♀️

(2) Write an essay on the given TOPIC. KIOT Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. ●Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words 081-021 4 TOPIC Do you think print newspapers and magazines will disappear in the future? POINTS OSpeed of news ement Consumer preferences ●Cost effectiveness Health issues 大問4 英作文

（2）なのですが、 「それは青いものほど高くありません」 という意味になりますでしょうか？ ご回答よろしくお願いします( . .)”

(1) It's as cool as blue (2) It isn't more one expensive than blue one.

この問題の答えがwhichだとダメな理由がわからないです。 どの猫→目が青い では通じないんですか？

合ってるか見て欲しいです！

☐ 1. The actor is in his 60s now, but his acting is as good ( 1 as ②so 3 for ) ever. (実践女子大) Athan □ 2. マイケルは3年前ほど忙しくはない。 語順整序] Michael (asso/was/not/is/busy/he) three years ago. is not busy so as (東邦大) he was 3. He has as ( ) you. ①many as books 3 more books as (川崎医療福祉大) many books as ④more than books □ 4. これほど面白い映画を見たことはありません。 (京都光華女子大) I (a/as movie / have never/funny/so/seen) this one. have never seen 5. I like the blue coat better. I think it's much prettier, but it costs ( so as funny a movie ) the (慶應義塾大) brown coat. ①as much twice 3 twice as much as more than the twice twice more than

赤線の英語の意味が分かりません！(特にmy last のところ) 教えていただきたいです！お願いします。

* *On the days when Leonard goes to the *day-care centre, I knit. I plan to finish the scarf for our fifty-third wedding anniversary. The scarf is almost finished, and when I hold it to the light, diamonds shine through. I shake the wool, drop a stitch, try to find it again. Was I more in love with Leonard than he was with me? I have so many questions... and I cannot ask any of them now. 'It's finished,' I tell my niece, *putting the scarf *round my neck. 'It looks good,' she said, 'if you don't look too closely. Is it a gift?' Yes. My last.' On the morning of our anniversary I kiss Leonard and give him the scarf. I know he will not speak, but while I am putting the scarf round his neck, (3)I find that I am still hoping. The scarf is as crooked as my fingers. It's full of holes long thin holes, little **round holes. Leonard puts his hand up and touches the wool, and for one short moment, his eyes come alive again. Yes,' he wants to tell me. 'Yes,' he wants to say. "The scarf is soft. The scarf is blue. The scarf is us.'

分詞構文についてよく分かりません。 分詞構文とはなにか、どういう時に使って、どういう文法事項があるのか教えてください。

23 注意すべき 分詞が動詞と接続詞の両方の働きをして副詞句をつくる。 分詞構文の表現に注意しましょう。 ●分詞構文の意味: 〈時〉「~するとき」 <理由> 「~なので」 〈付帯状況〉 「~しながら, 〜すると」 Hearing the bell, the girl went home.鐘の音が聞こえると,少女は帰宅しました。 現在分詞 〈時〉 主節の主語と分詞の意味上の主語は同じ。d asolexes She walked along the river, looking up at the night sky. 主節の主語と分詞の意味上の主語は同じ。 現在分詞 〈付帯状況> 彼女は夜空を見上げながら, 川沿いを歩きました。 his mother Beaten by a weak team, they lost confidence.na aboon v 過去分詞 〈理由> 主節の主語と分詞の意味上の主語は同じ。 弱いチームに負かされたので、 彼らは自信を失いました。 主節の動詞の表す時よりも前の出来事を表すときには,完了形の分詞構文が用いられます。 ヒマ disen 自 ●完了形の分詞構文 Having finished the book, the boy seemed bored. 本を読み終えたので、その少年は退屈そうでした。 分詞構文の前に接続詞がおかれることもあります。 Jijidadai <接続詞+ 分詞構文〉 While staying in Tokyo, they visited both Tokyo Tower and Tokyo Sky Tree. 東京に滞在している間に、 彼らは東京タワーと東京スカイツリーの両方を訪れました。 <with +名詞+分詞〉 は「~が･･･の状態で」「~しながら」 という意味の 〈付帯状況〉を表します。 ■ 付帯状況 ameldong La He was listening to me with his eyes closed. 彼は目を閉じながら私の話を聞いていました。 brid) He kept 「his eyes were closed という状態と共に」 と考えます。 分詞構文を用いた次のフレーズを確認しておきましょう。dqangofoda quake □ judging from ~~から判断すると□talking [speaking] of ~ □weather permitting 天気が許せば strictly [frankly] speaking ~と言えば 厳密に[直に言う