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A Review the text and fill in the blanks. 1. Steve's idea of learning Japanese: Learning Japanese is a piece of ( 2. Steve's confusing experiences: Wasei-eigo ). The situation is much more ( ). Steve thought it was ... apple juice a white shirt a very large house サイダー ワイシャツ マンション ホットケーキ フライドポテト ブレンド (confused) (confused) (confused) 3. What did Steve learn? ( ) is not a bad thing: it's a first ( In English, they say... soda pop ( ) ) shirt ) ) ( ) ) in learning something new. B You are having trouble learning English. What kind of advice would Steve give you? a. I understand your feelings, but there's nothing that I can do for you. b. Don't be afraid of confusion and making mistakes. c. Don't waste your time learning English. Try to find something more EA DOY interesting. Complete the summary by filling in the blanks. would be (1. Steve is a 16-year-old American boy on homestay in Japan. He thought Japanese ) because many words come from English. He had several confusing experiences. He discovered that English words written in katakana sometimes mean something (2. ) in Japanese. For example, means a (3. very large house. Learning Japanese can be (4. ) in learning something new. is the first (5. ), not a ). However, he feels that confusion [condominium / different / easy / step / confusing ]

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I think many cbuildings will collect rainwater and then use : it in various ways. I I. have two reasons. Firstly, they can cut down costs. Thesedays, Utility bills is very expensive, so many buildings pay for it. If they can save rainwater, they will cost symall bills for water. Secondly it is good for environment to do it. Recently, It's short of water, so they should use water efficiently. Therefore, may buildings will collect vainwater to Save costs and protect environment.

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What would you do if you wanted to learn about something? A traditional way is to go to your bookshelf, pick up a dictionary or encyclopedia, and start turning pages. Now, however, you can turn on your computer, connect it to the Internet and start its search program. You just type in some keywords, click "search," and soon you will 5 have what you are looking for. 2 3) It seems as if anything you want to know can be found on the Internet. The range of information you can find on the Net varies from *gossip, to news, to the most advanced technological findings. Furthermore, the information is always fresh. New information is constantly added, past files are re-written, and *news reports are broadcast as they come in. 5) 3 What is being lost, though, is the joy of discovery. In many ways an Internet search is like a package tour. On a package tour, you generally know where you are going and see only what the *tour organizer has selected. Similarly, what you find in the Internet search is controlled by the site's owner or is the result of a computer program. On the other hand, turning the pages of an encyclopedia, as you look up an *entry, is more like wandering through a forest. You may accidentally find something interesting in the entry just next to the one you have been looking for. This may *stir up a new interest, which will eventually lead you into a totally different topic. 248 words>

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I think that it is necessary for people to go to important historical sites in order to understand history better. I have two reasons. First, if I go to important historical sites, Staff of historical sites will talk about history. hearing about history is eaiser understand than reading textbook about history. Second, it is good experience for us to go to important was historical sites. Because I can see tools and wepons was used to catch animals and to collect foods by early people. That's why, I belive that people go to important historical sites to understand history better.

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・20年度第2回 Topic Agree or disagree : More needs to be done to so 98 Point • Accident 116 agree Reason I Crime Food 技術が発達する。 No. •Technology Date 120~150語 be done to improve public safety 2014 125 130 ho 警察官のパトロールや出動によって被害を少なくすることが できる。もしなかったら、たくさんの事件が起こってしょう。 Iona (= 1 7 11 3 11 312/5797 07130 薬の研究は私たちの寿命をのばすことにつながる I agree with more needs to be done To To improve public safety. There are two points to support my opinion. First, there will be less crime, because, police of patrol and they go to the place which happen incidents. I can be less. It it were not for public safety, it would causes crime. Second, technology is improving, Reserchers are able to study a lot by support from our government. For example, medicine's research is Connect to extend our life time and automation's study is easy to our life. So, improving public safely is more convinience than fall into one, I According to the reasons stated above, I think that more needs to be done to improve public safety, And, it become improve public safety is cunvinience

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NO, DATE I don't think that Japan should accept more people from other countries. I have two reasons. First people from other countries have different culture. If they work in Japan, they have to understand Japanese culture. So, Japanese companys can not accept more people from other countries to work. Second, I belived that Japanese people prefer thing made in Japan to thing made, in other countries. Because, most Japanese people likes made in Japan. That's why, I don't think Japan should hire more foregin people. 84語

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[4] Read the instructions and write a well-organized answer in English. (50 points) Partly due to the recent spread of the new coronavirus, some museums, especially small and medium-sized facilities, have been forced to close their doors or restrict admission to their facilities. A survey conducted by the Japan Association of Museums in 2021 revealed the severe business conditions of museums nationwide. ETTU However, museum education* has a lot to offer to the public at large Describe a no single specific thing the museums can offer to the public that contributes to the improvement of their lives. Explain your idea in detail in about 100 English words. onu boycloeb ton as ilsati matave, Notes: 8) esw gnidt slodw add o2 Jom erw zbioresuit lensi nist:95 museum education*: Museum education program means utilizing the resources donese noise aeder moT of the art, science, or history museums, aquariums or bide cobrol ni board nou zoos for formal or informal learning opportunities for the gaibaste pidot robsond sal citizens. bai de noqo ad bluoda inomaisvos d Tom & al 9tedt siqabg sdi 6 nobennoint vom shivong has anoisiluznos }

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次のTopic について、自分の意見とその理由を50 語程度の英文で書きなさい。 Topic :If you had an "Anywhere Door", where would you go? Topic 2: If you could travel in a time machine, when would you go to? Topic 3: Do you think more people will have pets in the future? 55 ☺ If I could travel in a time machine, I want to go to Heian Period. I have two reasons. First. I can watch Helankya. Sei Shenagon and Murasaki Shikibu. I like their essay. so I want to talk with them. For this reason. I want to go to Helan Period 54歳 0 If I had an Second. I want to meet "Anywhere Door", I want to go to Shizuoka. I have two reasons. First I want to eat Local gourment food like Fuzimiya-yakicabo, Second I want to watch the volley match of Hamamatushugakusha high school. But I haven't enough many to ge So I want to go to Shizuoka with anywhere door. ☺ I think more people will have pets in the future. It's because having And having pets make children's pets is good for education. emotions enriching. Also, pet helps relieve children's loneliness. So I think more people will have pete in the future Check! □自分の意見や考えを最初に述べているか。 □その理由を述べているか 理由に対する具体的な事例・事実を述べているか ( つなぎ言葉を効果的に使っているか。 □単語・文法の誤りはないか。 ) words